New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 60

Awwssum!Awwssum!Awwssum!Super Duper Awwssum Tanzie! 👏 👏 👏 Just read da ff 4rm start n al chps at a stretch! 😲 U've shaped up da story so well n added life 2 al da characters with ur fantabulous writing skills! 👏 Dis is ur best ff till date! luvd it even more dan 'The beautiful stranger'. Abhay is undoubtedly da best as always bt i really luvd Aryan! He is so sweet,funluving,caring n most imp luvs his bro da most.Plz update soon n keep sending pm if possible..plz update frequently!Last bt nt da least! dis is 4 u 4 such a wonderful treat! 🤗

Originally posted by: MyAngelAbhay

Awwssum!Awwssum!Awwssum!Super Duper Awwssum Tanzie! 👏 👏 👏 Just read da ff 4rm start n al chps at a stretch! 😲 U've shaped up da story so well n added life 2 al da characters with ur fantabulous writing skills! 👏 Dis is ur best ff till date! luvd it even more dan 'The beautiful stranger'. Abhay is undoubtedly da best as always bt i really luvd Aryan! He is so sweet,funluving,caring n most imp luvs his bro da most.Plz update soon n keep sending pm if possible..plz update frequently!Last bt nt da least! dis is 4 u 4 such a wonderful treat! 🤗

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Feeling sleepy...

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well,Sorry for late rply,as I was busy shedding teras due to dis emotional update.ok,so here i am.
I am really liking da way Abhay cares for Piya,and da way his dead heart beats for Piya.Piya is also madly in love wid Abhay. But I hope Abhay soon cums out of his 'stay away from me' attitude.

Who is Mohini?

U were right tanzie.This is the bst chap u ever wrote.I m thrilled,speechless UFF😳.Wht 2 say yaar.U r jst out of this world.Abhiya scenes were well described.Especially last part was jst out of this world.It was wow.I man jst wow😍.Oh Will Abhay now confess 2 Pia tht he love her?Oh Whn will Pia come 2 know abt Raichand's truth?.Lets c how peehu will react 2 c Aryan & wht will deepu's reaction whn she'll come 2 know abt her bhade k bhadiyo being dead😆😆😆.Oh me so eagery waiting 4 nxt part.Tht Abhiya scene was jst wow.Abhay concern,his tears of blood.😳.Pia was abt 2 say I LUV U but unconcious ho gyi hahahha😆😆

Keep Going That Was Great. Update Soon.

nice story plz update soon

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

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tanz y don't u write this ff of urs whole in one go!!😆😆, don't kill me for asking this, coz sooner or later , i wl surely die frm curiosity😆 to read more n more

tanz this is d 8th time , i m refreshing this pg wid in time span of 15 min., av some pitty on me yaar😆😆😆😆 ...

omg omg, i m feeling out of this world nw, , dat was an amzaing piece of writing hun, standing ovation for u!!! nw i should say this, ur ff is d best one i av read till nw!!!😊 n i mean it!! although arya was missing , bt then again last part made me breathless while reading!!
*rest wait for some time*😉, let me get back my heart beats properly😉

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