New FF: Till the End of Time(Book1 DONE)note pg149 - Page 55

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow what a wonderful update
how do u manage to write so well
the way u described abhiya feelings towards each other was just amazing
aryan's words have really given me a gr8 hope now i know he will definitely help in blossoming abhiya love with all his might
but for now he has gone to search for his wife
i hope he will find her and get her back
abhay is really so sweet he ate human food for pia awww
aryan and dippanita cono was hilarious
but precap sounds scary are u planning separation of abhiya
they have only started yaar
well i know u will give us one more fabulous update
thanks for pm and do update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the PM

Abhiya I so love them and finally they are falling for each other 😳

And Peehu has returned that's a shocker
Update soon

Edited by abhaypiya4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
cool tanzie!!!! aryan was too gud yr... cont soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome work👏..simply loved evry bit of it...please update next chap as soon as possible😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update Tanzie..!Loved it..!Wow abhiya has fallen for eachother 😍 😍 !!N Aryan has now find his Peehu..!I don't think thy will be 2gether now n I'm hoping dat when abhiya(when dey r 2gether)will know abt it dey migh play Cupid for aryan n Peehu..Next chapter seems interesting..!Lookin forward to it..!Update soon thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely lovely lovey dovey update. .
abhiya scenes were superb... so now pia n abhay r getting more comfortable with eacho her... i liked the way abhay was taking care of pia... & had human food only to make her happy!... Abhay getting angry on servants was so cute...
Awww. . Aryan is cho chweet. .he saved alina. . & he also understands his brother feelings. .
Dipu has lost it. . I hope pia is safe!
Wow, aryan n pihu r going to meet soon
Thanks for the pm. . Dear
continue soon . .
TC !
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey, it was amazing. loved it so much. i like aryan so much.abhiya scene were very nice .
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow tanzie awesome update I so loved it yaar.Oh finally there r spark of lovein Abhiya's heart.I m loving Aryan.So Alina kisko milegi previously I thought ki Alina might fall in luv wid Aryan but I guess now peehu has return so no hope.But wow ur thhis chappy is so gud.Poor Abhay have 2 eat dinner tht too wid smile 2 make his darling feel better😆😆.And deepu is bachaa chor always behind handsome guys😡Plzz continue😳


Thanks darling 😳 You still can't say anything. Peehu will have her grand comeback but lets see if she is here to stay or not 😉 Alina will fall for Aryan...that is for sure 😆 Poor Abhay deserves this 😛 hahaha...soo true... Deepu is always after handsome guys ...aur bhi dikhega..wait 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

finally i m here😊😊!!! welcome 😉

tell me wat should i say, i m seriously done wid my vocab thing, could find out more adjectives , would u love to c something german, coz only thorugh this way i cn find out some new good words to praise ur writing skills!!! You always flatter me with your words...do you even know that 😆 all I can say is thanku from the core of my heart 😳
update was fantabulous!!!!👏 thankkkuuu soo muchhh 🤗
starting frm d very start, aryan- deepu part was hilarious😆
man, this aunty is so churail, apni umar ka lihaaz bhi nahi kiya😲😲😲, gosh flirting wid arayn, i knw i knw its immpossible to resist him, bt still aryan is of his son's age, u knw deepu's this act reminded me of "mac's" mother in vampire diaries"😉😉 of,course deepu won't go to dat xtent😆😆😆 Matts mother was much worse.. 😆 i hate Deepu so FF me uska band baja nikal liya 😛
n aryan wat he asked "do u av ny cosemtics business, lipstick churil, gosh dat made me laugh like nything!!! aryan is so damn cute na!!!
waise i would love to c , wat wl abhay do if she wl try to flirt wid him!!!!😕😆😆 Lolz.. u wont be able to see tht sorry 😆 and in this FF...everyone loves Aryan..im happy to create a character like him 😳
aryan-alina, r u planning to show something b/w them or just a scene it was, coz of,course aryan still loves peehu, so 😕, is there nything wrapped under sheets in this relation?? No idea... 😛 idea ho bhi to I wont answer it...sorry 😛 😉 😆
ok coming to abhay-pia's part!!!
dat was totally wowww !!!
i loved d way u defined pia's feeling, d way she took away his shirt, everything was so perfect!!! Thnaku...thanku... i wanted to describe it as a part of her innocent love 😳
n then wen abhay came to knw abt his shirt, dat was giving kinda gosebumps to me!!! Awww 😳
abhay's gestures cn never go unnoticed bt aryan!!😆😉😉
throwing servant away, dat was something reli xpected. bt poor servant!!😆 yea..poor servant and Aryan is Aryan afterall 😆
dinner scene was chooo cute "heartbreak time pia"...dat was amaing dialouge, bt abhay ne uss dialogue pe pani pher diya😆😆😆
bt i m still nt sure dat whether should i believe, dat he has grown some feelings for pia, coz i don't trust u in this matter, i knw this is nt going nt b as simple as it is appearing!! BINGO... shit man.. you know me too well 🤣 im not that easy about feelings u know... so it will take time...lets just wait... and show me bhi just look Abhay kabhi jaldi manega kya? still Abhay is a vampire that is yet to know for PIya 😕
bt last, was shocking, wat made him bleed??😲...so he is coming to my city!!!😉 not bleed... he was shocked 😕 i didnt write he bleed...did i? and ya.. he's comign to your city where he will meet his wife finally 😆
n precap, nw tel me how wl wait for whole nxt week!!!! i will update fast this time...promise..u don have to wait that long 😆
luv u loadsss hun🤗 same to u 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: madhuri16

wonderful update.🤗🤗..luved abhiya moments.☺️☺️..but i luv aryan more.😉..gosh!!!!!! he is married😲 ,still i have a doubt ,who is dipanita's husband(the wizard one)????????????😕😕😕it was lovely to see abhay eating human food for piya it was really romantic😳...aryan will be alright right 😭...guess he will get his peehu back😊...continue soon ,waiting eagerly.😊...


Thanks dear 😳 Everyone loves Aryan here...im so happy yaar 😳 😃 Deepus husband is dead and wizard was a one night stand for her... just an affair...both are gone and no connection with aryan...peehu will be back in the next update 😳

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