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wow...muskan.over 400 likes

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Hi Muskan...Congrats on the new thread! All da best! Thnaks 4 da pm n update! Loved the update...it was emotional n awesome. Poor Geet...what's up wid Maan? Y did he marry her? He just left her alone on the bed? Always angry...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Eagerly waiting... and before that...

Thousands laid down their lives so that our country breath this day...
never forget their sacrifice..
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Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

Eagerly waiting... and before that...

Thousands laid down their lives so that our country breath this day...
never forget their sacrifice..
Happy Independence day

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behkudi
part 17



She curled up & cried.. Feelings of shame and regret washed over her...unsure why she was feeling so hurt..being betrayed of the emotions or her feelings for him..or ???? the image of his bare back.. walking away..with his head dropped down ...all she could see..

hers cries turned into hiccups.. when she heard a loud sound from the washroom. She wrapped the spread around herself & ran to the washroom... she was shocked at the sight of his self destruction.. he was smashing the mirrors.. everything in the washroom. Only thing she knew abt him was his temper.. the extend to which he could go in his anger.. the limit ..was her.. it always started from her & had to end on her.. she forgot all abt her pain, insecurity, betrayal..at that moment to her was him only him..she had the wits to kill herself but couldn't bear to see him like this.. she held his hand..as it reached the mirror again.. his fuming eyes glared at her spitting fire as he pulled his hand away from her touch, for a moment she felt terrified, then the fear of him hurting himself gave her the guts to protest.. she held back again..this time firmly.. he snapped..she didn't let go instead she almost moved to & fro with his hand.. he backed her up against the wall. Grabbing her wrists, he pinned them above her head, his hips pressed hard against hers. The thin cotton.. slipped down.. bearing her as he was. Her skin burned every inch that was pressed against his hot passionate self. Don't hurt urself she cried into the kiss.. he pressed closer to her, pulling her against his body. He looked at her eyes angrily.. & kissed away the trail of the tears.. blinding her with his complain... his lips seemed to have a language of its own as they wiped even the trace of the tears .


His hand went under her right leg & lifted her up, spreading her legs and wrapping it around his waist. He grasped the delicate sensitive skin between his lips & teeth as her throat came in level with his mouth. She heaved & began to gasp when he continued to lick & feast at her skin. Her eyes widened with the sudden pain when he entered her in one swift movement. She gasped as the burning pain drained her. He was too big...but the pain seemed nothing infront of the rage & passion that filled him.. the anger in his eyes..she didn't dare to struggle even if she did there was no escape, she was pinned between him & the wall. He pulled out and pushed into her again twice more, each time entering more deeply until he was fully sheathed & as he lifted her up higher, his lips and tongue leaving a wet trail on her tender skin.


He got his attention to her b***** pulling her higher & higher while thrusting into her. He was not gentle but she didn't protest. She knew it only make him more raged & furious.. & she couldn't let him do anything to self.. but that was not the only term..her pain seemed to disappear as he made love to her so passionately. Every unsaid word seemed to make sense..his every thrust seemed to cry his love for her..though it was not so gentle or dreamy..still her heart seemed to sing in harmony with his..as she writhed and moaned, thrusting her chest forward to meet his hungry mouth only to drive him insane as her scent engulfed him. His one hand was still under her right thigh pulling it higher.. spreading her further...with ever thrust of his. She suddenly left her leg quivering as she found a magical sensation blinding her.. she dug her nail into him. Pulling him closer. He smirked & kissed her passionately.. she shied & lowered her lashes... oh.. he was blown to a magical world as he felt himself grunting in pleasure. He collapsed on her as she fell on him.. drowning on her pool of ecstasy.


before even she could come out of her ecstasy he carried her over to the bed and tossed her onto it on her back. He climbed on, keeping her legs spread wide as he lifted her towards his mouth. She looked into his eyes with a curious stare, his hot breath covering her face... the passion & fire still hovered on him.. she was awed by the sight.. he was all over her.. as he drew in again with a similar intensity. She couldn't expect herself to get aroused ..but she was ...as his passion didn't seem to end any sooner... it was only there to last...for ever.

