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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#411

Hey dear nice OS Plz counti...
Y ARSH separate what the reason of fight . Anyways nice
Specially Peter gay part.
Sorry for late response thanks 4 pm.
Thanks for ARSH version.

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#412

awesome OS Maria!
gr8 piece of writing! loved it!
r u leaving If?
whatever b da reason plz try 2 update ur ffs whenever u r free...plzzz
thnx 4 pm

-Sunita-

Edited by KaJen_addiction - 13 years ago

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MidnightMusings

@MidnightMusings

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: XxDeansChickxX
^mujhe bhi gusa atahai jab mai likhti ho koi coment nai karta..but baby i am not leaving if for one year,i just do what i should have done year ago and that is quiting writting:)
I am not leaving if yeah will be in active as iam in 12 grade but not leaving if yara love my freinds alot;)

Nahiiin, I love your writing... Busy yaar... Bas exams going on, aur jab main stressed hoti houn I do read the FFs😃, but I don't comment😳

I lowwee you too... okay, I'll pester you to write and pm me... I have this pestering title for any writers...😆 Which reminds me I miss them..😭

Keep dropping your words at least😈

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

@mijanur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Superb os sis.
You have prove your worth as a writter.
I don't know about others.
But for me i always enjoy your writting.
I wish you will again start to write.
At last thank you for giving us os/ff.
Your writting touch my heart sis.

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi
U know what.. really lovedthis one shot by.. the story was really good and the ending was just perfect..👏

don't know what to say more.. would be missing ur works.. hope u wouldn't stop writing..😭

thanks for the pm..

take care😃

thank you soo much dear:)
well i am definately not stoping writting will write some thing new soon
love
maria:)

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: sweetshera
beautiful os
luvd it

Originally posted by: SHWETAKASHLOVER
hey nice loved it😊

Originally posted by: vidu87
awesome OS

thank you soo much for your coment dear:)
love
maria:)

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: KSGforever08
hey sweety..i loved the OS nd why r u dis continuin it????i wil miss u,do drop some news sometimes

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan
hiii
awesome os

loved it

loved da concept

da ending was sweet

glad armaan realised his feelings

plzzz do write more in da future

thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Awieee
u completed this OS
Loved it
Finally AR are together
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet

thank you soo much guys for your comment
love
maria:)

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

loved the ending..

really amazing n superb..

loved it..

thnx for the pm..

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#419

fab os!!

thanks for the pm :)

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#420

OS Saiyara

I entered in the hall holding my wife's hand tightly.The hall was crowded with people,.It is very difficult to find some,.I looked around try to find my parents and in laws but was not able to.Suddenly a gush of wind pass through me and my caught the sight of a face which has been haunting me from past 2 years.She too look at me and the world stop for us ,we both kept looking into each other as eyes as the flashes of memories of our moments play in front of us...

Asmaa tera mera hua
khuab ki terha dhua dhua
Asma tera mera hua
Sans ki terha rua rua

I didn't believe i am seeing her after 2 years...but soon i felt a hold on my hand got tight and heard ana my wife speaking"Arman here are they".I quickly avert my gaze and went from there.I felt suffocated there i want to go out from but i cant.I meet my parents but my eyes never leave the sight of her.She was wearing black saarre with red work looking as beautiful as always,her hair open,She was standing with her hub and.How i wish i could get that place...hopelessly i look down..
..as the dance started the partners changes and I got the chance to hold which I want to hold for a life time but I can't.But yes though i can't be with her,I am sure one day or the other we will meet...and that time there will be no hurdle between our love...the thought of meeting her again fill my heart with strage warmth ,we both kept swinging ..till the partner change,while we both are moving away from each other I saw her looking at me,I gave her a smile and she returned teary smile..may be a last smile till we meet again...
Saiyan ye mera tujh mai samya
Saiyara mai saiyara
Saiyra tu saiyara tu sayara
sitaro k jahan mai mila ge ab dubara

Shilpa pov
I entered into a big whole where the part was held ,it was a large hall and was crowded with people .There are thousand of people there but still i felt alone,as if i don't have some one.Sid hold my hand tightly and ask me that i am fine or not,he is my husband and my best friend.I nod assuring him me fine.We both enter the hall,in the thousands of people some known and some unknown my eyes caught the glimpse of him.Finally after 2 years i was seeing him but then I saw ana standing right behind him and i look away as I don't even had he right to see him any more

tu jo mila to you hua hogi pori adhori se dua
tu jo gaya to sang le giya mera jina ki her waja

Soon the dance,Sid hold my hands to the dance floor,I kept my hand on his waist,but i didn't feel the spark which i use to have with him...The partners keep changing finally i felt the same touch which i was dying to feel,I look up into his eyes ,he stare into my eyes but then I look down,now our ways are different...That brought the unbearable sadness in me,but can i do some thing about it no I cannot ,I certainly can't..I was helpless,I was coward and i am still the same..That time i didn't stand by him and now I can't.He gave me everything and I can't even stand by him...

tum pe mati..tum se banni
tum se hua hai ha khud pe yakeen...

I felt him moving away from me,I look up and stare into his eyes,his eyes were promising ,he was looking at me as if conveying ,What if we didn't be able to together here we will soon together not here then in heaven.I return the teary smile.I know may be we are not together we can feel the warmth of each other

To jo nai to na sahi ..mai ho yaha tu to bhi hai yahi kahin

*Though the war of two families had separate them but still they will be together nt here then in the heaven*

Leave your precious comment love maria:)

Edited by XxDeansChickxX - 13 years ago