New SS - MG - A VICIOUS LOVESTORY - Part 4 - Pg 34 - Page 7

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nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 T he PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg...maan is getting it all wrong...

geet saved his dad...n he thinks she is responsible fro his situation...

what is he planning to do with her??

continue soon...

thnx for PM...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx for the PM.Loved the concept.MSK always thinks he is smart,didn't listen to the full story of what happened.Ofcourse he is right because of Geet his father is at the hospital,otherwise he wouldn't be saved.Wonder how Geet is going to face the consequences of the good deed she has done.Curious to read more.Continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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do continue soon. thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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don't break the continuity ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on new SS.

Brilliant start ...cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Holla,

peeps did you like the epi today?? well i didn't see but i definitely read the written updates.

am thinking of updating soon in an hours time probably.

well all my fans of we belong together, lets see am in a good mood today. i might think of giving an update for it today. not sure!! lets see how long my mood is sustained.

Tada.

Love ya - Asma
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part - 2

Madhuri Singh Khurana had taken the first flight from Delhi to Mumbai; she seemed relieved to see her husband recovering. She kept fidgeting around the room thinking about that girl's nerve to mess with her family, pacing here and there, her wait seemed unending. Finally she saw Maan coming her way, she walked upto him and questioned him regarding the progress of pursuit of that girl.

Maan not wanting to involve his family into it paid less attention towards his maaji's question and nodded his head to give her a confirmation which meant business. Madhuri seemed relieved knowing Maan will look after it. Even if it meant dragging that girl to court she would do it without hesitation, god forbid if he would have passed away, how she would spend the rest of her life without her suhaag. Pushing aside the negative thoughts she went inside to join Sunil and Savitri.

On the other hand Maan called up his detective agency.

Agent: Mr. Khurana i was about to call you. We have some good news for you, it would be great if you could drop by our office and we shall discuss the same!

Maan: Alright be there in half an hour.

Saying that he disconnected the call and left to meet the agent.

At the agents office:

Agent: Welcome Mr. Khurana, please have a seat. Would you like to have some tea or coffee?

Maan: No thanks agent, please address me as Maan.

Agent: Theek hai Maan. Apparently jo larki ko trace karne ko bola tha, yeh raha uska pura biodata. (Handling him a thick file)

Maan: I am impressed agent, ek din mein yeh sab? Must say you are the best.

Agent: Thanks Maan! Waise iska naam hai Geet, Geet Handa. The only daughter of Mohinderlal Handa and Rano Handa. Her father Mohinderlal works as a junior assistant in a law firm. Her mother Rano is a housewife. Geet ke alaawa uska ek bara bhai hai Brij, paanch saal se States mein hai to pursue his further studies. Geet se chaar saal bara hai, meaning he is 25 now. Jab se gaya hai tab se lauta nahi. Aur uske aane ke chances bhi kaam hai ab.

Maan: You've done a detailed researched. Must say impressive.

Agent: Maan Singh Khurana wants the best and we give the best. Continuing further, this girl just turned 21 last month. She has done her BBA with specialization in finance from Saint Paul University. She was working past 3 years while studying to fund her education. She was working in a consultancy firm in the legal department. She left the job 3 weeks back due to employer harassment.

Maan: Employer harassment!

Agent: Yes. The typical harassment every employer does, low pay scale, more working hours, blaming for mistakes. Etc, etc.

Maan: What else that could be important to know?

Agent: She is planning to do her CA, her dream is to fly to London, open her own firm and settle down there. Waise I don't think she can be a threat to anyone. She is smart, intelligent, witty but not cunning. She is a pretty good fighter, backstabbing is not her game. Jisse jo kehna hai woh muh pe keh degi. Aur agar kise ka muh todna hoga woh bhi karegi.

Maan: Meaning she won't harm anyone without a reason.

Agent: Exactly. I am waiting for a fax to come, aah here it is. Yeh raha uske ghar ka pata, her features and some other details. I still doubt if she is responsible for your dad's condition. However you still go through it, if you insist we will abduct her. That's all from my end!

Maan: Thanks agent! I will let you know in a day or two.

Agent: Waise Maan, careful she already doubts that some people are behind her. She hit my source last night while he was following her home and fled from the scene.

Maan: Thanks once again agent.

At Handa House:

Geet: Babaji kaun tha woh stalker? Ghode ki dum se bhi kala tha woh, ek toh itna andhera tha upar se woh itna kala aur gira bhi kaale gadhe mein. Kahin kalia the crow nahin tha? Nahin Babaji kalia the crow toh sab jaanwaro ki madat karta hai, woh mujhe kyun stalk karenga, haina Babaji. Arrey Geet kitni budhu hai tu woh 21st century kalia the crow ka sautela bhai tha, jo sirf aur sirf ladkiyon ko stalk karta hai. Chalo mein fir se wahin jaake check karti hu.

