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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#181

Hi Marvee...thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! Loving dis FF...Maan seems 2 b falling for Geet! He noticed everything abt her! Geet let Maan is her house...a stranger! He is nt scared of him!Well written...Loved the Maaneet interactions. Update soon n pm wen u do! Waiting lol

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allibr

@allibr

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#182

🤗mind-blowing update🤗

loved it❤️

continue soon😍

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Lily201

@Lily201

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Marvee - I love this one a lot (its super special)- you know all of us logical beings there exists a romantic part too - one thats filled with imaginations that often weave themselves in form of poems or other forms of write up - which give us a peek behind the inherent traits of the person😳 This Geet gave me the same feeling😃 Coming to story- loved their first interaction and it seems the poem turned prophetic coz the words she was searching materialise into a man - our Maan, with his bleeding hand too- wonder if Geet'll be able to complete it now😍

That unspoken trust was beautiful and so was the sense of not disturbing the serene moment by questions in their mind

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palompa1

@palompa1

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#184

CoNg,loved this ff waiting for more update soon.

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Deepa

@harshdb

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#185

Wow u have got 253 likes for the first part yaar. for that I want to congratulate you.

Thanks for adding as friend and for the PM

FIRST PART:

Story has good start. I like your Geet⭐️. She is very strong, modern yet traditional, educated and beautiful. Good written.👍🏼⭐️

She is alone though living with her family. There is no one to share her sorrows. I believe that, no one is perfect. We should have somebody to share our sorrows. Other than that point, She has got nice family.

Her restlessness, unable le to complete the poem you described nicely.

So Maan is trying to escape from the gunmen. What is he? Very unfair yaar there is no characterization for the cast yaar. Anyhow beautifull update. 👏

Secong Part:

Congratulations for 216 likes for the second part. U have big following ...keep it up. 👍🏼👍🏼

Geet has allowed a stranger into her home. That's lil strange.Geet's mom has given geet s identity unknowingly. Egar to know what maan is actually. Both actracted to each other. Geet found comfortability & security in Maan's presence.. she did first aid for his hand. co cute...Nice to read that.

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eva007

@eva007

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#186

its as awesome as u...😉waitin for next update...

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Anjali

@Gurlygirl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#187

awesome ff n congraz 4 new ff. I realy love this new concept of ff. Update soon

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#188

Geet was so at peace with this stranger

Loved their sweet silence n sweet talk

It was fab

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#189

awsome update 👏

maan n geets chemistry was relii gud

luvd it aww maan kissed er plzz update soon x 😃

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#190

Marvee sweety,
tht was just awesome...
i love u so much...
even i found the Geet in ur FF lyk u...
even if we dont know u personally,the skill of ur writing
portray us ur thinking n ur ownself to us...
n as u ritely said, u hv the writer's liberty...
n every writer lives her essence in her work...
cuming bak to the FF.,it was just awesome...
lovelys n very sweet too...
continue soon...
thkx n keep writing...
loads n loads of love,hugs n kisses...😃 ❤️

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Wow u have got 253 likes for the first part yaar. for that I want to congratulate you.

Story has good start. I like your Geet⭐️. She is very strong, modern yet traditional, educated and beautiful. Good written.👍🏼⭐️

She is alone though living with her family. There is no one to share her sorrows. I believe that, no one is perfect. We should have somebody to share our sorrows. Other than that point, She has got nice family.

So Maan is trying to escape from the gunmen. What is he? Very unfair yaar there is no characterization for the cast yaar. Anyhow beautifull update. 👏

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Wow u have got 253 likes for the first part yaar. for that I want to congratulate you.

Story has good start. I like your Geet⭐️. She is very strong, modern yet traditional, educated and beautiful. Good written.👍🏼⭐️

She is alone though living with her family. There is no one to share her sorrows. I believe that, no one is perfect. We should have somebody to share our sorrows. Other than that point, She has got nice family.

So Maan is trying to escape from the gunmen. What is he? Very unfair yaar there is no characterization for the cast yaar. Anyhow beautifull update. 👏

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