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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#711

excellent update...⭐️
in this part we saw a different side of Mitalee...one thing I agree with her that Maan is really a Buddhu😆😉...eagerly waiting for the next part to know...😛

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

#712

ON the conversation about radical whip toting(literally and figuratively) ladies , Geet, Mitalee, Emily, and this bunch here..

Heres a song I soo love🤣

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sal4xRAmonI

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 13 years ago

#713

see even Mitalee out of all the people knows maan is such an idiot... well that's news!

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#714

I loved the update! Wow, Mitalee's opinion of Maan, dang. Awesome update! Thanks for the update and PM!

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#715

Originally posted by: ninand
ON the conversation about radical whip toting(literally and figuratively) ladies , Geet, Mitalee, Emily, and this bunch here..

Heres a song I soo love🤣

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sal4xRAmonI

😆 🤣

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#716

Any one in a mood to start solving the mystery...i am like confused..lets get together...by god the min i think one part is cleared..there one more bomb...

gosh..

but sooks loved it...thnks..and sry LIKE is not working...i shall try again..but for now sorry..

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#717

Line of the update(I liked a couple of more but didnt feel like scrolling back up)

"He is even bigger idiot than I thought he was," Mitalee replied in disbelief.

okay, now things with Maan's mother dont look too well. Geet is right, it was his choice not to tell her. An he shouldnt be giving out explanations for it. He trusted a bloody bottle of alcohol more than his friend. Idiot.

This was a little slow paced than the initial ones...

As for Mitalee, I really dont know. This series is high on drama

Thanks for the PM (I know how much you hate doing this ;) )

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#718

Awesome update...thanx for pm Sookie...I have one request Sookie that is please use easy words some words are very difficult to understand...this update I read very easily but in previous updates some dialogues I have to read many times to understand fully...in this last update I understand very easily..

This side of Mitalee is shocking first I thought she is faking and planning to trap Geet because Geet is major share-holder and Maan's friend also so become vulnerable in front of Geet and then emotional blackmailing she will do I thought...but...when she started to share her thoughts about Maan... I understand she is not faking but who knows this is the game of check and mate

feeling sorry for Maan...the age of Maan when he saw his mother like that is very vulnerable age...even if a children see their own parents in compromising position they start hating their parents and when a son sees his mother in such a position is very disturbing...that is why Maan drowned himself in all destroying activities.
continue soon.

Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#719

part 19
OMG dear u always surprise me...
Mitalee like this is very surprising...
Geet in fact in her young days looked up at her...
what is happening to these people?
i just loved the last line Mitalee said...
Maan is indeed an idiot of highest power...
cont soon dear...