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Originally posted by: heena_mehta
editedtanz y don't u write this ff of urs whole in one go!!😆😆, don't kill me for asking this, coz sooner or later , i wl surely die frm curiosity😆 to read more n more
tanz this is d 8th time , i m refreshing this pg wid in time span of 15 min., av some pitty on me yaar😆 ...omg omg, i m feeling out of this world nw, , dat was an amzaing piece of writing hun, standing ovation for u!!! nw i should say this, ur ff is d best one i av read till nw!!!😊 n i mean it!! although arya was missing , bt then again last part made me breathless while reading!!
*rest wait for some time*😉, let me get back my heart beats properly😉... Your essay is longer then I thot it would be 🤣nw i m finally ready to comment, i got my heartbeats back😉😉ok i m going to start frm AR villa, oh!! i never missed someone like d way i missed aryan!!😆 I know i know...don wry next part u will get plenty with Aryan's romantic skills 😛 😉coming back to abhay-pia, gosh last update was terrific!!!frm d very start, when abhay entered her room wid dat herbal tea, frm dat moment till d end, it was like a perfect movie was going in front of my eyes, which i m still wishing had never come to end!!😉😉 thnks a lot dear...means lot to me 😳u gave d perfect description of every single thing , where u wrote abt pia's red nose, it was so cute n visible, then when she thought dat nw she n abhay were all alone on d house, then pia was making faces looking at dat medicing n dat whole scene was totally admirable!!MR.LAWYER IN FIRE. SAVE ME😆 whenever Piya throws her question bomb abhay is in trouble but he is smart enough to dodge her all the time 😆n d way dat lawyer, showed her unbreakable trust on him, d way she saidNo abhay. You are wrong. Who told you are not a good person? Aryan is not an exception Abhay. Infact he has the eyes to identify a gem. I'm shocked to know he's not your blood brother Abhay. who could say it looking at your bonding? you guys care and love each other so much. Even a blind can see that. Just because you always shadow your heart and yourself from the world, doesn't mean no can read you behind the darkness Abhay. You have a beautiful heart and you can't hide it behind your harsh words even if you want to. Never say this again that you are not a good person."it was truly beautiful!! d way u described their mutual feelings, dat was magical!!! Awww... 🤗n then lawyer, actually caught d lie😉ok u knw le-meridien is nt dat far frm my place, i wish, ye sab sach hota😆😆😆then coming to scholarship part,dat again felt so close n teary n pia emotions were beautifully described!!!👏👏👏nw who is mohini😕😕,ok nw let me tel u one morething, at this point i refreshed this pg more than 10 times😆😆😆, dat dialouge "wat d hell do u thing u r doing here" was repeating again n again in my mind n i was like gosh wat nxt wat nxt???😆n then u droped d bomshell!!😉 Sorry u know I rewrite it thrice I think... after that I got the satisfaction meant Iliked it..which is rare... i dont like any anything I do.. always ready to find fault in it 😕n then d way u wrote abt pia's condition , it touched me, dat there was nthing in dat house (agar mujhse puche, to i think pia was in her heaven, any gal would av felt heaven, being wid those two hearthrobs😆), dat basically belonged to her n abt putting aryan's no in her pocket, u knw i would av loved if abhay would av seen it😉😉😉n nw wat to say abt d last , should i say last of this update was d best part of ur all updates till nw, it was magnificnet, marvelous, angelic, divine, , splendid!!! personally I love the last part myself dear... 😳 Its the beginning of their undying love 😃 and your comments are taking me in cloud nine 😳every single damn emotion of both abhay-pia, was written beautifully!!n d last line "till d end of time"...i was dead, after reading it!!!werewolves gight was well described, power packed!! abhay's emotions, was so strong n viloent, dat anyone would av understood d intensity n depth of his love!! bt i knew, nthing is going to b so easy, d way its appearing nw b/w two😉 I love angry Abhay...more hott ☺️ nothing is easy... thats true.. and deepu will get the shock of her life after knowing there's a vampire in the town 😃jeh part was reli nice, i felt reli bad for himhere my essay ends!!luv u hun🤗n big bear huggies to u, actually thousands of hugs to u🤗I loveee u tooo 🤗
@Green, answer huny 😳
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