new SS: Forbidden Love part 11 updated on 7/12

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#591

I have just one word to say for the update and thats "AWESOME"...👏

This is one of your most hilarious and perfectly put up updates... and I am amazed once again by the fact that your writing skills and pattern have improved so much since your first FF...

Geet turned out to be one real "mirchi" - i am glad you drew this personality for her - its one I have always wanted her to have - witty, intelligent, on her toes and great presence of mind.

Loving the circle she's taking Maan around - his mental condition is pitiable ... LOL... I so wanted him to be standing here 😆

Imagine, they started off with love making in the first update and they've just gone round and round have reached till a kiss

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anupamachem

@anupamachem

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#592

Wow! Simply great! I love each and every line.
When r u updating Surrogate Relations?
Do continue soon!

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#593

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ,...

poor maan ... 🤣

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#594

part 9
OMG that was just mind blowing Bindu hun...
am laughing at Maan's haalat...
that man deserves something like this torture every night...
but my God Geet's comments about the movie was fantastic...
now Maan will be careful in his revenge and approach...
way to go Geet...
cont soon dear...

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Kshitija

@krndr

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#595

Super like this update

This is called

Nehle pe Dehla

Super update

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#596

that was really awesome... it was so good...

naughty maan was trying to provoke her... poor guy.. kab tak tadpega...

geet is smarty pants... she knows her hubby really well...🤪

this was a very small update... need a bigged one next time please binduechi!!!!!

now my big question!!!!

Was this ur experince... naughty girl!!🤣

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Monali

@monika1992

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#597

Awesome part👏.
I loved it😊.

Continue soon.
thnks 4 pm

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#598

loved the update Bindu, mind blowing 😊
paavam maan singh khuranan ki band bajgayi 🤣

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#599

this was just awesome n so funny...maan's plan backfired completely...i loved hi own comments to geet's whispering ones...lol...maan will never but chicolates...lol...i just loved the update...n then he wanted her to change in her previous nighties...hihih...continue soon n thnxxx...