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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Super awesome update! Abhay and Aryan are so sweet to take such good care of Piya! Abhay is already feeling for Piya as he's super worried about her state! And Piya recognizes Abhay as her angel...aww! 😳 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊


Thanks Deepi 🤗 Abhay doesn't know and failed to understand the pull he has for Piya and from next update he will try harder to ignore that but it's gonna be hell difficult once Piya is back to senses 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prernasinghking

please add me in your pm list


You are already added my dear 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Nice update tanzie pls continue thanks for the pm


Thanks Rashu 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: renuka1997

Lovely update... Thanks 😊
i can c the concern for piya from abhay...
But he not able to accept it... Not so easily...true 😊
I think so aryan is falling in love with piya... Umm..that can be a possibility but still can't say that 😉
N im so happy piya's angel is abhay...
Hope abhay keeps her safe from all harm... he always does na 😳
Thanx for the pm...
Continue soon...
I will b waiting... Will do as soon as possible
Love u... Luv u too dear 😳
Renuka...

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Posted: 14 years ago
*comments updated on pg 25*😊
Edited by purple_shadoz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz

😲res *edited* hey tanzie...😃lvd d updt...⭐️aryan s sooo sweeet...😉lvd d way abhay ws bothrd bt pia...😳hope wo use jaldi se thikkar de...😳waitng 2 c pia's rctn wn c waks up cmpltly...😛so abhay n aryan going 2 do hocus pocus on hr.??????...🥱😲so abhay wl b tchd by hr dstrss...😛eagrly waitng 4 it...hope abhay prabin n dipu l ki jam kr dhulai kare...wo vi pia ke saamne...😡n jai...s n hs mssn 'find pia'...hmmm...i hope he finds sm1 els as pia s jst 4 abhay...😳do cont soon...loads of lv...😉


Thankuuu 😳 yes, they will try to get information from her brain since she is unconscious and unable to talk... she will recognize Abhay as her savior 😃 luv to u tooo...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Really nice FF.. Ur first FF is full of twists and turns.. But this seems emotional.. Loving both dear..👍🏼 Update soon.. Thanks for the PM


Thanks dear... I hope you enjoy reading further 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

tanzie...beautifully written...feeling really sad for pia...i hope pia will be safe...abhay will protect her...plz update soon...now m eagerly waiting...thanks for pm


Thanks Peehu 🤗
Piya is safe until Abhay is around her offcourse... her dark-knight...and is ber to dark knight ka bhai bhi saath mein hai 😆 i will update soon 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rayrose

gr8t update. u explained every situation very nicely ...
i'll be waiting eagerly 4 next chapter.


Thanku Rose... I'm glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chinky_RPattz

wow 3rd chapter updated ! now I am going to comment on the 2nd chapter..I know I am the 1st one to comment.. Thanks accepted 🤣 🤣
Jokes apart,sorry for being late..was a bit busy 😳 😆
OMG...now i have to wait for comments on chpt 3 till i will finish writing chpt 4 😆
So now coming to the update,its outstanding 👏 Thanku dear 😳
I am feeling so bad for Jay
😔 and this dipu devil aunty 😡 😡 urghhh ! How dare she play with her son's feelings . Praveen needs a punch from abhay..phir uski akal thikane pe aayegi. I mean how can he be so mean n harsh ! Huh.. He and dipu both are just sick 🤬 hope jay sees their ugly faces soon ! Money can be a curse and Prabeen's greed is gonna cost him more thn he can imagine.. Jeh will find PIya and that will create a chaos between the Raichands and Jeh but usme abhi bohut der hai...
And abhay-piya part was just awesome blossom! How much abhay cares for piya..awww ! I wish I was there in piya's place 😍
So aryan is a wizard..wow I will love his character. I wish I was in Piya's place as well..Abhay ke liye kuch bhi.. 😛
Actually I am already loving ! He is so cute.. The suggestion he gave abhay to bring down piya's body temp was the best part ❤️
On the whole,.super duper update. Thank you ! 🤗 loved it.
I will be back with comments on 3rd chapter soon. 😊


Thanks and come back soob before I post chpt 4 😆 🤗

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