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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Hey Maha

Congratulation for 5th thread

Awesome update

Love the way Riddhima trust Armaan

Waiting for their Shmla trip

Do continue soon

Thanks for the PM

Take care

Lots of Love

GEET

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vidu87

@vidu87

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

hey congracts 4 d new thead

nd d part is awesome

nd regarding d end of dis ff plz show ridz pregnancy before ending

nd if posb dun end dis ff

its really an superb ff

thnx 4 d pm

cont soon

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Killer

@Hello_01

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: nandinii_goyal
Maha Di yaar...it's not loosing it's essence it's just that I don't like the parts where writers show Riddhima all jealous jealous all the time otherwise I love the ff...just windup this track soon and start a new track and m sure there would be no more complains ;)
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Nandi

Nandi Yaar😆 great to hear that... acha don't worry... i won't end it with in 10 parts par something like 10 parts and Plus! so don't worry... you will get lots of part to read... !! and yes i will wind up this Track... but it is important to end the insecurity that Riddhima feels that she shall lose Armaan! so to kill this insecurity... this track is important!!

Love Maha😳

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

I read the part you updates and loved it to bits :) it's nice that Riddhima trusts Armaan so much and is able to answer for herself and is just not listening to anyone's crap :D
Waiting desperately for the part where they would be in shills and all the masti there :)

Luv
Nandi

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

I just now read your reply Di and am glad that you would give us many more parts to read :D and that you would start a brand new after that hehe..

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Tooba

@-Euphoria-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

Heyy Gr88 part lovedd ittt😳

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zesty.me

@zesty.me

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

after reading ur comments i can just conclude that u need some inspiration

in order to post soon u don think over the updates so much

its really good that u update on a regular basis

and seriously i look forward to ur update daily

this ff is interesting

but u just need to get some life n reality into it

like the age difference

u can show some communication gap

u can bring out some problems in the family

u don't find such happy go lucky family everywhere

plus u can show some tensions regarding work or studies

the real problems and the way out of it

something which the readers can relate to

just think over it

till then keep updating

but try to bring some twist or change

for example u can show how riddhima forgot to take precautions and then she gets pregnant

then her or armaan's happiness of becoming a parent and the other not ready for it now

the problems the fights the tension the decisions

all these u can show

and then their final decision and all

then if yes the pregnancy period and a the one who wasn't ready for it getting all ready to be a parent and all that maturing part can be shown

if no then the abortion or what to do now more fights and all can be shown

this was just an example

like this u can create good situations

and make ur ff interesting

and trust me u can continue writing and then end it after u are satisfied with your ff

if u end it because u think readers are finding it boring then you'll loose hope of writing

and if u end it even when readers want to read further then u'll have that satisfaction and the motivation to write something better

anyway continue soon

hope i didn't interfere

best of luck

keep writing

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

loved the part :) congrats on the new thread!!!

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Pari

@pari0706

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Congrtulations on new thread.. l loved how Riddhima trusts armaan blindly.. continue soon

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rtjks

@rtjks

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#110

Nice part.

Thanks for PM.

Update soon...

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