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Posted: 13 years ago
👏hei Kankana awsm dear... just loved ur updates... I read last 2 parts in one go... I was reading d earlier part last n8 but my cp is giving me lots of trouble... today I switch it on only to read ur update... loveee it😳... such a nice thriller 😊
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PART 19 ( LAST PART)




Judge finally declares the verdict.

Judge: Sare gavaho ko sunne ke baad aur sare saboot o ko madhhe nazar rakhte huye yeh adalat iish nateeje pe pahunchi hai key Mr. Maan begunah hai…uunhe iish case mein bewajah fansaya jaa raha tha….leehaja yeh adalat Mr. Maan ko ba-iizzat waree karne ka hukum deti hai aur Miss Arohi ko gunahgaar thahrate huye uunh par khun ka mukaddmaa chalaneka aadesh deti hai…..the court is adjourned.

As soon as the judge announces the verdict Samir rushes at Maan & hugs him tightly. Maan hugs him back….both are in tears. Geet is looking very happy; she also reaches over there & grabs Maan into her embrace.

When they are coming out from the court place just found Arohi there, she is taking towards the prison -van. Arohi slowly moves towards Samir.

Arohi: Sammy…plzz mujhe maaf …….

…………..bas, Samir stops her midway…don't call me by that name…iish naam se mujhe bulane ka haqk tum kho chuki ho….

Arohi inches towards Geet…………..Geet, tuh toh mujhe maaf kar de….mujhse bahut badi galati ho gayee yaar……..

Geet: Galati…!!! tuhne jo kiya hai naa Arohi , uushke baad logon ka apne doston par se bharosha naa uth jaaye….

….Nahi Geet……..Maan interrupts……har koi aisa nahi hota…Samir ko dekh loh…..iishne mere liye apne pe khoon ka iilzzam tak le liya tha ….har koi Arohi jaisa nahi hota……

Geet: Aur Arohi, tum kah rahi thi naa ushdin key tum Maan se bahut pyaar karti ho…pyaar mein log jaan lete nahi hai….dete hain….dekho iish iinsaan ko …..she indicates at Maan…pyaar ke khatiir iiinhone apni zindegi , apni carrier sab kuch barbaad kar liya….sirf mere liye……..ban sakti ho iinhke jaisa ..nahi naa…..!!

Arohi bends down her head. The police officials take her out from there, put her into the prison van & leave from there. Geet notices a drop of tears into Arohi's eyes in that very last moment.

Maan's house, Samir, Geet, Maan's mom everyone presents there. Everyone is looking very happy as the happiness has come back into their life all over again. Suddenly Maan's coach Sir comes there in. Maan touches down his feet, he hugs Maan.

Coach Sir: Maan, tumhare liye ek Good news hai…..

Maan: Jii…..

Coach Sir: 15 th ko hone wale match mein tum DELHI ke liye open kar rahe ho.

Whattt…!!!!……..both Maan & Samir shout out loudly.

Maan : Kaya bol rahe hain Sir…..kaya yeh ho sakta hai…??

Coach Sir: Ho sakta nahi , yehi hoga Maan……Maan tumhara case har koi follow kar raha tha…aur sabko yeh bhi yakeen tha key tumhe fasaya jaa raha hai…aur aab jab tum iish case se ba-iizzat waree ho chuke ho, toh kisiko kyun problem hogi …after all you are one of the best batsman in our team ….right Samir….?

Samir: Yoo Sir…koi shaqk….

All bursts out into huge laughter after watching Samir's version of Amitji's acting.

Just one day to go for that big match for Maan, that Delhi-Bangalore RANJY championship. Maan has practiced a lot in these remaining days. Geet is very happy for Maan, as it's just only one step remaining before to chase his childhood dream, his dream to be a part of Indian Cricket Team. In the evening Maan & Geet are there sitting inside the room, talking about their plans for marriage, suddenly there is a knock in the door. A man comes inside. He introduces himself as Dev's personal lawyer. Maan looks quite surprised after hearing his identity.

Lawyer : Mr. Maan, main Mr. Dev ka lawyer hun…kuch din pahle Mr. Dev ne apna Will badla tha…aur naye Will ke hisaab se Mr. Dev ne apni aadhi jaydaad Miss Geet Handa ke naam kar gaye hain.

What….!!!! Maan, Geet both shouts out in surprise.

Geet: Par Dev ne mujhe kyun….

Lawyer : Dekhiye Miss Geet , aab unhone aisa kyun kiya yeh toh bas wohi jaante the…..apni puree property aur paise ka aadha hissa uunhone aapke naam kiya hai….aur baki aadha U.S. mein ek Welfare trust ke naam jaayega, jo anaath bachho ki ek sanstha hai . Miss Geet aap yahan pe sign kar dijiye.

Geet looks at Maan for his permission….Maan nods his head for a 'YES'. Both are absolutely amazed with Dev's gesture.

