New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

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Posted: 14 years ago

#601

awww tanzie u have blown me off with this update
i m stunned how can u write so well
i m falling short of adjectives right now to praise u 👏👏👏👏 and besides i don't think i m good enough to appreciate such a beautiful piece of work
abhiya were truly amazing in this update👏
i think now pia is getting close to abhay's truth😕
the way she has consoled her that he is such a good person😳 is amazing
they both have surely fallen madly in love with each other😳
and the last part when abhay gave her his blood and save her inspite of struggling from his blood thirst u have wrote it really well 👏👏that i can almost feel their emotions
the last line of abhay was really touching 😭
i hope now he will admit his feelings
btw as abhay has given her his blood will it going to have some consequences
anyways a big 🤗to u for this update
now i just can't wait to read the next part i hope it will contain some abhiya as well
please update soon and thanks for pm

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srija

@-srija-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#602

Amazing tanzie.really i dnt hav any words 2 say.i read it abt 5 times bt i still feel like reading it again n again.
Sorry yar really dnt av any words.

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#603

Awesome update! I'm glad Abhay is realizing that he cares for Piya and Piya should just admit she has fallen in love with Abhay! It was really sweet how Piya was in pain but all she was concerned about was the blood coming out of Abhay's eyes! I can't wait till Abhay and Piya admit to themselves that they are in love! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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ozzyie

@ozzyie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#604

Awesumme tnzie ...well written ...but too big ...😆

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#605

Phew long update that was awsum tanzie dipu and aryans convo 🤣 finally abhay realised that he feels something for pia😳 thanx for pm😊 i have a confusion are u planning a love triangle between alina aryan peehu😕and continue soon

Edited by strawberryrashu - 14 years ago

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#606

Superb Update Tanzie..!It's was Awesome...Wow last lines were awesome..!I so loved ur writing..Wish I was gud at writing n not lazy😆..!Ur two FFs r d best one I have ever read..!Thanks for PM n Update soon..!!

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sonia

@-Sonia-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#607

Hey tanzie

thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM

Omg ! Abhiya were superb!

it is amazing to see abhiya feel each other's pain, but gadha toh gadha hi hain na, samjh nahin pa raha hain why he feels for her! Chalo..atleast he admitted that he cares for her !! Lol

Wow abhay saved piya from wolves...fight scequence was good.. Abhay looks really hawwt when he angry .. Hehe..(official bodyguard ko bhi to compliment milna chahiye)...

Awww abhay cud not see her in pain... I just loved the end part & abhay's concern ...

Btw, who is mohini ?

Precap sounds interesting..

Already waiting for the nxt part.. Continue soon

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#608

Awesome update fantabulous. FinaLLY aBHAY REALISED HIS FEELINGS FOR Pia Yay.

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#609

tanzie mind blowing update!!!!!!!!!!!! specially the last part was just too good... superb yaar!!!!

thnx 4 da pm

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#610

ah tanzie!!wat terrific writing yaar'!!!just loved it!!omg!!i have no words 2 describe wat i felt as i read this..abhay and piya were simply WOW!!!soo..r they together nw??amazing work tanzie..u r jst briliant..nw update soon n thanx 4 pm!!