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Posted: 13 years ago
I was waiting for the part to be complete actually so I could give a huge comment then, but I couldn't stop myself after reading the part.

You have done an amazing job Mansi, the track right now, and the sensitivity attached to every thing that's going on, is in no way easy to write. I've loved every bit of the part till now. Poor Armaan, he has been unknowingly going through so much turmoil from the tender age of 10. And one clearly understands how it has affected him deeply. I believe you've studied this so well. Like mentioning things about him trying and protect his loved ones even hurting himself in the process which is the result of the fear of losing them. That seems so logical and one totally relates to his feeling. And hats off that you've actually gone deep in studying this problem and writing it out so well.

Riddhima is his pillar right now, and her calm, strong and confident ways of managing him is extremely touching. She is an amazing girl and the way you've described their relation grow in these last few parts is striking.

Loved the part till now :) please continue really soon, so eager to know what happens next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
simply awestruck by ur writing
just loved it
can't wait to read further
plz update soon
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

I was waiting for the part to be complete actually so I could give a huge comment then, but I couldn't stop myself after reading the part.


You have done an amazing job Mansi, the track right now, and the sensitivity attached to every thing that's going on, is in no way easy to write. I've loved every bit of the part till now. Poor Armaan, he has been unknowingly going through so much turmoil from the tender age of 10. And one clearly understands how it has affected him deeply. I believe you've studied this so well. Like mentioning things about him trying and protect his loved ones even hurting himself in the process which is the result of the fear of losing them. That seems so logical and one totally relates to his feeling. And hats off that you've actually gone deep in studying this problem and writing it out so well.

Riddhima is his pillar right now, and her calm, strong and confident ways of managing him is extremely touching. She is an amazing girl and the way you've described their relation grow in these last few parts is striking.

Loved the part till now :) please continue really soon, so eager to know what happens next.




Thanks a ton dear, after reading your comment i've been smiling so much that my cheeks have started to hurt 😆 but you are right about one thing ,okay all of them, that Ridhhima is a strong girl. Personally I don't like those chui-mui rondu kind of girls probably that has effected my portrayal of Ridhhima. Armaan is not weak either but the pain of loss has mde him bit vulnerable at the moment. It's only the beginning the real moments are going to come in next upcoming installment.. and would you believe me if I say I haven't done any kind of 'deep research work'. I did went through few things to make the it sound real apart from that it's all fiction and my imagination which I'm so glad had hit the right target..

I'll be waiting for your views once I complete the part, do let me know what you think about it... right now just trying my best to complete it ASAP 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Comment on Last installment is updated on Page 99😳
Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#660099">Comment on Lastinstallmentis updatedon Page 99😳</font>




Thanks a ton sweetheart, I know waiting is such a tedious job.. but don't worry this time I'm hoping to finish the part soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mansibharti




Thanks a ton sweetheart, I know waiting is such a tedious job.. but don't worry this time I'm hoping to finish the part soon..


he he he...Don't worry di..aapke saath rehkar ab aadat ho gayi hai😉...Shholllyy.😆...waiting my sweetest di...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago


okay guys, want to ask something. i have an important portion ready with me, would you like me to update it today or you want the whole update together. let me know by 11 tonight.


Will b waiting. 😃 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mansibharti



okay guys, want to ask something. i have an important portion ready with me, would you like me to update it today or you want the whole update together. let me know by 11 tonight.


Will b waiting. 😃 😃


Di🤗... Is this even a question to ask😳...of course an installment will do my Di..Will be waiting...Plzzz update...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
is that even a question to ask


di update like now!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
we need an installment plz update mansi eagerly waiting for it

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