Geet started walking towards the place where she last met the stalker. On the other hand Maan reaches the same place. He is also heading to the same place where Geet last beat the stalker. All of a sudden there is BANG, both of them bang into each other, their heads hit each other. Geet looks up quickly to find Maan staring at her angrily. Geet quickly puts on her angry mode and starts yelling 'Gadha dekh kar nahi chal sakta tha kya. Ullu ki dum'. Maan is still looking at her, he can't believe his luck he met her on the way. Geet starts blabbering by herself 'Babaji kya ullu ki dum hoti hai, nahi na. Haan I should tell him ki woh ulli ki pankh hai. Haina? Right!' she looks at him angrily and says 'Oye Mister ek baar kehne se samajh nahi aata, ulli ki pankh'.

Maan feels like strangling her to death, he keeps staring at her, Geet gets ticked off seeing him staring at her, suddenly a thought comes to her mind 'Oye Geet kya yeh wahi kal raat wala stalker toh nahi hai, shayad isliye woh tujhe baar baar ghur raha hai. Kahin kidnap kar diya toh, oye teri Babaji madad karna'. With that she looks back at him and realizes he is looking around the surroundings and then back at Geet her thought is confirmed he is Mr. Stalker, with the remaining courage in her she pokes him and says 'It's ok meine tumhe maaf kiya'.

Saying that she turns around and starts walking fast, Maan looks at her running silhouette going away from him. He realizes he needs to stop her, infact kidnap her and take her away till the time her punishment is not served. Maan shouts 'Stop right there girl!' Geet 'Oye Babaji yeh wahi hai Stalker'. She looks back for a moment and sees him jogging up her way. Turning around she starting running as fast as she can, Maan sees her running away he runs faster than her and holds her by her waist. Geet starts struggling with his hold and starts slapping his hand away to get them off her waist. She feels him tightening the hold around her waist, her heart starts beating faster, she could feel bad vibes about this man. Before he could do anything she starts yelling frantically at the top of her voice 'HELP! Bachaoo, koi meri madad karo'.

Maan quickly puts one hand over her mouth to stop her from screaming, and the other hand still around her waist. He moved forward and places his chin on her shoulder and says 'Chilavoo mat, I just want to speak to you. Ghabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Jaisa mein kehta hu waisa karo, lekin agar tumne koi bhi harkat ki jaise ki abhi tum bhaag rahi thi aur uske baad chilaa rahi thi, agar aisa kuch bhi kiya toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga'. His threat seemed to make her scare, she stopped scratching his hands, stopped slapping his hands. He removed his hand from her mouth and quickly taking a satin cloth out from his pocket he pulled her hand and tied it behind her back.

Geet: Dekho meine kuch nahi kiya, tum yeh kya kar rahe ho. Mujhe jaane do please, Babaji tumhara bhala karenge.

Maan: Sshh!! Mujhe lagta hai tumhe meri baat samajh nahi aati. Chup chap chalogi toh sab theek hoga. Waise bhi jo sab bhi hua woh sirf aur sirf tumhari wajah se. Samjhi, ab chalo mere saat.

Precap 1:

Maan: Work for me. Mere liye kaam karo.

Geet: Mar javoongi magar aapke liye kaam nahi karungi.

Maan: Theek hai tumhe nahi karna toh mat karo. Mein bhi dekhta hu tum kaise nahi karti.

Precap 2:

Maan: I gave you a choice, you didn't agree to it, magar ab you have no choice apart from being my slave.

Holla peeps, wazzup!! First of before you come to any conclusions about the precap let me tell you no matter what the story will have a positive ending. I am one of those person who believes in postive ending, no matter whatever is the scenario. Ab khush ho??

Next update starts all the violent parts and problems, all negativity so stay geared up.

All my We Belong Together fans, am sorry for not having being able to update soon. But I promise an update for the same soon. I will update that first and then post new update for this SS.

For all the new readers who are intrested to receive PM's do add me 'hansasma' in your buddy list and I shall accept right away.

Uff!! Kitna sab likhna parta hai. Its so easy to imagine things from the start till the end in your brain, but typing is so difficult. Wish there was a system where you just say and the computer types. LMAO!!

My complaints are same as the other writers. Am sending out hundreds and hundres of PM's (even I don't know how many hundreds, but definitely more than 100) but very few likes and most importantly lesser comments.Ab comments bhi 1 liners hai. Please leave lots of comments, you views, opinion, suggestions is all what matters to me. Ahem!! Even your likes matters a lot.

So peeps hope you will press the like button and leave me with loads of comments.

Chalo then me signing off!! Till then Shaba Khair, Goodnight, Adieu, Senoritas.

Edited by hansasma - 13 years ago

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