BAS EK JAZBA HO KI TU MUJH MEIN HAI INTRO - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update!!
Both parts were wonderfull!!
Cont super soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsum parts..

really amazing n beautiful...

loved it...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice ff yar add me in ur pm list plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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who ever want pm's plz send me buddy list.. i tried snding u all but its showing me some error,,,
and thanks for like and comments...
i can only post twice in a week, is it okay woth u all?
shazia...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome parts...
add me in ur pm list...
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear..

thats awsome ..

do add me to ur buddy list...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice parts
liked it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3

Here on the other hand the truck has reached its destination 'sanjeevni orphanage'

ridzz jumps down from the truck ,she was still singing. She reached at the main entrance of orphanage.

Now she is dancing with all kids there…

All were looking at her in awww.

Song endsss.

Ridzz- thank u all for ur support, now plzz agar kisi ko donation karna hai tou kar sakte hai. Aap hamare saath yaha tak aaye isliye thank you so much….

Soon every one gives donation and left even media…

Ridzz and her friends has moved to coleg now and they were discussing about her performance

Rishi- riddz kya yaar aaj tou tune sabke hosh uda diye .

Rohan- I agree. Saare ladko ke muh khule ke khule reh gaye…ha ha ha

Misha—dude u r so right… lekin aaj maza bohot aaya…. It was so much fun man.hum na har mahine mein ek bar aisa charity function zarur karenge, kyu ridzzz?

Ridzz= ha kyu nahi?

Roshni= ha ridzz tune tou aaj kamaal hi kar diya.ek dum item lag rahi thi tu, bas yeh gale mein tu jo kala thread pehenti hai na vo isss dress ke saath nahi ja raha tha…ridzz always wear a black thread in her neck, she never tells anyone that why she wears it, they all think that may be it is related to her mom….so they never force her to tell them if she not comfortable.

Ridzz=jaane de na yaar roshni,kya pharak padta hai.

A small smile plays on her lips.

hope u guys like it...one more part is on its way just wait...shazia
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 4

Just next to there table agroup of girls were sitting,they were reading some some magzine or say kisssing the photo on the magzine.

1 girl= omg ! omg!! Omg !!! he is so hottt

I so want to see him in real…

2 girl = hope yeh mera boyfriend hota….

3 girl= I only want to spend a night with him…

This statement caught roshni's attention,she turn and asked the girl for 1 of the magzine.

And she saw it was none other than the great super star armaan mallik.

There were pics from some lastest party, Were he was dancing with girls in close proximity. He was in pics with girls who were hugging him so close…

Roshni= omg !!!!!!!!!! he is arman mallik.. he is sooo hottt….

Misha= kya yaar tum isss looser ki photo lekar baith gayi…

Roshni =don't u dare calll him looser, he is a super star…

Misha= I know !!! I know !!!!

He is a big flirt, he gets linked up with his every co-actress….he how he is posing with those cheap girls..

Roshni= that is only bcoz of the stupid actresses,they only gives such statement that they are dating him…

Ridzz was only listening to their mad friends and smiling at her mad friends…

Rohan= come on guys lets not talk about this now….

Misha= plz talk something else now…

Rishi= hey ridzz coming Sunday is your birthday na?

Ridzz= ha kyu?

Rishi= tou plan kya hai? Iss biryjday ko kya karne ka irada hai?

Ridzz=kuch khass nahi, hamesha ki tarah tum logo ke saath hi celebrate karungi, dad bhi nahi iss Sunday…

Misha= great then hum raat ko tunhare ghar raat ko ayenge,, and u are turning 20 so it calls for a partyyy…..

Ridzz = nahi raat ko nahi plzzz. Dada ko pata chal gaay tou bohot daat padegi…sorry

Misha= kya yaar ridzz tu kabhi raat bahar nahi ati, na pub me . na hi kabhi koi party me. Aur ab hum tere ghar arahe hai tou tere dad ,,,

Ridzz= sorry misha but mere dad ko yeh sab pasand nahi ….

Rishi= chal koi baat nahi hum shaam ko celebrate karenge, thik hai?

Ridzz= ha thik hai.

so here is part 4 and 5...

hope u all like it...

plz do comment and click like tab...

shazia...

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