FF: Beetein Lamhe Prt 7 pg104 2/25/13 - Page 8

well, all i would say is...its so like jaz...😉

The sadist queen is back with a new FF (well technically you never left 😆) and what does she name the story? Beetein lamhe why couldn't it be present lamhe eh? Oh and MSK is a drunkard 😳 And my stupid brain will actually read this and love it because she I can't get enough of your tragic stories. I hate love you Jaz.

btw, JAz...how abt writing an FF for Maan Jr? geet and Maan's son. this idea came to me after i completed ur FF "hamesha saath" where u mentioned geet wants to bring up a son who would have the same strength of character as Maan and love and respect for everyone, esplly women...so why not write an FF on their son? but if u do so, dont dare kill either geet or maan!!! they shud both be alive and kicking! infact, u cud make out the son to be a rake and a flirt but one with a heart of gold...just a little spoilt , being the youngest but not one who wud destroy a girl with his philandering ways...he only goes after fast girls who know the score...but eventually will marry someone like geet...in this enters a v pretty but conniving girl and her momma , who set their cap at him coz he is super rich ..they plan to trap him in a compromising situation which would force him to marry her. This girl has an elder sister who is sensible, more stylish but quietly so, genteel, but not pretty ..she finds out abt her sis and mothers plan and in order to save her sister from her folly , turns up at the designated place instead of the silly sis but ends up being kidnapped by him instead ...from there on starts the journey of these 2 hating each other and then falling in love...this is a georgette heyer story ( devils Cub) and can be well adapted to Maaneet. i think it suits ur prologue well...so this cud be maan jr who had to forcibly marry the sensible sis coz he does not ruin respectable girls and 7 yrs down the line is remembering their journey and how he had planned to kidnap the floozy sister to teach her a lesson as he had come to know their wicked plan, but found the other sis and how he first hated hr but then her spirit and her traits made him fall in love with her... but she is no longer with him,.,...and u tk it from there

Edit: Sorry this comment was supposes to be on remembrance LMAO 😆

hey sweety...
me have become a fan of ur writings and also a dushman to ur sad stories...
congrats on new ff...
u batter make this a happy one dear i mean the ending...
prologue
nice start...
Maan is a married man for the past 7 years but his wife is not beside him...
cont soon and thanks for the pm...

awesome

yayyy...a new FF 🥳...congo Jazzy...

Lovely Prologue
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM