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Posted: 13 years ago

#531

awesome update Tanzie.
Boy-eater Lipstick-chudail Dipu!!🤣 poor aryan!!😆
Loved Abhay's caring nature.Now I want more AbhIya close moments.😳 🤣
update soon!! 👏

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#532

wonderful update tanize, bechare abhay ko khana khana pada face banate huve, but he is very sweet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#533

Loved the chapter. I have read almost all of your FF, this is the best one.

Abhay, Aryan and Pia are so cute. Abhiya are going closer to each other. Aryan located his wife.

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Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#534

ausum update tanzie..loved it..

bechare abhay ko tu ne human food khila diya..pyaar main sau uljhane hai...😆...bhugto...haila...abhay was smiling..too cute...abhiya falling for each other...m loving it...

peehu is back...lets see what aryan does...alina is hybrid..thats a welcome change...lets see how her character shapes up...

eagerly waiting for next update...update soon...thanks for pm...

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#535

wow tanzie. amazing. so I guess, Abhay and Pia will develop some bonding in next update.

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Selina

@Selinapiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#536

Wow..Awesome...Next update..
plzz update soon..
Gosh...Mujhe bhook lagi hain😆
..Abhiya are falling fro each other hmmm...😉

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#537

wow mindblowing update tanzie👏too good👍🏼and dipu is always ready to flirt wth aa bache log🤢omg the line 'overpainted lips' aryan's sarcastic remark-do u have a makeup buisness?...crackd me up🤣it seems u love dipu a lot😆dear the way u expressd abhiya's feelings fr eachother ws mesmerising d romantic❤️😍eagerly waitng fr the nxt chappy. update soon.tc love ya 🤗p.s. this is the best gift f my b'day😳

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#538

First the secret is out. Pia being alive and Dipanita coming to know of it. Aryan helping out Alina did the mother come to know of that too. And Jais frantic search for Pia is causing more problems than good. Dipanitha eying for Aryan was like ... the least said better. Now his wife returning. Its like one roller coaster ride this chapter. Abhay opening up to Pia is also happening. So is the next chapter were the whole thing drops and falls

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Mousumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#539

hey tanzie ! Howz ya ? Long after 10 years, right ??! 🤣 🤣
Profuse apologizes for not commenting on last 2 updates.. College, internals, practicals are eating up my poor head nowadays
😭 😡
Anyways, I read all the 3 chapters now.. I wont confuse n bore you by commenting on previous updates., just one word FANTABULOUS AND FANTASTIC !

The latest update is the best till now I guess.. Piya and abhay smelling each other ! Aww!
Piya took away his shirt with her..that was damn cute !
Deepu will send jay to london ? I feel so bad for him yaar..poor boy !
And piya cooked for both the bros.. Aryan was enjoying n bechara abhay ! 😆 pyar mein kya kuch nahi karte log ! Toh phir yeh toh sirf khane ki baat hai..hehe.
I loved the part when aryan was cursing the lipstic aunty..lolz ! She indeed is a child abuser. But I am worried as well as anxious to know whats gonna build up between aryan n allina !
The best part of the update was when aryan was sure abhay loves piya now and promised that he wont let the smile fade on abhay's face..awww !
Superb update dear.. Thanks for the pm.
Love ya 🤗