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tina_1234

@tina_1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#691

Originally posted by: Janet.Das
Phew! Thanks so much, Tina! I was sure that this one's gonna earn me bad reviews. Glad that the first one is good :-)

m sure..u not gonna get any bad reviews..i guess ppl will misws arhi in it but ntn more thn tht :)

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#692

great job...finally Arnav is getting to know about Shyam...can't wait to see what happens next...update soon

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upasana.diya

@upasana.diya

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#693

wow this is turning out to be quite interesting... waiting for the next update Janet...

wonderful chapters so far... just caught up with last 3

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#694

Hey...finally caught up with youre entire ff in one go! Wow...you write just soo beautifully and with perfection. Well, I hope the CV's take a look at this ff because this is exactly how i want the show to go as..haha! The hot and romantic scenes of Arnav and Khushi are depicted just so magically...especially theyre first kiss! Wow! Youve got a great way with words and the plot as well. The last part is definietely progression and Im glad Arnav is finding things out about Shyam! Grr hate Shyammm!!

Continue soon!

oh and if youre still doing pms...Dont forget to PM me =)

Edited by nyxx - 14 years ago

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#695

yayayay...arnav got to know about shyam maybe their is hope...can't wait till the next installment

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Yazzy91

@Yazzy91

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#696

Thank god arnav is slowly finding out about shyam!! I really hope he confronts him or atleast does something about it! Enjoyed reading it...

it wasn't boring at all!! 😊

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#697

wuhu!! Arnav got to know abt shyam. Impressed by the chess move arnav played to make her stay, and now payal n akash will be close too. yay!

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#698

Janet!!

I actually really liked the update. It wasn't a filler, or boring by any standard!! It forms an integral part of the narrative.

I do wish Arnav would have gotten more detail out of Khushi about Shyam. At least everything would be clear for him with regards to Khushi.

Akash's conversation with Arnav was really great. I love the way he couldn't hide his excitement about Payal.

His conversation with Payal was lovely to read too. Looking forward to their track, and of course Arnav and Khushi's relationship developing further!!

Thanks for the PM sugar!!!

😊