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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#521

finally i m here😊😊!!!

tell me wat should i say, i m seriously done wid my vocab thing, could find out more adjectives , would u love to c something german, coz only thorugh this way i cn find out some new good words to praise ur writing skills!!!

update was fantabulous!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

starting frm d very start, aryan- deepu part was hilarious😆😆😆😆😆

man, this aunty is so churail, apni umar ka lihaaz bhi nahi kiya😲😲😲, gosh flirting wid arayn, i knw i knw its immpossible to resist him, bt still aryan is of his son's age, u knw deepu's this act reminded me of "mac's" mother in vampire diaries"😉😉 of,course deepu won't go to dat xtent😆😆😆

n aryan wat he asked "do u av ny cosemtics business, lipstick churil, gosh dat made me laugh like nything!!! aryan is so damn cute na!!!

waise i would love to c , wat wl abhay do if she wl try to flirt wid him!!!!😕😆😆

aryan-alina, r u planning to show something b/w them or just a scene it was, coz of,course aryan still loves peehu, so 😕, is there nything wrapped under sheets in this relation??

ok coming to abhay-pia's part!!!

dat was totally wowww !!!

i loved d way u defined pia's feeling, d way she took away his shirt, everything was so perfect!!!

n then wen abhay came to knw abt his shirt, dat was giving kinda gosebumps to me!!!

abhay's gestures cn never go unnoticed bt aryan!!😆😉😉

throwing servant away, dat was something reli xpected. bt poor servant!!😆

dinner scene was chooo cute "heartbreak time pia"...dat was amaing dialouge, bt abhay ne uss dialogue pe pani pher diya😆😆😆

bt i m still nt sure dat whether should i believe, dat he has grown some feelings for pia, coz i don't trust u in this matter, i knw this is nt going nt b as simple as it is appearing!!

bt last, was shocking, wat made him bleed??😲😲😲😲...so he is coming to my city!!!😉

n precap, nw tel me how wl wait for whole nxt week!!!!

luv u loadsss hun🤗

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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#522

wonderful update.🤗🤗..luved abhiya moments.☺️☺️..but i luv aryan more.😉..gosh!!!!!! he is married😲 ,still i have a doubt ,who is dipanita's husband(the wizard one)????????????😕😕😕it was lovely to see abhay eating human food for piya it was really romantic😳...aryan will be alright right 😭...guess he will get his peehu back😊...continue soon ,waiting eagerly.😊...

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#523

*Chapter updated*

PMs will be send later 😳

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#524

Super awesome update! It was so cute how Piya kept Abhay's shirt with her and kept inhaling his scent! 😳 And Abhay is super sweet to eat the food Piya cooked for him and Aryan, even though the poor guy can't even enjoy the taste of the food! And I hate Deepanita to the core! I hope she doesn't harm Piya! And Aryan is going to Delhi, so does that mean more Abhay-Piya alone time? 😉 Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 14 years ago

#525

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awesome update
abhay ate human food 4 pia so sweet.he is really falling 4 pia.and pia hope she wont leave house.aryan will leave means abhiya will be alone wow.waiting 4 peehu's entry

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 14 years ago

#526

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

abhay & aryan are so caring & protective of pia...

plzzz continue soon

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#527

Nicey nicey super nicey. Loved the update.

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#528

brilliant tanzie!!the way u described piya and abhay's feelings was jst ..WOWWW!!nw peehu is back,huh??dying 2 read the nxt part!!do do update soon n thanx 4 pm!!

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#529

Superb update Tanzie.. Abhiya moments and their feelings for each other were too good.. The way both inhaled the scents of each other so romantic😳..

Aryan.. He's the best of this FF.. I love his care towards Pia and his love for Abhay!!

Dipannita.. I hate her.. Make her to die soon especially in hands of Aryan or Abhay!! 😆 Now is she gonna spy on Pia?? Please dont allow her to find Pia!!

Thanks for the PM dear!!

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#530

Awesome update!😊

Poor Aryan...😆Deepanita, Please spare him atleast! Deepu-Aryan's convo was funny.🤣Loved his side comments.😆I'm happy for both Abhay and Pia, but scared too.Both of them are getting attracted to each other, but future is uncertain.Pia cooked food for both of them.Woah ! Abhay is changing fast, he accompanied them for dinner...Great! I love the way both of them care for her. Finally Aryan found his wife. Eagerly waiting for next update.Thanks for Pm.😃Continue soon.Good Luck!👍🏼