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TeamMcSwarek

@TeamMcSwarek

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

omg i am LOVING it
i'm gonna hope you don't end this one sad-ish like you did with the other one xD
thanks for the pm
do continue soon

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Hey Sookie :)

Sorry for the lack of comments, I've been rather busy!

I loved Chapters 2 & 3! They're amazing! Maan's family is definitely dysfunctional! I adore the camaraderie shared by Maan and Geet :)

Fabulous work!

xoxo

Aanya

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Read all the three updates.

Thank you so much.

Love the story line.

cheers.

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Mindblowing...amazing drama S 😃and your bombshell in the last line - Dilip destroying Geet's father and the media hounding them...

This family is totally screwed up - I feel sad for uncomplicated beings(ref Maan originally) who need to be part of a family like this

Convo between Varun and Mitalee just implicated how nasty they can be even between siblings and how extensively Mitalee hates Maan 🤢 Is it just the inheritance part or there's more to it?

BTW I didnt quite understand what Varun meant when he said "Maan can help you out"..

Loved Maaneet interaction...wait for them the whole day until ur next update😊 What will happen now that he is discharged?

Maan - He was totally on a confession mood with "I guess I deserve that punishment". His reactions to his date were very surprising - he is totally a noncommittal guy... and your insight on the novel and their names was truly amazing - Maan must think a lot about him and Geet to come up with these theories - i guess he somehow relates to Geet - were they dating earlier?

DVDs???...ROFL...Their camarederie is so comfortable...I wonder for how long they have known each other...

So long till the next update😆

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bhakbhartifan

@bhakbhartifan

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Is there any chance of happy ending for this one unlike the last one?
I dont want to build up hopes u know..

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Bomb pe bomb...so Maan's father destroyed Geet's father? Hmm...I imagined it with the special effects...camera zooming in on Geets face 234754595957565 times and then on Maan's face another 234754595957565 times...withe the crazy music background!

There is something fishy about Mitalee...I really want to know more about her...

This Maan is too good to be true- he is a Nerd and a Casanova? I thought the twain never met! Both groups will be up in arms against you, Sooks! Better be careful..😆😆😆😆

Would today's meeting classify as the first Maahi???

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: -pixie-
Bomb pe bomb...so Maan's father destroyed Geet's father? Hmm...I imagined it with the special effects...camera zooming in on Geets face 234754595957565 times and then on Maan's face another 234754595957565 times...withe the crazy music background!

There is something fishy about Mitalee...I really want to know more about her...
She should get her own freaky vamp music. Actually the entire Khurana clan including Maan should get. I actually forgot to add music to the last chapter. Thinking of adding a song per chapter...just for kicks

This Maan is too good to be true- he is a Nerd and a Casanova? I thought the twain never met!
They do...if a conscious decision is made...
Both groups will be up in arms against you, Sooks! Better be careful..😆

Would today's meeting classify as the first Maahi???
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