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Posted: 14 years ago

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Oh so there is more them then meets the eye (Liz is like DUH this is Sookie's story) 😆

Hmm . . . SO MG seem to know each other well but well enough that it doesn't necessarily seem to all stem from their hospital encounters. I also sense feelings (yes don't ask me what kind I don't know) 😃

But with their rapport with one another, and the words you used.

"I am actually little surprised that you behaved so well last evening. I almost expected to see a woman in your bed when I came in," Geet said casually. She smoothed his back thus missing the frown that crossed his face. He let out a breath and slowly relaxed his face as she came back to stand in front of him.

How I do love this enigmatic character of Maan . . . In fact even Geet. LOL you were right their characters are canonized 😉 But I am liking this and the speed with which updates are zooming my way (WOOT WOOT )

😆 Yeah so I loved it, and its complexity has me roped in for sure. The mystery of the sibling hatred remains as does what happened to poor Mr. Handa? AYISHHH tell me soon with your dancing words and prancing vowel-term language 😆

BTW that was AMAZING. The vowel exchange between them and their play of the alphabets had be snorting (It's funnier because I was in the public library) 🤣 I don't know I liked smart Maan and Geet (it's funny for some reason that makes me feel you shall deem me retarded; oh please don't Sookie) 😆

Regardless I hadn't felt that way about your work since you wrote the piece on talking MG eyes (And the handbook written by Geet about Maan) 🤪

Okay that's all for now 😃😆

Love

Liz

P. S I am Liz Sookie, I am not a stalker I just like your stories. 😎

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

excellent update 👏. read both updates in one go

You have managed to build up the situation very well and that is saying a lot from me since very rarely I wonder in any story "what next."

loved the subtle humor and sarcasm in maaneet's conversation. The other characters in the story are also shaping well. Similarly, the rough diamond maan, appears to be an very interesting character like the big bad wolf who seems to intrigue (???)/ fascinate (am I too early for that?) our charming geet.

Awaiting for your next batch of updates. Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

She is easily annoyed and leaves the place before she physically assaults him? 😆 😆 😆

😆 I would have liked to believe she was far more tame and revolted by the mere poopy (I couldn't think of any other words, excuse me I am famished at the moment) existence of the far to often seen Maan (You know the one that evokes the eyes to roll and the kissing of the teeth from meters away)

Love

Liz

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febinyusuff

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

So Sookie.. Maan and Geet knows each other well. I got a hint from yesterdays update when he asked about NT but today it got confirmed. I can see a soft side for Maan to Geet.

Please continue sooon...

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Now this is something really different...
Khurana's for sure are crazy...m surprised that they are still surviving coz it seems as if they are always ready to murder each other...

Last line...m confused.

Updt soon.

Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: luvabbybaby

😆 I would have liked to believe she was far more tame and revolted by the mere poopy (I couldn't think of any other words, excuse me I am famished at the moment) existence of the far to often seen Maan (You know the one that evokes the eyes to roll and the kissing of the teeth from meters away)

Love

Liz

Well, I am talking more in terms of punch, slap, elbow, knee or body slam Maan and twist his wrist which is currently hurt. And that would not be a result of the bantering we are seeing now but something that disturbs the sanctity of Geet's psyche...
😆

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Zooni Begam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

Hmm almost doze off to sleep when I had this urge to check my inbox feelin that u might hav update and u did!!
Wow I'm so loving ur ff.. Story is getting interesting hmm wonder what story is there between the siblings and the last sentence uff what happen to geet's dad!! Did maan's dad killed her dad???
Oh ya love how u were explaining their names!! Nicely wrote as usual!! Do continue soon.. Can't wait for maahhiii scenes.. And their past!! Thx for the pm!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Pls explain this..i am like confused...

What? Don't you find how unusually creepy both our names are? Fifty percent of our names are made of vowels; while mine has the first vowel, yours has the second. The last letter in my name is the letter next in series to the first letter in my name. However in your case, the first letter is seventh from the start and the last letter is seventh from last."

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-Elfin-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: mchopra
Pls explain this..i am like confused...

What?
Don't you find how unusually creepy both our names are?
Fifty percent of our names are made of vowels;

MAAN
GEET
two of the four letters in both the names are vowels, A and E respectively

while mine has the first vowel, yours has the second.

MAAN has two A's which is the first vowel

GEET has two E's which is the second vowel

The last letter in my name is the letter next in series to the first letter in my name.

MAAN : starts with M and ends with N (N is the letter next to M in alphabet series)

However in your case, the first letter is seventh from the start and the last letter is seventh from last."

GEET : G is the seventh letter from the beginning and T is the seventh letter from the end of the alphabet series.

blue.😊

Sorry could not control myself

the Professor in me came out 🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Well, I am talking more in terms of punch, slap, elbow, knee or body slam Maan and twist his wrist which is currently hurt. And that would not be a result of the bantering we are seeing now but something that disturbs the sanctity of Geet's psyche...
😆

😆 It's a universal disturbance then (Maan is a shameless womanizer with odd knowledge of quite strange things eh bleck that's disturbed to me) and Geet hates him for it 😆 But this does make me curious . . . What is it about Geet that has her mind twisted in such a manner?

I mean how can one find Maan's charms a little less borderline . . . I don't know . .. Charming?

😆

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