The Gangster's Mistress UPD! Ch 17 & 18 Pg 105&113

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Sara

@immayurfan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Awesome update

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Am I dreaming...or u have ACTUALLY posted part 15 so soon *pinching myself* ouch it hurt!!!!

Halting my bakwaas 4 a min lemme concentrate on the part-

I guess I have stated this earlier that u r a fab writer...so I won't repeat that...thts y I luv ur writing newys-but I didn't like this chap.

But yeah read my full comment b4 frowning...

Its a truth that I,like many on IF is a true-blue Maneet fan...but here it's not my biased-ness 2wrds this couple which has compelled me 2 say so...it is the sudden falling of hopes which made me say so.

In my earlier post I said that whenever I read a story,I try n think 4m the perspective of the story chars...but after readin the chapter 2day,I just cannot make myself think 4m MSK's pov.

The chapter was goin quite well until sum random chick entered and then it seemed that her entry became the highlight of the chapter.

MSK being a gangster/cold-blooded murderer/ruthless/inhuman etc is fine as there was a certain respect which grew in my mind 4 him...but what he did in this chapter was downright cheap-definitely not something which fits his personality.

I've previously read many a stories where MSK has been portrayed as a playboy-but that is different as the writers shaped the chars likewise,unlike here.

I've also read the story ''In love with enemy'' and I truly respect that MSK-mind u not b'coz he has never touched a girl b4 geet,but bcoz his actions and his doings in the story were completely justified...it wouldn't have mattered even if he had slept with countless women in the past...but he knows how 2 respect his present.

Plz don't think I'm tryin 2 compare these 2 stories-two writers n their perspective can never b the same---my point is the fact that one should respect the person he/she loves/likes/admires...there's no doubt Maan has crossed that 1st stage,then why this cheap act...even if he's using her as a distraction...will he spare the guy who dares 2 touch Geet in front of him like this?

I seriously have high hopes 4m u samira...so unlike other writers who show the man as a badass playboy and the girl as a virgin angel who can only cry hiding her face in the pillow seeing her man making out with some other woman or make a fool of herself by explicitly showing her jealousy,I want u 2 make Geet strong enuf and do a tit 4 tat with that A**H*** of a Gangster by sleeping with some guy way more hotter than MSK (johnny and arjun may apply 😉)

Plz yaar...this is a serious request...may b sometymes I talk lyk a feminist but then at the end of the day I AM A FEMALE...so it's kinda natural 2 ask 4 sumthing like this ri8???

I hope u won't disappoint 😊

Love

Shreya

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Shimmerr

@Shimmerr

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#403

you are sooo bad!!!
you want to take a week offf?!?!?!?
do you want me to die?!?!?!?
jaldi update karo!!
i have to know how it will continue and who that bit** is who was naked with maan in bed!!!!
i can imagine what they were doing, but i hope that you have a good explenation for that!!
i am on the verge to kill maan with my bare hands now!!
why do you have to be so damn crazy and and make me one too??!?!
in the turkish language, there is a saying which says: "who is sleeping with some blind person, wakes up as a squint" and the same aplies here too!!
reading your updates made me crazy!!
and what is more worse is,
that i love it!!
anyways, waiting for the next part and pls update soon, if you dont want me to find in a menthal asylum dear!!
plllzzz continue soon honey!!

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#404

all i can say is i want geet to do a tit for tat 😡

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
all i can say is i want geet to do a tit for tat 😡

I'm with u di...halla bolloin on MSK 😡

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423728

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Oh my god I already want to update again! I'm on FIRE. RESTRAIN ME! *Runs away from the computer screen*

@ Shelly - Hun don't fret yourself too much. You know me. I always make a short paragraph in a scene and make you all get scared to death. Then in the next chapter I explain or emphasize on the scene in more detail from the other characters perspective.

Edited by _SiinnceMaan_ - 13 years ago

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

I'm also confused after reading the part,that where is the story going ahead.nevertheless,i've complete faith in u that it will turn fantabulous,and asusual luved the part to bits,cud relate to geet's pain,and wanted to whack maan for fu**ing around that bi**;>
shamelessly,waiting for the next part:D

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: _SiinnceMaan_
Oh my god I already want to update again! I'm on FIRE. RESTRAIN ME! *Runs away from the computer screen*

@ Shelly - Hun don't fret yourself too much. You know me. I always make a short paragraph in a scene and make you all get scared to death. Then in the next chapter I explain or emphasize on the scene in more detail from the other characters perspective.

K...If the writer says so then...chillofaying myself

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#409

Amazing update thanx 4 double update (for 12 n 13)treat , i knw m a little late to thank, 14 n 15 were amzing updates, they were so well written tat i have no words to express my appreciation , poor geet , y maan is ignoring her like tat, now she has witnessed him with another women, poor heartbroken gal...
I knw it will sound irritating but plzzz dont take too long to update, i knw m selfish to ask but wat to do i love ur ff