Maan is there in the field, it needs only 4 more for his Century, DELHI needs only 2 to win, only 2 balls remaining. Everyone out there 'on the field', 'off the field' gets really charged up , on the other hand Geet & Samir look quite nervous too…..can Maan get his 100…. The bowler bowls out that 2nd last delivery of the match…..Maan tries to hit, but misses it, ball goes straight to the wicket-keeper. Now the stadium gets worried. Will he manage to get the final 2 runs in that last ball of the match? Maan closes his eyes in huge anxiety ….after a while opens them up & suddenly notices a person far away from the ground, looking exactly like Dev, he is also cheering there for Maan, waving his hand for Maan. Bowler delivers the last ball. Maan pulls it up with all of his strength, the whole Stadium stops breathing for a moment…but the silence doesn't exist for a long as that cracking shot has reached to the boundary rope just like a bullet. Maan gets his 100 & DELHI wins the match. Samir rushes over there inside the field & picks Maan up on his shoulder. Maan tries to look out for that person in the gallery area. He is still there, waving his hand & there is a gentle smile on his face too. Maan also waves his hands in return. Samir gets surprised with Maan.

Samir: Kisse iishara kar raha hai tuh…?

Maan: Woh dekh…woh …..Maan signals Samir by his hand towards that person into the gallery.

Samir: Kaun…!!! wahan pe toh koi bhi nahi hai….!!!

Maan : Kaya baat kar raha hai …maine abhi abhi ………Now Maan gets shocked as actually there is no one. Geet comes there in & hugs Maan.

Geet : Kaya huya Maan…?

Maan : Kuch nahi woh….chalo chalte hain….Maan doesn't know what was it, is it Dev, comes there to boost up his moral…!!! .….he has absolutely no answer to that. All comes out from the field. Maan knows that finally he gets the ticket to join The Indian Cricket Team. Finally he has achieved his dream today, his childhood dream to be a part of the Indian Cricket Team, even he has achieved his Dreamgirl also…his Geet, his life, his family.

Folks, this is a simple, short story of Maan Khurana , a simple man's struggle against all odd – struggle for his life, struggle for his love, struggle for his carrier. This is also the story of Geet , a simple girl's journey towards womanhood, her transformation from a dependent, overprotected girl to an independent, strong lady who can fight back for her love, her life, her family. How they all face 'Kashmakash' /dilemma in their life, how they conquer it.There are characters like Samir-a perfect definition of friendship and Arohi also –a poles apart version of friendship. These Maan, Geet, Samir, Arohi – they are not just characters , within each & everyone of us there is a Maan or a Geet or a Samir , even a Arohi also, we just need to identify them, need to preserve those good qualities which they possess , and also clear those bad qualities as well out from our life. That's all my friends, hope you enjoy my story, it's a reality based fiction. I will be back whenever I get something interesting to share with u guys, until then…..God bless & Good Bye.😊




PART-18

Guys, who are my FF-readers out here, i have a request to u all, plzzz do join my page in FACEBOOK, its We Love U Samir Sharma aka Sammy Sir.
Its not about DEV, its only about SAMIR SHARMA.
SAMIR Sir himself has joined us...plzz do join & make me happy & Samir sir as well😊😛


HERE IS THE LINK OF THE PAGE, PLZZ DO JOIN US GUYS...I NEED UR SUPPORT


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Posted: 13 years ago
i'm gonna miss this ff
do write another ff if you have sparee time :D
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very beautiful FF..now ended...😭

there is one thing Kankana...we all judge Dev's character by the character of Dev in Geet serial...u had already made it clear in the beginning that Dev's is a positive character in ur FF but we all ur readers always thought him as bad...
in the end I am really touched by Dev's gestures...

The end was perfect but sis u can continue further many things can happen why end so soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it, awesome continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...speechless...👏👏👍🏼👍🏼
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hats off to u kana...magar short hai...thoda aur lengthy karna chahiye tha...zaldi khatam ho gaya...😭😭⭐️⭐️
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this story of u is a motivation fr all...insan ko himmat nehi hadna chahiye...koi bhi problem ho usse samna karna chahiye...i loved it...

thank u very much fr d pm...love u...❤️🤗
waiting for ur nxt one eagerly...

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Posted: 13 years ago

gonna miss u dear...

loved it!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

Very beautiful FF..now ended...😭

there is one thing Kankana...we all judge Dev's character by the character of Dev in Geet serial...u had already made it clear in the beginning that Dev's is a positive character in ur FF but we all ur readers always thought him as bad...
in the end I am really touched by Dev's gestures...

The end was perfect but sis u can continue further many things can happen why end so soon.



diii, sab kuch toh sort out ho gaya...aab aur kaya...jayda khicha jaaye story ko toh boring ho jati hai naa...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
so arohi was the culprit
lovely ending
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
u r right...the characters u wrote is quite common among all...
enjoyed reading the ff...
if u write any more on maaneet pl do pm me

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