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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: todayzstar

hey dear plzz dnt stp ur ff dear...plzz cntnue itt..
awesome updateee
superbb ..cntnue soonn


am not going to stop giving tortures by giving updates 😆
gonna update in few mins
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Posted: 13 years ago
any one up for another update ?????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk-1


i thought many would have forgot my ff but am so happy that u still remember it didi 😊
i ll continue this ff for sure ..
next part coming up in few mins

no i remembered it. I love your stroies and your other FF too. I know u are not able to update regularly but that can not dsicount the fact that these stories are wonderful
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Posted: 13 years ago
me waiting eagerly for the next part 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
since the last part was small , am updating another small one again 😆 !!!!
thank you friends for leaving your wonderful comments ..
i hope i had replied to everyone ..😊
sorry if i had left some ...😭

add "mrk_pm" to your buddy list for update pms

PART - 14

geet was sitting on the shore relaxing under a big umbrella wearing a pick top and shorts . hearing song from her I-pod and humming . yes !! they had arrived in Goa the night before !!! they had booked a cottage very near facing the shore which had a private beach .. cottage had 5 rooms which they shared accordingly .. vaibhav and chitra , geet and pinky , arjun and annie , dadima and maan had separate rooms .. everyone slept a little longer due to the night flight and they reached there nearly @ 1 AM in morning . but our geet who dint get sleep after 7 decided to take a tour around the cottage and settled near the shore ...


maan was the second one to wake up . he got freshened and checked if any one had woke up . upon not finding geet in her room , he decided to check outside ... he walked towards the shore and found her with closed eyes and enjoying music ... he called her twice but she dint respond ... she had kept the volume so high that even he could hear the song a bit .. he suddenly thought of a plan and had a devilish smile on his lips .

after 2 mins geet screamed her lungs out when water was poured on her ..she started shouting "tsunami !!! mummy muje bachao !! tsunami "
while maan stood few steps away laughing like a maniac !!! oh yea !!

It was only then she realised she was still in the shore and it was fully maans act . her face became red with anger and ran towards him . he also started running away from her still laughing ..

In the mean time , everyone got up and came out hearing the noise only to find an angry geet running behind maan who was laughing his life out .. pinky without wasting time started recording it in her cell .. annie and arjun rushed towards them . but it was too late !!! our sherni geet somehow got hold of our Maan and both fell down .. geet sat on him and took sand and poured it all over him ..

maan : geet stop it !! wat are you doing ??
geet was now laughing at him : ha ha ha !! the great MSK is now dipped in sand by the famous Geet Iyer !!

annie and arjun some how managed to separate both of them while the rest of the family understood wat might have happened before and burst out laughing both of their state . one covered fully drenched wet while the other had a sand bath 😆 ..

when geet was about to walk away , maan lifted her before anyone could realise ..
geet : leave me you idiot , maron !!!
he kept his face straight and walked a bit towards the waves and splash !!!!!!!
maan : pay back !!!
geet : it was you who poured water on me first .

annie and arjun gasped and next thing that happened left them rolling on the floor laughing ...

maan felt in the water as geet pulled his hand .. both were drenched like a crow .. well now , who could not enjoy playing in water ??? annie , arjun and pinky joined them sooon and played till they lost all the bit of energy they had ...

They got cleaned up and had a nice family breakfast .. pinky felt bored and hence started clicking pics of everyone ..

annie and arjun posed for most of the pics ..pinky asked geet to sit with maan knowing she wont agree after the morning episode but to her surprise both of them behaved as if they had never fought ...



They took more pics outside their cottage .. some side hugs ...some keeping horns on the others head .. some giving weird expressions .. all together it was a day that they had enjoyed the most in their life !!!!!!


please hit the "like" button and leave your wonderful comments ..


Durga

Edited by mrk-1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear it was short but amazing update 👍🏼
loved it 😉
maan drenching geet and then their cute fight wow its really awesome 🤣
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsemmm
please update forever in love






Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg!maneet becum crazy..
Superb one..
Luvd the pic..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

no i remembered it. I love your stroies and your other FF too. I know u are not able to update regularly but that can not dsicount the fact that these stories are wonderful


to be true ,i never thought my ff would get such a response didi ..
am so happy didi ..
am not able to update regularly since i have exams lined up this may month ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow superb, awesome n lovely update.
Love the nok jok of maan n geet.
It just so sweet, cute n funny.
Do update soon dr.
Edited by bhawna02 - 13 years ago

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