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Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#231

hey bidz
it was awesome update loved it
gr888 mayur getting married in week
precap very interesting mayur meeting
very well written
do cont soon
thanks for the pm

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

haa.. i m loving it sudden intrest n a step ahed...lovly

n arman ridi talk on phone was so sweet...

gr8 update

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aishwarya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

nice part :)

so MN's marriage is fixed, and its gonna be done so earlyy? wow.

riddhima was thinking about armaan, and even he was thinking about her, aww!

he called her up to make MayUr meet. so mayank is interested in meeting him? thats nice!

thanks for the pm

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neelima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

Nice part. Loved it and thanks for the pm

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558278

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

aw sweet part! want more AR tho~

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Nikki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

hey bidzii!!

loved the update

it was a little short but it was still awesome

loved the mn scenes

but i wanna see more ar

hope u could update soon

nikki ;)

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aditi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

HEY

last part was awsome...

sorry for commenting late but was busy...

loved AR's cute phn convo...

and mayur.. wanted to meet each other...

awsome.. wating for next part

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Medha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#238

Hey Bidz! I just read this FF and it's just awesome! I also like Mayur, so it's a treat to read this FF which has 2 of my favorite couples. :) OMG. Riddhima's blind? I didn't expect that, but that's what makes AR's story unique here. Can't wait till Mayur's marriage. Please update soon and thanks for the PM.

-Medzi-

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Monal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#239

Chapter 5 --- Short but really sweet!

One week and Mayur are going to be tied together forever with in invisible thread ::))

AR moments are really good too...

Love the unknown blush of Nupur and smile on Mayank's face..

Great Armaan doesnt have to work hard ;)

cant wait till the meeting and more of AR

ud soon :)

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#240

Thank u so much frndz for ur sweet comments.. Though i was not feeling like to type the update cuz of some personal stuffs but just for u all, here's the update :)

Chapter #6

"Armaan, tu yaha rukh jaa naa," Mayank pleaded Armaan as they entered a restaurant. "Mujhe kabab mein haddi banne ka koi shauk nahi hai, iss liye chup chap yaha baith aur Nupur ka wait kar.", Armaan firmly said and left.

Sighing, Mayank took his seat and wondered, "Main kuch jyada hi nervous nahi ho raha hu? Accha sach mein main, as if, Mayank Sharma is getting nervous? Really?" He was shocked at this realization.

Thinking about Mayank's condition and giggling, Armaan was unlocking the door of his car, when suddenly his eyes landed on the other side of the road and the view he had there made him worried. He ran as fast as he could to a certain direction.

Riddhima was crossing the road with terror on her face which showed as if she was scared due to something. "Riddhimaa!", Armaan shouted with all his force and pulled her back to the footpath as a truck was coming towards them.

"Are you mad or what? How could you be so careless, Riddhima? What the heck! Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Aur tumhari haalat.. yeh kaisa hua?", Armaan asked her in an extra-protective tone. Riddhima threw herself in his arms and cried loudly.

"Damn! She's scared and I'm yelling on her. Armaan, tu sach mein paagal hai.", Armaan thought and hugging her back, he consoled her. "Sshh! It's okay. Chup ho jaao.", he said affectionately and took her to his car.

"I hate people who come late." Mayank said angrily and looked at his watch. "Mayank!", just then, he heard a musical voice which calmed him in a second. For the first time, he loved hearing his name! He smiled and turned back.

"Sorry, I'm late.", Nupur innocently apologized which broadened Mayank's smile. "It's okay. Aao, baitho.", Mayank replied and pulled a chair for her like a gentleman. Nupur formally smiled at him and seated.

"Mujhe laga ki tum mujhse milne ke liye manaa kar dogi, but you came.", Mayank said with a content smile and all Nupur was doing was blush. She could easily refuse when Riddhima informed her that Mayank wanted to meet her but she didn't. Why? She didn't know. Hiding her blush, she tried to speak normally, "Woh maine socha ki.. hum dono apni zindagi ek saath guzaarenge, so its better if we get to know each other more. Its true that our relationship is a compromise yet I felt like not to refuse."

Mayank smiled at her genuine answer. "Ow! Anyways, yaha aane mein koi problem toh nahi hui?", he asked casually. Nupur shook her head.

