FF - Dost Ban Gaye Ajnabi *10th part updated pg.40

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Hi everyone!!!
I'm Shilpa! 😊 Some of you know me, and some don't.
But, I'm here with my FIRST EVER OS on ArHi!!😃 I really hope you all like it!
I'm waiting for your valuable comments!!🤗😳!!!





Khushi was making jalebis with her Jiji, "Payal".

Payal: "Khushi zara cheeni dehna."

Khushi was lost in her own thoughts.

Payal: "Khushi? ... Kya hua?"

She suddenly awoke.

K: "Arrey Jiji kuch nahi!!! Tu chinta mat kar!"
P: "Tu mujhse joot nahi keh sakti, Khushi. Bata naa... kya hua?"
K: "Jiji, tuhne kabhi socha agar ek na ek din mujhe "Arnu" milega? Joh sab hamaare beech mein hua hai, tumko lagta hai woh mujhse dosh dehga?", she said wondering with a pout on her innocent face.

Payal looked at Khushi.

Suddenly the phone rang.

Payal and Khushi just stared at each other. Then, Payal went to go answer the phone.

P: "Hello?"
Other Person: "Ji mein AR Industries se call kar raha hoon. Khushi madam se baat karni thi.
P: "Khushi, yahaan aa."

Khushi's face shot up.

K: "Kyun Jiji? Kissi ne mujhse phone peh baat karni hai?", she said confusingly.
P: "Haan jaldi se yahaan aa na?!"
K: "Oh haan!! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry!!!", she said running to the phone. 😆

K: "Pranam, Khushi bol rahi hain."
Other person: "Hello Khushi madam. Aapne joh job ki liye aayi thi, aapko mil gayi.
Congratulations Khushi Kumari Gupta."
K: "Sach?!!!"😲
Khushi was BURSTING with happiness!
"Thank you, thank you, thank youuu Devi Maiya!!!😃 Ji mein kab se - "

Khushi got cut-off.

O P: "Aapko abhi issi waqt aana padega office. Aap poochiye mat kyun, kyun ki mujhe
bataya gaya hai ki mein aapko nahi jawaab dhoon agar aap yein jawaab poochiye. Agar
aap aaj issi waqt office nahi aayi toh aapko naukri nahi milegi. -------"

The phone hanged up and Khushi was scared to death.

P: "Khushi kya hua?"
K: "Jiji woh... pata nahi!!! Hum woh aadmi office se baat kar rahe the aur unho ne kaha ki mujhe
abhi issi waqt office office jana padega ya phir mujhe yeh naukri nahi milegi!!!"

Payal walked upto Khushi and put her hand on her shoulder.

P: "Kuch bhi ho jaye, Khushi tumhe pata hai na ki humhe paise ki bodh zaroorat hai! Humaare
parivaar ki liye."
K: "Haan Jiji. Humhe aachi taraf se maloom hai."
P: "Aacha hai. *smiled* Tum jaldi se tayaar ho jao, aur phir seedhe office ki liye nikal jao teek hai?!" 😛

Khushi smiled.

Khushi got ready and picked up her handbag and said goodbye to her buaji and Jiji, then left.

When she reached AR Industries, her eyes bacame "badi badi" and her mouth too.😆

K: "Hai Devi Maiya! Yeh AR Industries bilkul boot bangala lagta hai... lekin woh bhi saaf sutara!"🤣

She walked up to the door when a guard asked her where she was going.

K: "Ji pranam!😊 Hum hai Khushi Kumari Gupta aur hum aaj nayi hoon office mein! Humne iss office ka head wala sarkar se milna
tha!"😆

The guard let her in and informed the "head wala sarkar"😆 that Khushi was coming to meet him.

Khushi walked in a little frightened. She noticed how everyone wasn't really working, out of 100%, about 35% were working. The rest were just... careless of their needs.
Khushi just ignored and thought that she would be the star that would be shining in the office. As if the office was Space, and she were one of those TRILLIONSSS of stars that were glowing. But, she would be the one shining the brightest, the lightest, out of all of them in the galaxy. She knew this was definitely destined for her.

K: She said, "Jai Devi Maiya." Then smiled.

Khushi asked a worker where the head boss worked.
He showed her that it was at the second floor, and he showed which cabin.

Khushi took a deep breath and walked up those 15 stairs.

"Ji, mein hoon Khushi Kumari Gupta.", she said with a smile on her face, but with some type of feeling in her stomach and heart.

The Boss: (thinking) "Uski awaaz pechaani se lag rahi hai..."

He turned around really fast, and to his surprise saw...

(same time)
K: "AAP?!"
Boss: "TUM?!"



So??! How did you all like it?😊
I've made the beginning very, very looong because I don't want you all to get bored.😆
I've tried my best with my first ever OS. If lots and lots of you like it, I will continue...😊 My pleasure 😛
I'm waiting for likes, comments, and criticizes!!!
And, if you would like to advice me on a few things, basically what I could do to make it better, what I should disqualify, etc... please don't be afraid!😊


Take care!😊
Shilpa❤️🤗



IF YOU WOULD LIKE ME TO PM YOU LIKE THIS PAGE PLEASE!!😛

I would like to thank my friends Ria di and Nina di for all their love and support!!!🤗
If you would like me to continue please tell me!😊







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rechup thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really i like it dear
good work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RES>>

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Hey Shilpa!

congratz on ur first OS :)

tht was really great!

liked the scene in the beginning at the house!!

and Arnav-Khushi.. 😍

tht was really really awesome!

i liked the title as well!!

keep writing yaar!!
would love to read ur stuff!

Luv,
Aashi <3
Edited by KaJen_AR_DMG - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Im LOVIN it!!!!

Great job Ships! Loving the humor, the jokes, the optimistic Khushi, and the shocking cliffhanger!!! Cant wait to read more!! Keep writing sweetheart! Youre awesome 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rechup

Really i like it dear

good work


Thank you soo much!!!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KaJen_AR_DMG

RES>>


~~~

Hey Shilpa!

congratz on ur first OS :)

tht was really great!

liked the scene in the beginning at the house!!

and Arnav-Khushi.. 😍

tht was really really awesome!

i liked the title as well!!

keep writing yaar!!
would love to read ur stuff!

Luv,
Aashi <3


Thank you Aishi!!!!🤗
love yaa !![:L]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: BarunAnkiLuv

Im LOVIN it!!!!


Great job Ships! Loving the humor, the jokes, the optimistic Khushi, and the shocking cliffhanger!!! Cant wait to read more!! Keep writing sweetheart! Youre awesome 👏


awww🤗
thank you Ria di!!🤗
all because of your support na?!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you WhiteFantasy!!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilparoxx


awww🤗
thank you Ria di!!🤗
all because of your support na?!!😃



Love you <3

Naah,... all because of your awesome writing!! haha

xoxo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey ships 🤗

Amazingly good . Loved it. really beautiful written .. good job
doesnt seem like its your first doing a OS 😊
really nice
would suggest you can turn it into A FF

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