SS: Almost lovers (Thread one) - Page 31

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

yayy...me first again!😛

guess me is a good stalker!!😉😉😉

rehan sounds like a good guy...bechare ko maan ne hi frame kiya hoga😡

but i still love MSK😆 or NPM to be more precise...u cant make me hate him..i kno..u want him all for urself thats why u doing this😡😡

chalak lomdi😆😆

u told us about dad...mom ke vichaar nahi bataye..about non-interference policy😕

bechara rehaan...maan knows about him now😕

This time a small smirk spread across Maan's face. "Hmm…what about you Ms Handa?"

Geet just smiled and said "No I don't have women stare at me. I guess I don't give off the lesbian vibe."

the update was just awesome... i loved it...👏👏👏⭐️⭐️👍🏼

here are my detailed comments...

The simple 4 lines poem is beautiful.. well showing the storyline or future track..

U r making me love more and more Rehan's character. What I thought was correct. Rehan from middle class background. Its good that Geet's dad didn't have any hand in geet and rehan's split.

"being careful not to trip in her saree."

Poor Geet…….😆

"Geet's face broke into a big smile. "Hi! You're the guy from the hotel a few weeks ago. I don't know whether you remember or not but my friend dropped her drink on you."

As if I could forget you, He smirked at the thought but only said, "Is that so?"

Nice dialogues dear. Well written. Thumbs up…..👏👍🏼

Geet just smiled and said "No I don't have women stare at me. I guess I don't give off the lesbian vibe."

Oh my god awesome dialogue….. I loved it…👏

"It's a date then, Maan thought with a small grin."

Poor geet she doesn't know his intentions….. (😉)

"My boyfriend." And with that she ran off.

Ohh she droped a bomb here……. And u r a cliff hanger… couldn't u complete his reaction… now I have to wait till next update for his reaction… …. By the why when r u going to update???

AUTHOR's NOTE

Firstly I loved all the comments! They made my week!
Keep it up!
Secondly this update gives a further glance into the beginnings of Maaneet's relationship!

Thanks your updates are motivating our comments…..

And yes it did give the basic how maaneet's relationship started I loved this part… actually I loved each and every part.. u r always surpricing me with twists. The story is processing so naturally. thanks for the awesome ff.

for the awesome update and pm