"That's good!", Mayank said and tried to smile normally but it seemed like he was faking. After all, he was too nervous to smile properly. "Kya khayogi?", he suddenly asked which brought Nupur out of her trance. "Anything non-veg!", Nupur replied slowly. "Fine!", Mayank said and called the waiter.

"Riddhima! Are you alright? Kya hua? Tum itni ghabrayi huyi kyu ho? Aur tumhare maathe par yeh chot kaise aayi?", Armaan softly asked Riddhima with concern as he was aiding her minor injury.

"Woh.. main mere friend ke ghar se apne ghar jaa rahi thi.. tab achanak se driver ne gaadi rok diya aur.. maine kuch gundo ki awaaz suni. Shayad unn logo ne lutne ki iraade se gaadi rukwaayi thi.. iss liye main darr kar waha se bhag rahi thi. Ussi time pe mujhe yeh chot lag gayi.", Riddhima explained the whole incident to Armaan.

"Tumhe akele bahar jaane ki kya zarurat thi, Riddhima? Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh?", Armaan asked her and a fear of losing someone dearer was depicting from the way he asked that.

"Armaan.. ghar pe koi nahi tha, aur driver tha iss liye main address lekar akele chali gayi. Mujhe kya pata tha ki yeh sab hoga.", Riddhima said and suddenly she started crying again holding Armaan's shirt sleeve tightly in his fist. "Main bohot darr gayi thi Armaan.", she said and hugged him instantly.

"It's over now. Main tumhare saath hu naa. Don't get scared. Sab theek hai.", Armaan replied, hugging her and brushing his hand gently over her silky hairs.

"I should remember that I'm blind aur ek blind ladki akeli kuch bhi nahi kar sakti. I'm handicapped and I have to accept this reality, no matter how harsh it is.", Riddhima said weakly which prickled Armaan's heart.

"Please don't say that.", Armaan felt his eyes filled with tears. It was hurting him! He broke the hug and wiping off her tears, he said softly cupping her face "You aren't handicapped. Phir kabhi bhi aisa mat kehena. Har waqt sirf aakho ki roshni hi zaruri nahi hoti, dil ki roshni bhi zaruri hoti hai aur woh tumhare pas hai, Riddhima. You've the light of heart, you have love. You know how to love selflessly and that's what matters the most."

Hearing Armaan, for a moment, Riddhima felt a desire, a crave to see him, but she couldn't as she was helpless. Her heart fluttered as his every word collided with her eardrums. She felt something strange which gave her mind and heart peace, which clearly showed on her face.

"I should drop you home. Chalo.", Armaan said and making her stand by holding her arms securely, he walked with her outside!

Mayank and Nupur were quietly eating. "Kya baat karu? Kya kahu? Kya kehena chahiye?", Nupur's heart was asking her mind a lot of question but sadly she had no answer. So she better chose to just keep eating.

"Nupur, tum iss shaadi se khush hona?", Mayank asked her and hearing this unpredictable question, Nupur felt a kind of shock at first, but after a while, she replied with an honest smile, "Maa aur Riddhima khush hai toh main bhi khush hu."

Mayank was happy to get this reply but perhaps he was not satisfied. Perhaps he wanted to hear something else, but what that was, he didn't know. "Aaj se shaadi tak hum nahi mil paayenge, according to the ritual and still you are okay with that?", he asked in disbelief. Nupur nodded.

A forced smile crept on Mayank's lips. "Well, its same here with me. Anyways, i hope tumne yeh lunch enjoy kiya.", he said smilingly, trying to lighten up the environment. "Yeah I felt good.", Nupur replied sweetly and finished eating her lunch.

"Okay so let me drop you home. Theek hai?", Mayank asked and nodding, Nupur said, "Theek hai." They both stood up and walked aside of the table, where suddenly, Nupur lost her balance and was about to fall backwards, but at the right moment, Mayank held her wrist and pulled her closer to himself. Going in a different world with each other, they shared a beautiful eye-lock.

Preview of Chapter 7: Mayank-Nupur's haldi, sangeet and mehendi, AR moments!

Ending the update here! Hope you liked it! Pls don't expect any MN romance before marriage because by now you all have understood that their love will blossom after they are married, so just wait! ;) Anyways, start commenting! Don't forget to click the like button! :D

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago