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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

part 10
OMG Maan's mom is alive...
how much does Maan know about all the things?
and Dileep also seems to know what his off springs are doing...
Maan is closer to Geet's dad...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

A fab update Sooks. Mystique_girl has pretty much summed up all my observations.

- didnt quite understand the plan to topple Mitalee's empire...I am sure you would detail on it later😊[/Quote]

I don't think they want to overthrow M's company, it's all about being the heir to the empire.

' It's not about saving company sir but it's all about who gets to be the winner in the race with becoming heir to Khurana group as the prize.'

Take care Sookie and keep rocking ;)

Edited by Boogleton.Schiz - 13 years ago

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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Awesomeee
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

Hey Sooks

I was pestering you for an update and I am the last one to comment. How fantastic.

Anyway your plot is going at a great pace. Thats another thing I like about the story, even with short updates, the pace remains good.

Maan is still alive? Oh well, he has to be alive in order for the the story to continue(is this sentence grammatically incorrect? I have a weird feeling it is)

All the hints you are dropping about the past show how f**ked up Maan and Geet's parents were. And how F**ked up their children are going to be once the whole picture becomes clear.

Dileep Khurana is feeling so compassionate? Is he gonna die? LOL just kidding though it possible. Get this straight through your skull man- you were f**king around when you should have been teaching your children to human first and businessmen/women later.

Mitalee is smart(Yeah, I still like her. I always knew she is smarter than Vikram.)

Great work and thanks for the PM

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Awesome update!!! You always make me go into confused state or keep me pulling out my hair to come to conclusions about one or the character. What is Venkat upto?? Is he a major player in giving one of the Khurana siblings their status?

Loved maan and Saty's convo as usual . Every Khurana is either carrying a spy or a mole in their own company at their back. Such a dangerous business game they are playing at. Mr. Dileep Khurana knows everything that his sons and daughter are doing. is he really repenting of the things done to Maan?

And OMG Maan's Mom is alive. But what is it about his Mom that it disturbs him so much??I always love this Maan for his traits like sacrcastic humor and then again changes and gives out the warmth into his realtionship with Geet however bumpy it is. I loved this line don't know why but it touched me deeply.

"Aunty, besides Geet here nothing good has ever happened to me when it comes to people."

Edited by sneha0504 - 13 years ago