SS/FF - With Or Without You - chp 38/pg144 - Page 94

OH butterfly...ye achcha...

pehle thori tareef karo..
phir thori minnat karo

bolo chullu bhar paani bharo
usse mein doob kar maro

ya toh update karo!!

tab jaake ye gabbar...
khush hoga..aur update dega...

kyon Thakur..
sahi bola na??

Sharu did you see the tea scene??

yaar ab poor Arnav with have second degree burns

and woh jaayegi...with burnol..

lagaigi...

uske..stubbled jaw par

aur kahegi
"bahut jal raha hai?"

aur woh ghoorega...

phir uska haath pakde ga

aur...bolega

"tere jaalaye hain..

uff tak na kaheinge

tu gar marhum lagay hai

toh yoon jalte raheinge..."

hahaha truee

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

OH butterfly...ye achcha...

pehle thori tareef karo..
phir thori minnat karo

bolo chullu bhar paani bharo
usse mein doob kar maro

ya toh update karo!!

tab jaake ye gabbar...
khush hoga..aur update dega...

kyon Thakur..
sahi bola na??

Ok how about this...
This is the best fanfic i have read on this fourm ever, and it is my favourite. You an exceptional writer and i really like your style of writing.

Thank you butterfly...

ye hui na baat!!

ab ek update..likha jaayega...

you just flit around here somewhere...

mein yoon gayee aur yoon aayee!! 😛

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

Sharu did you see the tea scene??

yaar ab poor Arnav with have second degree burns

and woh jaayegi...with burnol..

lagaigi...

uske..stubbled jaw par

aur kahegi
"bahut jal raha hai?"

aur woh ghoorega...

phir uska haath pakde ga

aur...bolega

"tere jaalaye hain..

uff tak na kaheinge

tu gar marhum lagay hai

toh yoon jalte raheinge..."

rush very well written 👏
i just wish that she repents and tries to manofy him
i am sure he will enjoy and fall in love with her some more 😍

@ bold haila so true, but i guess its her sentence not his 🤣
but he will full time ghoorega 😉 he will not say anything
now making her wonder why he is not telling anything ☺️

i hope CVs will keep up the viewers expectation mine has hit the sky already 😆

h aha..

oh i was being an utter romantic fool

i know..he is not going to do anything..

but yeah...may be she will try to go and make repairs

and he will shun it...

and she will start feeling bad..and that is how the love for her will start!!

kyon ki woh kuch nahi bolega..

and she will feel even more guilt

The last 2 updates were fab! Loved Khushi teasing Arnav in her sleep LOL 😆 these 2 just can't keep their hands off each other! I'd like to see Arnav squirm a bit more before they actually do it...😆 Plus I want them to do it after they admit they love each other not just cos they're physically attracted to each other... that'd be a lot more romantic. 😊 Please update the next chapter soon!!! 😃

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

h aha..

oh i was being an utter romantic fool

i know..he is not going to do anything..

but yeah...may be she will try to go and make repairs

and he will shun it...

and she will start feeling bad..and that is how the love for her will start!!

kyon ki woh kuch nahi bolega..

and she will feel even more guilt

we are in the same boat na 😭😭
and CVs taking advantage of it 😆
one arhi scene and we are fine for two days 😡

kushi's love will start after the marriage.
as he said , she will show her bholi soorat
and patao him 😆
i want to see his reaction when she runs behind
him to mano him 😉
she should take extra care of him
with juice, breakfast tea etc etc
now i am dreaming i better stop 😆

Amazing updates Vrush!!!!!!! Khushi is such a seductress in semi sleep, imagine how she leave arnav breathless when she is fully awake! 😆