The Gangster's Mistress UPD! Ch 17 & 18 Pg 105&113 - Page 2

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maaneetsangel thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
awesome ... superb ... loved part 11 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Congratulations on the new thread sammy...!! 🥳
loved the update a lot...!!!
geet kissed maan...😲 😳 😲
she is such a dramatic woman...she din tear her dupatta but maan's shirt 😆 😆 😆
heh her dog JOHN 🤣...She remembered John Abraham n blurted it out...!!
loved the way maan asked her who is John...!! oh god his expressions were worth watching...😳...possessive...!!!
oh god she is a piece here...!!!!
love her so much...
while maan does not want her to go..so he made an excuse for her to stay there until she does not get a place to stay..!!
Amazing update...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
omg!i cant laugh any more...
she tore maan's shirt for bandaging...
unique piece hai yaar ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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finallly u r back,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n ur comeback was superb,,,,god hw do u think up all this,,,truly u r great!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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-Btw, lol @ your story about the random guy 😆 Aww, hope your eye gets better. You should've been like Geet and gone after the guy to make him utaar your nazaar (yeah, totally spelled it wrong)

🤣🤣 Love Geet's train of thought! Omg, i thought i was going to die of laughter when geet started singing "inhi mardo ne le liya dupatta mera" and imagined Maan dancing, surrounded by drunk men. I really liked her method of distraction (and her thought that he deserved a smelly mouth😆). Maan stands no chance while Geet's seducting skills are in play 😉 But Geet better stop imagining John, or she's going to be in a lot of trouble. Btw, are you obsessed with John too? Because in Irrevocably Yours, Geet was ecastic while watching Dostana (the first song)

She's gonna live with him? 😲 I'm actually really happy that one of those gundas survived. Now geet will stay wih Maan forever and ever and they'll live happily ever after 😍 OK, maybe not. But atleast we'll get to read about more fights and Geet's attempts at distraction 😃 Haha, it's so cute how the question gnawing Geet was about rent. Oh, and love her cheapness. But you gotta admit- she's pretty smart. This way, she gets to save her pretty dupatta AND has an excuse for tearing open Maan's shirt and staring at his abs. Then she'll be able to determine if she likes John's or Maan's 😆😛




Congrats on your second thread!!
Edited by bmtdluver - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Seriously! Who the hell writes her brain's dialogues? Those blood cells or brain cells deserved an IIFA award...i seriously do think on these lines whn i read geets ranting...well expect that instead of 'who the hell' it will be 'hw the hell u come up with these dialogs'...seriously girl u r impossible...u dont fail to crack me up every time with geets weirdo thinking🤣🤣...kudoos to you👏...do continue soon...
Edited by eiya22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Forget IIFA, you deserve a nomination at the very least at Oscars for your dialogs...

John, John, John...who wouldn't dream about John, but not when Maan Singh Khurana is kissing till you are running out of breath 😳

So, its official...she is the Gangster's Mistress. Now I wouldn't mind exchanging place with Geet at this very moment

Geet is completely whacked, she is selfish to the core...thinking about Rent when delicious hunk of a man is asking her to stay under the same roof with her, hell I'll pay rent just to stay with him 😉


Very hilarious update and loving the pace of the story, hope u don't change it 😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update n congrtz on new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
First of congratz on your second thread! <3
Secondly omg not again :( Why are your eyes always suffering!? :'( I hope you get well soon Sammy .. don't want you to write this FF while you're in pain! Seriously you're a darling for doing so even with that swollen eye! And as for the guy who thought he could "line maar" on you .. no comment o.O
RES!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
girl, live long!! you are just amazing!! looved the part!! congrats on your new thread!! continue soon dear!!

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