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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: pinkycutie

nice update..luved it!!!!thnks for writin da trnslations 2...


thank you!!🤗
your welcome 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Aanchal15

Dazzling update, Ships...👏⭐️... That phone call intrigues me... And, thank u for the pm...🤗


Thank you Aanchal di!!🤗
miss talking to you all the time from BHOH forum 😉
yah it intrigues me too di😆
your welcome[>:D<}
take care!
Ships😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Hey Shilpa.
Nice update dear!!!
Loved the way Arnav helped Khushi. I wonder how they know each other!!
Looking forward to the next part...update soon hun!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Wow nice update hips continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
really lovely update❤️.
plz continue soon.loved it to bits.
raunika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Hey Shilpa.

Nice update dear!!!
Loved the way Arnav helped Khushi. I wonder how they know each other!!
Looking forward to the next part...update soon hun!!


Heyy!!!🤗
Thank you so much!🤗
You'll find out later!😉
surely will update, am writing the third part right now😳
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: SaraPari

Wow nice update hips continue soon


Thank you sooo much Sara di!!🤗
Yeah.. am trying a lot😊
Take care
Ships
❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: rsk16

really lovely update❤️.
plz continue soon.loved it to bits.
raunika


Thank you Raunika di❤️😃🤗
Yes, I will try to update soon!😛 awww thanks😳
By the way di, I ❤️ your name sooo much! Very beautiful!!!😛

Take care
Shilpa😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
Heyy!🤗
Am back with my third update!!!😃
I've added a new character with his pic!! Please read my FF to find out!!😉
Thank you to everyone who commented and liked on my second one!😳 I had such lovely comments!!🤗 Thank you one and all!😉
Here we gooo!😆!!😉 :




We left off:

Khushi walked up to her window sill and started to narrate the story about what had happened at the office to her. The way Lavanya and her bodyguards were making fun of her clothing, and the way she spoke. The way ASR was speaking to her, and then the way he caught her in his arms.
P: "Kya?!! Khushi, mein yeh tumaare balai ki liye ke rahi hoon. Tum waha phir nahi jaogi. Mein tumaara kaam ki liye kahi aur
intezaam karungi, par tum waha uss office mein kabhi nahi jaogi!!!"
K: "Nahi Jiji. Waha sab log mujhe darpok jaise pukaarenge. Aur hum woh nahi hai. Pata hai Jiji ki hum kya hai?
... Hum lakhon mein ek hai! Jo bhi log mujhe pukaarenge, humhe usse KOI parvaah nahi hai..."
P: "Par Khushi hum tumaare - "
K: "Humhe pata hai! Humaare balai ki liye na? Lekin hum uss office mein KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA jaise rehenge."
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P: "Teek hai Khushi. *smiled*"

_________NEXT DAY_________

Khushi and Payal were sleeping in bed. When their alarm clock ringed when it was 7:00.
*Ring Ring! Ring Ring! Ring Ring! !!!!!*

Khushi sat up on her bed and yawned.

She clicked the button on top of the alarm clock and the ringing stopped.

K: "Mmm.. Goodmorning Jiji!"
Khushi gave Payal a goodmorning hug.
"Aaj hum office ja rahe hai, yaad hai na?!"

Payal sat up on the bed too.

P: "Khushi, tumhe sach mein office jana hai ya nahi?"
K: "Haan Jiji. Humne office jana hai!"
P: "Chalo, hum tayar ho jaye."
They both got out of bed and went to go change.


It was 7:30 and bua ji was taking her medicines, while Payal was assisting her.

Khushi picked up her handbag.
"Pranam buaji! Bye Jiji!!"

Buaji and Payal: "Bye Khu - "

*Ring Ring! Ring Ring! Ring Ring! !!!*

B: "Kis ka phone ho sakta hai?..."

Payal was going to go answer the phone when Khushi answered it.

K: "Hello"
Person: "Hello, kya mein Khushi Kumari Gupta se baat kar sakta hoon?"
Khushi thinking: "Awaaz itne pechaani si lag rahi hai."
K: "Ji Khushi Kumari Gupta bol rahi hoon. Aap kaun?"
P: "Tumhe kya? Mein tumhe yeh kehene tha ki tumhe mujhe "Maharashtra Park" mein milna. Mujhe tumse baat karna tha... aur tum apne parivaar tumaare saath mat lana."
Khushi got extremely frightened.

B: "Khushi, kya hua?"
P: "Khushi bata na."

K: "Par aap hai kaun?!!"
-------------------
The phone hung up.
K: "Hello?!! HELLO?!!"
Khushi put down the phone.

Khushi thinking: "Kaun ho sakta hai? Aur who aaj humse milna kyun chahta hai?... aur who awaaz..."

