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Posted: 13 years ago
OS Saiyara

I entered in the hall holding my wife's hand tightly.The hall was crowded with people,.It is very difficult to find some,.I looked around try to find my parents and in laws but was not able to.Suddenly a gush of wind pass through me and my caught the sight of a face which has been haunting me from past 2 years.She too look at me and the world stop for us ,we both kept looking into each other as eyes as the flashes of memories of our moments play in front of us...

Asmaa tera mera hua
khuab ki terha dhua dhua
Asma tera mera hua
Sans ki terha rua rua

I didn't believe i am seeing her after 2 years...but soon i felt a hold on my hand got tight and heard ana my wife speaking"Arman here are they".I quickly avert my gaze and went from there.I felt suffocated there i want to go out from but i cant.I meet my parents but my eyes never leave the sight of her.She was wearing black saarre with red work looking as beautiful as always,her hair open,She was standing with her hub and.How i wish i could get that place...hopelessly i look down..
..as the dance started the partners changes and I got the chance to hold which I want to hold for a life time but I can't.But yes though i can't be with her,I am sure one day or the other we will meet...and that time there will be no hurdle between our love...the thought of meeting her again fill my heart with strage warmth ,we both kept swinging ..till the partner change,while we both are moving away from each other I saw her looking at me,I gave her a smile and she returned teary smile..may be a last smile till we meet again...
Saiyan ye mera tujh mai samya
Saiyara mai saiyara
Saiyra tu saiyara tu sayara
sitaro k jahan mai mila ge ab dubara


Riddima pov
I entered into a big whole where the part was held ,it was a large hall and was crowded with people .There are thousand of people there but still i felt alone,as if i don't have some one.Sid hold my hand tightly and ask me that i am fine or not,he is my husband and my best friend.I nod assuring him me fine.We both enter the hall,in the thousands of people some known and some unknown my eyes caught the glimpse of him.Finally after 2 years i was seeing him but then I saw ana standing right behind him and i look away as I don't even had he right to see him any more

tu jo mila to you hua hogi pori adhori se dua
tu jo gaya to sang le giya mera jina ki her waja



Soon the dance,Sid hold my hands to the dance floor,I kept my hand on his waist,but i didn't feel the spark which i use to have with him...The partners keep changing finally i felt the same touch which i was dying to feel,I look up into his eyes ,he stare into my eyes but then I look down,now our ways are different...That brought the unbearable sadness in me,but can i do some thing about it no I cannot ,I certainly can't..I was helpless,I was coward and i am still the same..That time i didn't stand by him and now I can't.He gave me everything and I can't even stand by him...

tum pe mati..tum se banni
tum se hua hai ha khud pe yakeen...

I felt him moving away from me,I look up and stare into his eyes,his eyes were promising ,he was looking at me as if conveying ,What if we didn't be able to together here we will soon together not here then in heaven.I return the teary smile.I know may be we are not together we can feel the warmth of each other


To jo nai to na sahi ..mai ho yaha tu to bhi hai yahi kahin

*Though the war of two families had separate them but still they will be together nt here then in the heaven*

Leave your precious comment love maria:)
Edited by XxDeansChickxX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
good one dear
u described there feelings very well
n even the song was gud...
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Posted: 13 years ago
yar siapa jidu tak groupbie n a bani tab tak no huperlink pm siapa..!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ria_PM_Acount

yar siapa jidu tak groupbie n a bani tab tak no huperlink pm siapa..!




yar plz leave your comments and press like button:P
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiii
Awesome os
Loved it
Sooo sad
Poor ArSh
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice!
felt bad 4 AR!
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful...loved it so much.
Loved the song so much...
Thanks for the pm, take care.
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Posted: 13 years ago
This was really touching.. and i really love this song...

Awesome work..

thanks for the pm..

take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Maria... Really love the OS...so emotional and written too beautiful...I really love this song... Thanks for the PM... Take care

PS: All the best for ur academics 👍🏼

Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!
Maria this OS was outstanding.
The song you wrote was fitted so perfect in AR's situation.
I really loved the way you used the song to describe the hidden emotional turmoil of Armaan and Riddhima.
Gosh!! This OS was sooo beautiful...
I could feel the pain of Armaan and Riddhima for getting seperated amidst the war of their families and how they longed for the company of each other.
I was clean bold when you wrote about the teary smile of Riddhima and both Armaan and Riddhima thinking about being together in some other world.
AR's dance always has a spark of its own...
I loved every single sentence of this OS to the core..
You have done a brilliant job sweety...
Love you
Muah!!
Take care!

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