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Silvy

@SilverBell

Viewbie

+ 15

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Well Its A Good Start. Write More Chapters Soon. (:

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

wow yaar awesome update.I loved it !
it was lovely the way u potrayed sid's emotions . .
I hope. . He is able to forgive himself !
Poor abhay ! He lost everything. .
Mrinalni is such a devil . .
Do pia & mrinalni resemble each other. . ? Like their faces? I hope not !
Thanks for the pm. .continue soon
tc

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

nice prt

thanxxx 4 d pm

n plezzz updt ur gunjun ff plezzz

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

wow I really like this character sketch of Sid. very nice. 👏

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Selina

@Selinapiya

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

It's Good...when will u write about Abhay?

I want to know desparetely...

update soon...😊

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

awesome again nidha!!waiting 2 knw more abt them!!hurry yaar! n thanx 4 pm

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Sid repenting that would be first. and soo many things have gine wrong so what all is he going to put right. I doubt his baby brother will welcome back into the family. Anyway the guilt trip dialogues of /sid was excellent you actually made me feel sorry for the guy.

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Hi Nidhi thx u for this beautiful update on Sid character just love him👏👏👏. Poor Sid he has blindly believed Mrinalini and he is paying for it now. Good that he wants to repent.

The story is getting interesting so update asap dear and do PM me 😊

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

aww...that was super...i loved it...update soon...wanna knw abt abhay and pia more...thanks for pm...

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Omg!!! nidha darling... i 'm in totally love with this ff...
i really dont know how i first missed this!!!!
the very first post about eyes gets a reader hooked to it..
now that's what is called the strategy..

and the character sketch.. this cant be anything better.. just perfect and different...
and you included rithvik dhanjani and yes simran kaur too... wow..

and i just loved the first part..
oh yes, i want regular updates of this ok...
you cant leave us hanging for long time..
i'm sure i'll get addicted to this ff...