P and B: "Kya hua Khushi? Kis ka phone tha?!"

Khushi felt like she couldn't even breathe. To her, this was a blackmailing scheme! The person across the phone asked if she could go to Maharashtra Park BY HERSELF. What if something happened to her... what if HE did something to her?![:O] All of these thoughts were floating around in her mind. What will happen? ...
...

Khushi explained the conversation that was on the phone between that person and her.
Buaji and Payal were shocked with their mouths open.
They were extremely worried.

B: "Hum tumko jaane nahi dehnge, Khushi!!
P: "Haan Khushi... buaji sahi ke rahi hai... Tum aise kaise jaogi ek ajnabi ko milne huh? Agar tumko kuch hota hai toh?!!"

Khushi paused for a second.
K: "Haan Jiji. Humhe pata hai, lekin... kuch kehta hai mujhko ki meine waha uss park mein usko milna chahiye.. pata nahi kyun!"
Again she paused.
K: "Mera pas idea hain."

B: "HAI RE NAND KISORE!!! Jab bhi is ladki ko koi nayi IDEA milta hai, hum sab ko koi na koi mussibat mein pas jahte hai!!!
Payal beti, tumaare pas koi vichaar hai? 🤣 (now she asks Payal beti😆 )

Payal started laughing really hard🤣
K: "Nahi, nahi buaji!! Humaara IDEA bodh badia hai!!!" 😆
Payal laughed even harder🤣🤣
K: "Kya mein boloon buaji?"
B: "Aacha teek hai bol Khushi.

🤣____________________PLAN____________________🤣

K: "Yeh hai humaara vichaar, Buaji!!!
Bodh ehsaan hai!😉 Hum zaroor jayenge, lekin aap dono ke saath!!! Toh agar who bodh daraavna lagta hai, ya phir hai😆... hum police ko jaldi se phone karte hai. 🤣 (kya BADIA plan banaya hai Khushi ji!!😉🤣 )🤣
Lekin buaji, humhe nahi lagta hai ki woh daraavna hai. Woh lagta ki wh mera koi apna hai."
...
Khushi stopped speaking for a second -
K: "HEYY DEVI MAIYAAA!!!!!!!!!", she shouted at the top of her lungs!!!
Buaji and Payal got frightened🤣.
K: "Yeh hum kya kar rahe hai?!! Humhe office bhi jana hai na?!! Aur aaj humaara doosra din hai!! Hum kaise bool paaye?! HEY DEVI MAIYA!"
P: "Oeyy pagli!! Teek hai, hum sab tumaara "vichaar" se jayenge teek hai?! Mein jaldi se tumaara office phone karungi aur kehengi ki tum aaj nahi aogi teek hai?!"
K: "Lekin humhe kal who sab waqt - "
P: "Chinta mat kar Khushi!! Tum rikshaw ko bulao buaji ke saath aur mein jaldi se phone karti hoon teek hai?!!"
K: "Okay, chalo buaji! Jaldi se aana Jiji teek hai?"
P: "Haan haan jao na?!"

Buaji and Khushi went to go call the rikshaw.

_____OFFICE_____

*ring ring! ring ring! ring ring!*

ASR: "Hello"
P: "Ji, humne office ka boss se baat karni thi."
A: "Yes, speaking."
P: "Ji, aap kaun?"
A: "Arnav Singh Raizada aka ASR... tum kaun ho?"
P: "Ji, hum Khushi Kumari Gupta ki behen Payal."
A: "Oh... (Arnav was starting to remember Khushi's face, and the time when she was about to slip and he caught her. Including the eye-lock.)... haan bolo kya kaam hai?"
P: "Humne aapse bolna tha ki aaj Khushi office nahi aa sakti. Please humhe maaf kijiye, humhe pata hai ki aaj Khushi ka doosra din tha.. lekin kuch zaroori kaam aa gaya."
A: "Teek hai. But tomorrow she'll have to make up the time, understand?"
P: "Ji, zaroor."
--------hung up


K: "Jiji!!! Jaldi aa na!"
Payal locked the door to the house and came running.
P: "Aa rahi hoon yaar!"
Khushi helped Payal up onto the rikshaw while buaji sat at the back.
K: "Bhaiya, "Maharashtra Park"."
... and off they went...

When they reached there, Khushi felt a little scared, despite being with her buaji and Jiji. But again, there were so many people there, so if something happened, someone would always be there - including her family members -.
But the thing was, how would they know who they were looking for?! That was a big mystery! She didn't even have that guy's number!

K: "Pata nahi kaun hoga..."
P: "Chinta mat kar, hum sab yaha hai na?"
They all smiled at each other.

They were just walking around in the areas were many people were present.

