FF: Beetein Lamhe Prt 7 pg104 2/25/13 - Page 10

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1

wow,jnawaz,one more ff. couldn't ask for more . prologue is interesting and i know it will be more enthraling experience to read ahead . asusual your style . waiting for more .

he he...yes...one more ff...i cant help it...hope you like this one! 😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: t_areeb

it seems he doesnt have anything and anyone in his life

but he did that to himseld or it was his destiny

only time will tell...maybe only one...maybe a little of both 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: indepgal

yup! read new hope too! so there it was-first OS-u killed maan, second OS-u killed geet, third OS-u killed geet's daddy and fourth OS-u killed their kid! i dont think there is anyone left to be killed...unless, u count daadi and geet's mom...but i had the heart to attempt to continue to read ur works coz a) u write very well b) of the other sweet OS' viz. teri bindiya, best friends and wherez my girl.

i think in a few stories...Geet's mom was already dead...cuz her dad raised her on his own...as for dadi...hmm...let me see what i can do 😛...

JAZ

Originally posted by: Boogleton.Schiz

The sadist queen is back with a new FF (well technically you never left 😆) and what does she name the story? Beetein lamhe why couldn't it be present lamhe eh? Oh and MSK is a drunkard 😳 And my stupid brain will actually read this and love it because she I can't get enough of your tragic stories. I hate love you Jaz.

Present Lamhe!! 😲... 🤣 that too funny!! i love you too!! 😳
JAZ

Originally posted by: indepgal

btw, JAz...how abt writing an FF for Maan Jr? geet and Maan's son. this idea came to me after i completed ur FF "hamesha saath" where u mentioned geet wants to bring up a son who would have the same strength of character as Maan and love and respect for everyone, esplly women...so why not write an FF on their son? but if u do so, dont dare kill either geet or maan!!! they shud both be alive and kicking! infact, u cud make out the son to be a rake and a flirt but one with a heart of gold...just a little spoilt , being the youngest but not one who wud destroy a girl with his philandering ways...he only goes after fast girls who know the score...but eventually will marry someone like geet...in this enters a v pretty but conniving girl and her momma , who set their cap at him coz he is super rich ..they plan to trap him in a compromising situation which would force him to marry her. This girl has an elder sister who is sensible, more stylish but quietly so, genteel, but not pretty ..she finds out abt her sis and mothers plan and in order to save her sister from her folly , turns up at the designated place instead of the silly sis but ends up being kidnapped by him instead ...from there on starts the journey of these 2 hating each other and then falling in love...this is a georgette heyer story ( devils Cub) and can be well adapted to Maaneet. i think it suits ur prologue well...so this cud be maan jr who had to forcibly marry the sensible sis coz he does not ruin respectable girls and 7 yrs down the line is remembering their journey and how he had planned to kidnap the floozy sister to teach her a lesson as he had come to know their wicked plan, but found the other sis and how he first hated hr but then her spirit and her traits made him fall in love with her... but she is no longer with him,.,...and u tk it from there

😲...wow...you planned it all out!! nice! ha ha..not sure if ill have time...and the one thing im not totally agreeing with is the fact that he's a "good playboy"...i mean...yeah that fine...he's having fun with girls who know what they are getting themselves into...but i have serious issues with guys (in real and reel life) who just go and have fun...literally screw around with girls...and then come and marry a nice girl...someone they can bring home...thats crap...if he's a promiscuous person...he deserves a promiscuous person...not an innocent and pure person...just my thoughts...lol

JAZ

Originally posted by: spvd

hey sweety...
me have become a fan of ur writings and also a dushman to ur sad stories...
congrats on new ff...
u batter make this a happy one dear i mean the ending...
prologue
nice start...
Maan is a married man for the past 7 years but his wife is not beside him...
cont soon and thanks for the pm...

hope you like this one...and im glad you're here too!! he he...as a fan and dushman!! 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

CONGRATS on the new FF...🥳 thank you ji!!

loved the prologue...

another sad story...amazing...

would love to cry...n read more of it...n of course curse u ... aare...its not all sad...this is only prologue...aage kya ho...kya pata 😉

well this is what i want to say...but not wanting to type...but still did...lol...even i am confusing myself...

whether it is sad or happy...it doesnt matter...coz u r unpredictable...so what is the use of trying to guess...which will only turn out to be wrong... lol...i love confusing you all and making you go crazy only to throw something totally unexpected 😈

isse pehle main aur bakwas karun...i better stop myself...

one Q though --- y do writers tend to end like u did....one person, that was no longer part of his life.

ab frm this we cant even guess the person is alive or dead...🤔...pata nahi y u make us all confused... thats the whole point...to keep the suspense as long as needed!!! 😉

thnx for the PM...

PS -- this was just my silly self talking after reading it...😆...waiting for it to begin...n enjoy the beete lamhe...who make u cry of thinking all the happy memories...😳

Originally posted by: sharmake11

congrats new FF

omg another 7yrs separation

is it ur lucky charm number 7 jaz

interesting concept

it sounds sad one

but i'm addicted with ur FF

i'll have to read

wonder if their is happy ending

wow so someone stole maan heart

wonder who she is

waiting eagerly for update

thnx pm

i didnt even realize the 7yr thing until someone else mentioned it...i guess it is my fav number!! lol🤣🤣🤣...the someone will be revealed in next update...stay tuned! 😉

JAZ