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Posted: 13 years ago

behkudi

part 18


It was past mid night..maan still had not got back. Geet sat at the dinning table..looking at the food.. she wondered why she couldn't eat when she was so hungry. She hated own self to be so madly lost her heart to someone who doesn't care for anything.

Daadi came & woke her up
Geet immediately straighten herself.
Daadi '
aap soyen nahi?
Geet '
ji wo Maan
Daadi smiled '
humne socha tha..kumse kam shaadi ke baad yeh thoda kaam kam karengen ..
she sighed..sadly
Geet narrowed her brows & looked at her curiously..when did Maan work... if she was not wrong Daadi only told her to mend him..like getting him to the main office & all..
Daadi '
pata nahi intna zada kaam kyun karten hain wo
Geet '
lekin Daadi aapne kaha tha ki wo tho main office aaten hi nahi, koi board meeting bhi attend nahi karthen
Daadi rolled her eyes '
mat pucho beta.. mujhe tho uske kaam karne ka tarika samjh nahi aata
pura din..aur sari raat kaam ..meetings.. khudi hi personally jaken site visit karna.. uff... humne tho aapko isliya unka assistant banya tha..taaki..wo thoda stress kam len..lekin, dehka kya hogaya
Daadi takes her to his study
yeh dehko jab se inho ne KC sambhala hain har saal ka award sirf inhe hi mila hain..
har award..
geet looked at them in awe..
Geet thought of the every moment she asumed him to useless.. how could be there so much of misunderstanding. Her eyes filled up.
Daadi immediately lifted her chin..
hume aap se koi shikayat nahi beta. Infact aap ke kane se pheleni bar Maan ne board meeting attend ki thi.
Geet looked at her in shock. Meren kahne se..he listen to her.. when did that happen..where was she when all this happened..how come she never realize anything...anything at all.
Daadi '
unhe tho mano board members se nafrat hain
lekin beta aap hi bolyen business aisen thodi chalta hain
Daadi '
hum tho aap se bahut ummed lagayen beta hain. Mana hum thoden khud garz hain lekin..kya karen wagar maine unhe kisi ki baat manthe dehka hain tho wo sirf aap hain. .
Aur aap hi hain jo unke gussen ke samne kadi rahen payeen hain..
bahki tho koi bhi sectary tho aaden din main job choden ki chalen gayen
jo nahi gayeen Maan unhe nikal denthen hain
actually unke gussen ke samne tho koi bhi ladki kadi nahi ho pati.
Aab aap jaake so jaayen, zaror unka koi meeting hoga

geet couldn't believe anything wat daadi said.

Geet halfheartedly went to her room. She saw the room was all nicely made. She took his photo..& hugged him.. she didn't even know anything abt him, she only misunderstood his words, his actions. She always thought of him as a flirt..jobless.. careless.. but he cared.. & that too only for her.. she didn't know whether to believe it.. she closed her eyes..when she didn't believe him then why does she love him so much, its been only few days they have met each other. Why..she love this total stranger so much, who only hurt her..
kya unka gussa hi unka pyar hain
kya mera dil unke iss pyar ko samajtha hain..chata hain
how can that even be possible.
How can she love him when all he has done to her is humiliate her, claim her in the wildest way,.. a naughity smile creeped her lips.. . Does he lose himself ..like the way she losses herself in his embrace. Her cheeks became red in embarrassment.


She had to shamelessly accept she does lose herself to his behkudi from the day one.. from the day he kissed her in the lift. Probably it was this strong attraction that taught her to trust him..love him..beyond her own self.. beyond all sensibility. She held his pic & turned to look at the large bed that dominated the room. Their bed..she chuckled..the bed she would be sharing with Maan for rest of her life. She took a deep breath as a shiver ran through her at the thought. Their closeness his behkudi made her restless & excited. Their previous night was lurid yet pleasurable. She felt really embarrassed ..how her whole body ached to be intimate again with him. How it longed for his touch, feel his behkudi.

She shook her head that was tangled in the thoughts. She turned to face at the window..& stared out at the sky.. still holding his pic close to her.. the thought he listened to her.. she smiled deep inside..
he came to stop that wedding..
he knew she would hurt herself..otherwise..how did he.. she shied
he straight took her to the hospital..she chuckled..didn't tell anyone though
when he was so successful why he never protested when she accused him to be careless.