She had no clue when she lost track of everything..& drifted into a deep sleep...when she fluttered her lids..she was pressed against Maan's chest, his arm around her waist. She smiled weakly seeing him smile peacefully in her embrace. She slowly kissed his chest.. he tucked her closer. Even the thought whether he loved..he cared ...wat he wanted didn't seem to come any where in her mind.. it all lost long back in his behkudi.. she knew she couldn't live without him... her caressed his back softly..only to feel him get aroused with her touched even having a night long passion.. she blushed & closed her eyes.

She turned alone in the bed ..when she heard some sound in the wash room. She wanted to stretch ..she could..it hurt..every nerve end seem to give way to his passion. She pulled the spread to cover her curves which had his passion marked all over. Every time she thought that was it... he drew her to a different level next time... how she wished there was love too... then she didn't feel her heart heavy..at all.. may be because she knew it deep within.. there was love.. at least she did!!! yes she loved him ..loved him more than she could express it in words.

she pulled the spread closer..when she heard the washroom door knob turned. He walked in wearing his white towel around his waist & wiping his hair. She gulped looking at his bared shoulders perfectly toned abs his every muscle.. she could feel her self feeling a wave of heat down her soured parts already. She looked away..& wondered how could she even think..forget feeling..

Like he could sense her skin getting melted ..next moment he was under the spread predatory making love to her all over again. His fresh scent just swept her to new thrill. His behkudi only appear to become more ablaze as they came closer.. every time.. making him more lusciously obstreperous & aggressive drowning her deeper into him with no space for doubts..shallowness. His every act was so filled with wholeness she could no longer think anything beyond him & their togetherness.

It was probably evening when Geet woke up with her stomach rumbling. The whole bed was in a mess with their act of behkudi.. her bangles few broken..few just lying around.. she was thankful to god that her jewels were off in the hospital itself..otherwise god knows wat he would have done to it... she smiled softly..


she lazily walked to the washroom & washed herself. She didn't know, why she was so happy. She smiled..shied..blushed..as she felt the water touched her every part that burned yet again & felt awakened. She closed her eyes .. & his face ..all she could see him. She changed into a fresh cloths & felt really shy to go out. It was so odd the whole day she is been sleeping.. but she was so hungry. She slowly came down knotting her duppata.

Daadi ' aapke mama ji phone aaya tha. Aap unse baat karo wo log bahut pareshan hain
Geet '
ji
Geet reluctantly looked around. Daadi handed her the cordless phone.
Geet punched the numbers & restlessly waited. The moment rano spoke.. all Geet do was gulp her saliva.
Rano slowly inquired '
Geet?
Beta tum hi hona?
Geet '
ji mama
rano ' tum teehk hona beta
Geet looked at Daadi & then softly '
ji mama
rano ' yeh sab itna aachnak huwa beta..hum log kuch nahi kar payen
Geet could hear papaji in the back.. ussen pucho wanha sab teehk hain kya?
Geet ' mama sab teehk hain, aap humri chinta mat karyen
Daadi ' humari bhi unse baat kara dijeyen
Geet gave the phone to her.

Daadi ' hume puchna tha ki aap phag pheren ki liyen kab aayenge
rano smiled weakly ' ji kal teehk rahega na
Daadi ' jaisen aapki marzi
rano ' ji

latter in the evening Daadi sat with Geet on the dinner table. Geets eyes where glued at the door. She kept looking at the door waiting for him. Daadi served her the dinner.. she couldn't eat.. her eyes where looking for him worrying if he had anything since morning... she did try calling him but he never picked the call. Was he still angry .. when Daadi asked..
she murmured pata nahi unka gussa khatam huwa ki nahi
Daadi smiled .. ji
Geet ' nahi daadji kuch nahi


It was past mid night..maan still had not got back. Geet sat at the dinning table..looking at the food.. she wondered why she couldn't eat when she was so hungry. She hated own self to be so madly lost her heart to someone who doesn't care for anything.

-PREV PART 16 NEXT PART 18-


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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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OMG OMG...😲. someone plz pinch me😉... i m first😃... oh my goodness👍🏼... i cn't tell... i m sooo happy...

nd tht too on 15 aug...⭐️🥳

gr888 day...👏

happy independence day to all...😊🤗


awesome update muskan... but nw where is maan????😕
Edited by krati5 - 14 years ago

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