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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

Awesome update!!!⭐️

Abhay cooked food for her...So sweet! Pyaar mein bechare ne kya kya nahi kiya..Pehle khana khaya aur ab banaya.😃 This profession suits Pia actually...she always asks him lot of questions..Poor Abhay!😆 Pia is a threat to a vampire!!😆 Loved this update!! Feeling bad for both Aryan and Peehu. Mohini is forcing Peehu. But why? And who's Mohini? You have expressed their emotions brilliantly.👍🏼 Continue soon and thanks a lot for Pm.😊

Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago

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srija

@-srija-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

Res

piya a threat 2 a vampire he he he.
Aryan:karwate badal rahe saari raat hum.aapki kasam.
Abhay is going to cook.thoda mere liye vi plz...
waiting update soon.

Tanzie really its too difficult to wait 4 the completion of ur update.no patience yar.jaldi karo.

Ok here goes my bakwash.

So peehu is staying 4 a month,

haye mera abhay sleeping beauty se najare nahi hata paraha.
Gud he is nt going 2 behave rudely nw onwards.

Abhay smiled...aww...

Kash mein maria aur cook ke expression dekh pati.
Abhay ne toh unhe statue bandadiya...he he he
pyar ne abhay ko cook vi banadiya.

Aryan called his sis??bechara daant sehena pada bt c supported him.after all c is his behena na...wil understand his feelings n love.

Aww...aryan yeh kya thha.couldnt wait to meet peehu hun,informer ka phone ek ring me uthadiya.

Lo suru hogayi miss question ki dukaan.
"Abhay my wounds!!where are they?"
arey abhay jaisa doctor ho toh wound rahega kya??

"u are not going anywhere.Don't move because doctor not me real one said last night that to heal these wounds you need rest,medicine etc.You were unconscious then.I talked to him in the morning as well.any more questions I will answer when I come back."

wah wah abhay kya chup kara diya miss question ko.gud shot...sangat ka ashar.

"what are you doing here Aryan?"
wow peehu kya act karti ho yar.muuhha...

Peehu u broke the heart of my darling aryan yar.

completed reading it 5th time.now here goes my remaining comments.

Issues,responsibilities ,rules tearing them apart bt love,desire,years of longing n yearning drawing them closer.
Tanzie u portrayed their emotions too well.
Missed aryan's humour yar.
I hate seeing aryan in so much pain.mujhe rona aaraha hai.

Loved the song tanzie.a bear hug to u 4 that song.
*sobbing*let me hold myself n wil comment then.dnt be shocked.still i hav lots 2 say...

I m back.

"she will kill me...kill you and everyone round us.."

who is this 'she' now?r u talking abt mohini?
Suspense hun...

Overall it was fantastic,fabulous,awesome,great,superb..wow..wow..wow.

Tanzie do update soon na plz...its really hard 2 wait 4 ur ffs yar.continue real soon.
I know u r bg bt tumhare ffs ke fans ko itna intezar vi mat karwawo.

Remaining comments 4 next update.till then take care.
Love u
srija.

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
@Heena...Shrish will kill you this time 🤣

wat i did😲😲😲, u were totally fair n maine bhi bas res hi to kiya😆😆😆😆

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
ya u r saved tanzie

shrish if tanz is saved , then whom r u planning to kill , me??😲😲😲

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#675

i luv this world war btwn u n shrish ,heena!!

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srija

@-srija-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

shrish if tanz is saved , then whom r u planning to kill , me??😲😲😲

chill down guys.i dnt want 2 witness a murder.

Edited by -srija- - 13 years ago

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#677

awesome update tanzie..i loved it...u wrote so well..

abhiya were as usual..super cute..just loved them...they both are falling for each other..infact piya already in love..poor abhay..will do anything to keep her away..and her KBC started here also...abhay..poor soul has to answer...but i loved it..and abhay cooking for piya...aww loved it

aryan and peehu were so sweet...but felt bad for aryan and peehu..both love each other...aryan is ready to acept her..but peehu cant come back due to mohini...

update soon..thanks for pm...

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#678

Guys...plz have mercy on me 🤣...let me finish... please...writing... writing 🤪

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#679

hey awesome update yaar👏👏
👏again u have floored us completely
i just loved abhiya in this update
he cooked for her so cute😳
and pia realising that abhay also loves him is amazing
i hope u r not trying to separate them soon
i want to see their budding romance and also their confession in front of each other😳
aryan peehu part was really touching 😭
what is stopping her from returning to aryan
is it mohini? she seems evil
anyways thanks for the pm and will be eagerly waiting for the next update

Edited by shivanirajput - 13 years ago