Kya chaten ho...kya hain aapken dil main ..main kaisen pata lagavoon
something within told her...his heart only had love for her.. she sighed & slept embracing his pic.

Next morning Geet awoke alone in bed. Looking at the pillows & the spread she realized that Maan had not slept with her last night. She need not look at the pillow or spread.. had he been here..he would have not let her sleep at the first place... she shied at her own thought. Suddenly she raised up..did that mean he had not come home yet!! she immediately got ready & rushed down. A smile formed on her face to see papaji & mama sitting in the hall. She ran & hugged them.
Daadi '
humne nakul ko beja tho aap ko bulne ke liyen. Aap washroom main thi shayad
she nodded


after having breakfast
rano '
challen beta
Geet looked uncomfortable
Daadi '
haan beta jaayen
Geet '
ji wo Maan
Daadi ' usski tum chinta mat karo, hum unne kah denge.
Geet didn't know if it was a good idea to go without telling him. Something within told her he will get mad.
Geet ' main unhe phone kardeti hoon
she tried calling him.. his phone was as usual not reachable. She didn't want to go. But then how was she to refuse her parents. Wat explanation will she give them. Only she could understand how restless he will get if he doesn't find her when he get s back. She called pinky & asked where he was.
Pinky sir tho
jaipur gayen hain..


Geet ' jaipur!!!!
Geet was annoyed how could he go out of station without telling her.
Geet '

kab gayen?
Pinky ' kal gayen then she added.. he didn't tell u
well that was even more hurting now.
But still she couldn't have the guts to leave without telling him. She only gets upset..but he will bring the whole house down in his anger.
Rano immediately asked in concern ' sab teehk hain na?
Geet smiled weakly & nodded. She didn't want them to misunderstand Maan now. She fearfully agreed to leave with them.

-behkudi part 18-
-PREV PART 17 NEXT PART 19-

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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
whoop whoop me first
Awesome update
Loved how she was alwaiiz thinking of him...why didn't maan inform her about anything...is he losing interest in geet or is he just tired from all the love making an decided to take a break lol
Awww the geet who hated it wen maan touched he is now aching for his single touch 😳
Cont soon Xx...

Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me 2nd???
ohhh nooo...

awesum update di...
geet has got to knw more abt
maan just by entering the house!!!😳
wonder why maan left sooo suddenly!!!!πŸ˜•

loved geet all the way through!!!!
her love...her trust...
her anticipation...
tht was beautifully depicted di!!!!!!😳

and yes...waiting for our dashing munda to be back
at least for pug phere!!!!πŸ˜†
but am still confused with his behaviour!!!!
he loves her right...thts pretty obvious the way
he expresses his love..

phir bhi yeh dooriyan kyun??πŸ˜•

continue super soon di!!


Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet



yes yes
added tht too!!!!!!
me defo gonna be late 4 colg tomorrowπŸ˜ƒ

koi naa...ek din muski di ke naam...
i mean js't imagine ur prof...lookin like msk of muski di ...everything will be seize out...lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally muski.. u answered most of my questions in this update...

I was wondering how Maan can be like this in your FF.. You always portray Maan in such a away that everyone wans to fall in love with him ( even in kashish πŸ˜‰)...

I am sure in the next update we will get to see angry Maan back..

Now I have a couple of more Q's

1) Why Maan is alone?
2) Cold war between Dev n Maan


Please continue soon.

Edited by febinyusuff - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part now the clouds are clearing ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update! Di m confused wid maan emotion n behaviour. I mean why is maan not confessing wat is maan fearing for?? But love the update n lop u alot di. Waiting 4 update
*edited*
awesome update di! Jst love it. Update soon
Edited by Gurlygirl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh loved the upd.alas geet knws maan is nt flirt bt a damn hardwrking n serious. Geet going her maayka without the knowledge of maan. God knw wat will maan do
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Posted: 13 years ago
no maan...me missin him...i mean geet missin him...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
she never new actual maan...he is the best watever he do ...best businessman always...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
impressive...geet dear u hv to lot of research on ur so called husband...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
par husband hath main toh aaye...where is he ???????πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
now wen he'll be bak he 'll surely create a havoc out of it...
seriouly saduuu...big time...
conitnue di...
chao...
lv u di...
p.s:- HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY...
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Posted: 13 years ago
update more... want to knw more about ds weird behaviour of maan

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