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Posted: 14 years ago
wow 3rd chapter updated ! now I am going to comment on the 2nd chapter..I know I am the 1st one to comment.. Thanks accepted 🤣 🤣
Jokes apart,sorry for being late..was a bit busy 😳
So now coming to the update,its outstanding 👏
I am feeling so bad for Jay
😔 and this dipu devil aunty 😡 😡 urghhh ! How dare she play with her son's feelings . Praveen needs a punch from abhay..phir uski akal thikane pe aayegi. I mean how can he be so mean n harsh ! Huh.. He and dipu both are just sick 🤬 hope jay sees their ugly faces soon !
And abhay-piya part was just awesome blossom! How much abhay cares for piya..awww ! I wish I was there in piya's place 😍
So aryan is a wizard..wow I will love his character.
Actually I am already loving ! He is so cute.. The suggestion he gave abhay to bring down piya's body temp was the best part ❤️
On the whole,.super duper update. Thank you ! 🤗 loved it.
I will be back with comments on 3rd chapter soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

I hate u tanzie coz u PMEed me so late😡.Jst coz of u agn I lost it.Heena is 1st.But now let me come 2 ur update. It's not my fault 😲 Im innocent 😃 I PMed every1 together but I reserved the post for updating and Heena res first 😆

Awesome update loved it.Ohh Abhay is so sweet & so is Aryan.I love the way they luk after Pia.As 4 Pia poor soul I m sure now she is totally saved. yes, they are really swt but Abhay is soon going to be in stay away mission once Piya will wake up and he will feel getting attracted towards her 😆 I wnt 2 kill prabeen & deepu.So evn arnab is here in FF.I guess misha bhi honi chahiye but no Panchi😡 Panchi to is FF me paida hi nehi hui 🤣 look at the character sketch.. Dobriyals hav 2 children.. Misha and Arman...NO BIRDIE 😆Misha will come later with the story 😊Eagerly waiting 4 nxt part.Incanation scene ka intezaar hai.Wnt 2 c how will Piareact 2 c her angel😳😊 this time i will update soonish
LUV U🤗


luv u tooo 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was indeed an awesome blossom update Tanzy without a doubt... I must say!!!👏
Starting with Prabeen and Deepanita... Such an evil they are... 😡Hate them to the core... Now I'm eagerly waiting for the day when Abhay will make them to pay for their sins...😈
Arnab Dobriyal... Well I'm confused about one thing... Why did he left Piya??? Does she even know about Arnab???😕
Coming to Abhay and Aryan... What a savior they are!!! Knight in Shining Armours!!!😆 Abhay... The way he's caring for Piya is just amazing... I was like AWW... 😳Aryan is also the same... I loved the way he teased Abhay when Piya said Angel to him... 😆The look what Abhay had in his face while he was looking at Aryan confusedly when she called her Angel totally cracked me up...🤣
Overall a fab update...🥳
Thanks a lot for the PM..😊
Continue soon...👍🏼
Lots of Love..❤️
Sweta🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
THIS FF IS REALLY VERY INTERESTING...NICE UPDATES!!!EAGERLY WAITING FR NEXT UPDATE...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, mindblowing, heartstealing update it was sooo good ...specially i jst loved wen pia recognized her angel...update soon waiting egerly to read further...nd u kno wat u expressed soo beautifully dat i can feel the scenes goin on in frnt of my eyes...painful piya , caring abhay
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi tanzie
awesome update👍🏼
felt really bad for pia😭 it was so touching how aryan n abhay were concerned n took care of her😳 aryan is such a darling, really😳
okay so misha n pia are sisters hey?! even armaan is her bro😳 plz dont make ksg armaan, coz i love kasu pairing😳😆
dipz n prabeen get on my nerves😡 he's very confident about this whole situation😡 urggh just hate them🤬 hope abhay teaches them a lesson in good time😊
awww pia called him an angel😳😍 that he surely is😃
love the precap, n im soo happy abhay decides to care for her.
im just loving this concept, its emotional n touching😳
continue soon dear
thanks for the pm
take care
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow what an emotional part
u r really writing this ff too well
really i m feeling so sorry for pia😭😭
i hope the angel i mean our very own abhay😳will comfort her
thanks for pm
waiting eagerly for the next update

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

so sry tanzie...i knw i got very late this time "holding my ears" Ok chalo thik hai 😆

omg tanzie, its just a starting of ur ff n i m already going hell crazy for it!!!
d way u r writing this ff, is totally outstanding...every single line keep me holding to it like nything!! Awww thanks a lot Heena dear... im really happy u liked it so much... even im enjoying writin it more...maybe bcoz I can write abt vampires widout trying... tht comes automatically... obsessions for vampires for so many yrs finally paying off 😈
abhay's cold attitude n aryan's warm n cool nature, make me feel all go go ga ga over them😳😳😳 same here 😛
ummm nt fair abhay didn't hug her...chalo koi nai, better luck nxt time😉😉, bt i m totally in awe d way two brother's r taking care of pia, d way abhay made her drink dat ndeicine mix with water n den when aryan took care of her when abhay left...dat was simply wowww, seems like supernaturals r more turstworthy than humans I promised this will be more sexier, romantic then my previous FF so i will keep my promise 😉 just let Piya come to her senses and I promise I won't dissapoint you guys 😉
pia called abhay angel n then aryna said " appko bola rahi hai"... hehehehe...how cute!!😉
although i don't want to comment on deepanita's n praveen part, bt still these two r worse than animals😡😡😡...poor jeh dat he is deepanita's son I feel bad for him too... 😕
precap sounds totally interesting , i m sure after knowing pia's story , abhay-aryan won't let her go n it means pia wl stay wid them only😳😳😳 ... thinking abt this idea giving me goosebumbs...n i m nt looking forward just to abhay-pia's relationship bt this time i also wanna c how aryan-pia's relation wl progress, wanna see a beautiful frndship b/w themmm Aryan and Piya is going to hav a very strong and beautiful relationship 😳
do update soon tanz hun😊
luv u n bear hug to u🤗 double bear hug 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

very nice update. touched by pia's condition and abhay's inner turmoil.


Thanks Dishu 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .rumki.

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awesome update😊 Thanks Rumki 😃
expected a tight hug😳.no prob in otheh update ok😆 Promise...just wait a bit till Piya com back to senses 😉
abhay & aryan are so sweet.they took good care of pia
pia calling abhay angel😳 so sweet He's an angel na 😳
precap seems interesting👏.now abhay will takecare of pia😃 Aryan will take more care of Piya as Abhay will be busy avoiding her for his own personal pull to her 😡
hating pratap & lipstick chudail🤢😡.want abhay punishing both of them
even arnav here,i thought he is dead😆 Nope, this part is like the show, Arnab doesn't know his daughter is alive and he's happy in his own world with Madhu, his son Arman and daughter Misha...NO PANCHI 😃
hope jeh wont find pia,atleast before ap fallen 4 eachother😳
pia is being poisoning...so what abt that?
She's being slow-poisoned and that's why her brain is not functioning in proper scale... Abhay will take care of it 😉


@PINK, ans 😊

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