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ArshForEver

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Posted: 14 years ago

#701

Wow. Another great update and omg the storm that was on the way has arrived in ajelie's life. Damn. Thx for updating so fast. Continue soon:-)

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littlemoi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#702

good start to bring out that stupid shyams story!

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pri12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#703

omg very gr8 update...totally loved it

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-Janet-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#704

Thank you so much! :-)

Originally posted by: tina_1234
m sure..u not gonna get any bad reviews..i guess ppl will misws arhi in it but ntn more thn tht :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#705

Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun
great job...finally Arnav is getting to know about Shyam...can't wait to see what happens next...update soon

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Harshitha Shankar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#706

Hiya Janet..

It was very good.. I want dat creep, shyam outta the FF too.. So kindly proceed.. :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#707

Yep he did! :-)

Originally posted by: princess84
yayayay...arnav got to know about shyam maybe their is hope...can't wait till the next installment

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Posted: 14 years ago

#708

Hi there! Thank you so very much for saying that. I really was worried that after our CVs finally pulled up their socks and are giving us at least one Arnav Khushi scene a day, people will yell at me for not giving Arnav Khushi scenes! :-) But, really, I cannot keep writing scenes between them without any logic. Since this isn't a one shot, I really have to take the story forward. For that, it was very important that I bring Shyam's issue back and address the fact that Khushi was supposed to leave shortly. So, I decided to combine the two. I've tried to include everything without making the story move too hurriedly. Glad you liked the conversations Akash had. Now that Arnav has got a wind of it, he's going to be figuring things out :-)

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Janet!!
I actually really liked the update. It wasn't a filler, or boring by any standard!! It forms an integral part of the narrative.
I do wish Arnav would have gotten more detail out of Khushi about Shyam. At least everything would be clear for him with regards to Khushi.
Akash's conversation with Arnav was really great. I love the way he couldn't hide his excitement about Payal.
His conversation with Payal was lovely to read too. Looking forward to their track, and of course Arnav and Khushi's relationship developing further!!
Thanks for the PM sugar!!!
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