New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 65

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Awesome update! I'm glad Abhay is realizing that he cares for Piya and Piya should just admit she has fallen in love with Abhay! It was really sweet how Piya was in pain but all she was concerned about was the blood coming out of Abhay's eyes! I can't wait till Abhay and Piya admit to themselves that they are in love! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: ozzyie

Awesumme tnzie ...well written ...but too big ...😆

Originally posted by: Abhiya_vijata

Superb Update Tanzie..!It's was Awesome...Wow last lines were awesome..!I so loved ur writing..Wish I was gud at writing n not lazy😆..!Ur two FFs r d best one I have ever read..!Thanks for PM n Update soon..!!

Originally posted by: missglam

Hey tanzie

thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM

Omg ! Abhiya were superb! Thanks a lot dear 😳

it is amazing to see abhiya feel each other's pain, but gadha toh gadha hi hain na, samjh nahin pa raha hain why he feels for her! Chalo..atleast he admitted that he cares for her !! Lol He will admit and he will be very sweet to her but confession...sorry no no 😆

Wow abhay saved piya from wolves...fight scequence was good.. Abhay looks really hawwt when he angry .. Hehe..(official bodyguard ko bhi to compliment milna chahiye)... yes..he does look really hot when he's angry 😆

Awww abhay cud not see her in pain... I just loved the end part & abhay's concern ... glad you liked it 😳

Btw, who is mohini ? will know soon...she's a very imp character 😉

Precap sounds interesting..

Already waiting for the nxt part.. Continue soon

tc will update soon

Originally posted by: priya.1

tanzie mind blowing update!!!!!!!!!!!! specially the last part was just too good... superb yaar!!!!

thnx 4 da pm

Originally posted by: abhiora

ah tanzie!!wat terrific writing yaar'!!!just loved it!!omg!!i have no words 2 describe wat i felt as i read this..abhay and piya were simply WOW!!!soo..r they together nw??amazing work tanzie..u r jst briliant..nw update soon n thanx 4 pm!!

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

its amazing update soon can't wait for next part thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: .rumki.

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wow superb awesome update tanzie.this is the best part.i have no words to comment.finally abhay confessed.wow i liked their magical moment.now abhay wont be rude to her.waiting 4 more abhiya moments.

Originally posted by: piyabhay4ever

awww..loved the update and loved reading about softy abhay. Hope he realizes soon that he is in love with her

Originally posted by: madhuri16

everyone has said everything 😒...i'm running out of words😒...sry 4 being late

tanzie this is sooo perfect👏...truly marvelous update🤗...luved it to d core😳...u portrayed abhiya beautifully 😳...it was really sweet of abhiya feeling 4 eachother😳...the last part was really awesome.👏..btw who is mohini?????is she abhay's sister?????continue soon...😊