There was a man that was following them. He was tall, was wearing a green - stripe shirt, and dark blue jeans.
Buaji noticed him... but didn't manage to see his face.

B: "Khushi, Payal... humaare peeche dekh."
Khushi and Payal both turned around.
They saw him...
he looked like this:
(in my FF, I'm using the star, "Naman Shaw"😉 )



Khushi's mouth opened wide.
Payal noticed that and asked what happened.
K: "Jiji, yeh toh..."
P: "Kaun?! Bata na?!"
K: "Humhe naam nahi yaad hai..."

That guy walked upto Khushi.
This time, Khushi didn't even feel a bit scared.

Guy: "Yaad hai? Aaj Friendship Day hai na? Toh mein har saal iss din peh tumhe milne aata hoon na?"
K: "AMAN?!!!"
AMAN: "Oh!!! Toh ab tumhe yaad hai?!!", he said while laughing.

Khushi ran upto him and hugged him.😳
He hugged her back😳. *awww*😉😆

Buaji and Payal started laughing.

P: "OH I SEE!!😆 Aap ho jo humaare Khushi ko "blackmailing" call di thi😆."

Khushi ended the hug.
She looked behind him, and behind her own self. She looked everywhere.

Am: "Mujhe pata hai ki tum kis ko doond rehi ho. Tera ARNU."
Khushi looked down.
Am: "Khushi maaf kardo, lekin woh aa nahi paya. Actually, mujhe pata bhi nahi hai ki woh kaha hai!"
Payal and buaji looked at each other.
K: "KYA?!!" Tumhe pata bhi nahi hai?!😲"
Am: "Meine bodh pehle usse baat ki thi, aur ussne bola ki woh YAHA, Delhi mein hai. Shahid tumhe usko ek na ek din dekha toh tha, lekin ussko pechaana nahi. Darasal, mujhe bhi nahi pata ki kaisa lagta hai ab.", he said with a chuckle.
K: "Usska number to hoga na?"
Am: "Mmm Hmm.", he said while shaking his head a "no".
K: "Koi baat nahi! Aacha hai ki tum yaha aaye ho!, she said giving in a big smile!😃
Khushi slapped Aman on his arm real hard🤣.
Am: "Ahhh! Woh kis liye tha?!", he said while rubbing his arm😆.
Payal and buaji starting laughing🤣.
K: "Iss liye... kyun ki aap ki wajah se mujhe aaj office nahi ja payi, aur kal.. MUJHE ASR SE DANT PADEGI!!!!, she said while laughing and shouting.
Am: "Kaun "ASR"?!! Tu ne shaadi ki hai?!!! Bina mujhse bolna?!!😲"
Khushi mouth opened way WIDE.😆
Am: "Tumaara muh band kar, ya phir makki jayegi andar."🤣🤣
He closed her mouth.
K: "Tum kaise baat kar rahe ho, Aman?!! Woh humaara Sarkari wala Boss hai office peh.😆"
"Meine shaadi nahi ki hai...pagle!"
Am: "Tumne office join kiya hai?!! WOW KHUSHI!! Yeh toh bodh aacha hai! Actually pata hai kya, meine bhi yaha 1-2 saal ki liye office join kiya hai, kyun ki mein yaha Delhi mein sirf uss waqt ki liye rahunga."
K: "Yeh toh bodh aachi baat hai! Kaun sa office?"
Am: "Tumaara matlab hai Company kaunsa hai na?"😆<<He started laughing. " Toh.. mera company hai AR Industries."
K: "SACH?!!! Mera bhi!!! Mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha hai ki takdeer ne do BEST FRIENDS ko ek company mein naukri di hai!"
Am: "WOW!! Mujhe bhi vishwaas nahi ho raha hai!"

Payal and buaji were getting so bored from watching them talking🤣, so someone FINALLY stepped up.🤣🤣

P: "Tum dono itne saare batein kadenge ya phir ghar bhi jayenge aur thodi si jalebiyan banayenge😉"
K: "Oh haan! Hum aap ki liye aapke pasand jalebiyan banayenge teek hai?!"
Am: "Aacha chalo!"
😆
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THE END!
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Heyy? So... how was it?!!! Hope you all like the new character, Naman Shaw😳. I was thinking that because our real favourite show IPKKND was supposed to get Naman Shaw but didn't yet probably... I've decided to put him in here😃😉.
Hope you all enjoyed it!!
I'm waiting for likes, comments and criticizes!!!😛
I'm fine with everything😉

Take care and lovee you alll,
❤️🤗Shilpa🤗❤️



Edited by shilparoxx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG love it!!! wow he's from kasamh se (pushkar)... aww lovee the fact that he is in the ff, hope he's a good character like he was in KS :) thanksss!! great ff can't wait for the next update
Edited by xxsanaaaxx - 14 years ago

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