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wowww loved it

congrats for d new ff

Again interesting...so is he some sort of a criminal or he's running away from them...??thats how they are going to meet then...what turn does her life takes from here...will she remain the perfect being she had been all through her life...I doubt that...😆

Wow,so interesting and written so well,great start

congratulation for new ff
awesome start.
loved it.
continue soon

omg omg here i was thinking untold emotions was your best ..this is also equally so best right from the beginnining..woww i so loved the characterisation that you outlined of geet..somehow i had the feeling esp that writing part of the girl is it autobiographical in any sense? i don't know why but i just felt so..wowww im awaiting with bated breath for next update but dont put pressure on yourself lovely lady..take your time..its Ramadan and omg i cant describe how excited im ...loved that line where you wrote the girl was a part of everything everyone around her wanted to be and also there was yet this other part that wanted to write...such intensely simplistic line yet i felt this so much touching i don't know why...your writing just does stuff to me and my feelingsi get all mushy and pink cloudsy..its such a huge positive aspect of my life ..that i can enjoy..all thanks to u👏👏👏

oh my, im just jumping for joy here. please continue soon. i love both new ffs.

Congrats on new ff

awasome, amazing update
loved it to the core
somehow it showed myself to me
me also dream someone like that type only
well written marvee
continue soon