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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update .. :) Continue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome updates luvd dem fanx 4 da pms
eagerly w8in 4 da next part plzz cont soon xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
I luvd ths cncp and FF a lot
diffrnt and unique cncept wth maan wolf geet vampire
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whole pykyk team i dnt luv pykyk much bt nw days wtchng regularly at hme maaneet my most fav. Couple
do updatd so plz and PM me also
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: t_areeb

doesnt abhay knows geet is intrested in maan


NO HE DOESN'T KNOW
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harshdb




how r u doing?

GEET : u r perfect ...

MAAN : thank u ... u r lucky then ...


Wahh what a confident' they didn't even confess but still''''😉

ABAHY: u mind ur actions ... just stay away from my sis ...


protective brother haa😉


nice update dear..





for the pm
THANK U SO MUCH FOR THE BIRTHDAY WISHES SIS...



THANK U

REALLY GLAD U LIKED THE DIALOGUES
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed

hmm short but rombavay naughty yana part dear😉 ..

oru minute iru
what did geet say 😲
startus before meal😲 ...what the !!!!!!!!!!😲
hmm jay's covo was hilarious😆!!!!!
OMG god ivanga marubadiyum sanda poda arumbhichutangala😲!!!!
oh god nandy plz itha ilukatha😆!!
awsume update dear⭐️!!!
loved it❤️

startus before meal
HA HA HA... EDA PADATULA PATA DIALOGUE
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehagujral

I luvd ths cncp and FF a lot
diffrnt and unique cncept wth maan wolf geet vampire
hayee
whole pykyk team i dnt luv pykyk much bt nw days wtchng regularly at hme maaneet my most fav. Couple
do updatd so plz and PM me also


THANKS ... FF MOSTLY HAS MANEET SCENES ... U DON'T HAVE TO WATCH PKYEK TO UNDERSTAND THIS FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAPTER - 10


Maan was not much affected by Abhay's so called warning ...After all he is MAAN SINGH KURANNA ... but all that he was concerned was to pacify geet as she was a bit angry on him at least she pretended to be ...

It was time for them to start their journey to the forest ... Everything was set ...maan went to geet's room luckily piya was out somewhere and geet was alone ...Maan hugged geet from back kissing her cheeks ...

MAAN : sorry ...

Geet hit his hands which were on her waist and snapped out of his hold ...

MAAN : come on baby ... i said sorry ...
GEET : so ?
MAAN : so ?! sorry means u should forgive the person ...
GEET : ha ha ha ... very funny ... now don't teach me the meaning for sorry ... i m in no way to forgive u ...
MAAN : listen teasing u is not a criminal offence ... i was just having fun ...
GEET : oh ! really ...

Maan again tried to come close to her ...but she went back ...

MAAN : u r not allowing me to touch u coz u know tat u would melt with my touch ...
GEET : ufff ... over confidence ...
MAAN : why shouldn't i be ... i ...

Their convo was disturbed by a knock at door ...

GEET : why jay is here ?
MAAN : how do u know its jay ?
GEET : Do u expect an answer ?

She said with a winck ...

MAAN : ya ... i know
GEET : u r gonna go or stay here
MAAN : y shd i go ?
GEET : ya... y would ur brothers question u my brother did
MAAN : u know tat ...
GEET : umm...
MAAN : how?
GEET : some source ...
MAAN : tats not fair ...
GEET : everything is fair in love and war ...

Maan smiled...

GEET : we have a war here not love ... u do remember our challange don't u ?

Maan nodded again with a smile ...

Geet opened the door ... jay entered and was surprised to see maan ...

JAY : bro u ? here?
MAAN : Jay u ? here ? ...
Maan repeated in same style ...

JAY : i came to meet geet ...
MAAN : u too ...

Geet hit his chest with a keep quiet look...

JAY : ya ... i ... want to ask ...if ...
GEET : u want me to take ur place in maan ' s car so u can go with piya ...

Both maan and jay were shocked ...

JAY : oh ! u r genius ...
GEET : i know ... i m afraid i can't help u
JAY : y ?
GEET : coz abhay wouldn't allow me to go with maan ... i mean he won't allow me to stay away from him ...
JAY : but ...
GEET : he thinks u guys may harm me ...
MAAN : tats not true ...
GEET : i wish ...
MAAN : wat do u mean ?

Geet ignored him ...

GEET : jay i m ok with tat if u convince abhay...
JAY : fine

( for those who don't know abt PKYEK i would like to inform tat Jay is in love with piya )

Jay left ... maan turned to geet ...

MAAN : why were u saying tat ?
GEET : saying wat ?
MAAN : tat u wish i don't harm u
GEET : nothing impt
MAAN : really !!!
GEET : yes sweet heart ... i was just saying like tat ...

Maan was convinced ...how he wouldn't be after hearing the word sweet heart

MAAN : i thought abhay likes piya ...
GEET : of course he does ...
MAAN : then why jay ?
GEET : maan it will be fun playing jealousy game with abhay ...
MAAN : u don't sound like his sis but like some enemy ...
GEET : whatever ...
MAAN : screw their love story ... tell me what i should do now to ?
GEET : wat ?
MAAN : i m saying sry and u r not listening ...
GEET : maan i m really busy now ... we ll talk later ...

Geet went leaving behind a irritated maan behind ...

later everything was done and they were ready for journey ...

JAY : geet u move into tat car ... i ll go in this ...
GEET : sure ...

Jay whispered to jay ...

GEET : how did u make him agree ...
JAY : secret ...

Geet rolled her eyes ...

Maan was in the car in driver's seat ...Neil sat in the front seat ... Geet didn't like tat ...she sat back making faces ... maan didn't understand until he recieved a text from geet ...
" make him sit back ... i want to sit front ..."

Maan turned back to look at geet ... he gestured with her eyes to move neil back ... maan gave ' how can i? ' look ...geet gave him a angry glare and tat was it he didn't want to make her more angry ...So he made lame excuses and made neil sit back while geet came to front ...

There was silence for a while ... Once neil slipped into deep sleep geet poked maan's arms and gestured him to look back ...

GEET : see ur boring brother is sleeping ... he wouldn't be a good company to sit front ...
MAAN : oh !!!! is tat the only reason u came here ...
GEET : what else ?
MAAN : i didn't say anything...
GEET : u better don't say anything ...
MAAN : i don't know why i always listen to u ...
GEET ( laughs ) : tats coz i m brillient ...
MAAN : i wish i could say tat ...

They all have travelled for abt 6 hrs and had halted in a place for some break ...

Abhay was taking full care of piya ...

GEET : at least pretend to care for me ...

Abhay and piya looked geet with crossed arms staring at them with fake anger ...

PIYA : geet why do u say tat ? abhay cares for u ...
GEET : i wish ...
ABHAY : geet stop it ... she ll think u r really mad at me and then she ll eat my head ...

Geet sat near piya laughing ...

GEET : i was just kidding piya ... infact i m happy tat abhay does care for u ... my promise will be fullfilled soon at least ...
ABHAY : wat promise ?
GEET : its gals's talk none of ur concern ... btw i m happy not having my brother protecting 24*7
ABHAY : don't be happy ... u better stay away from tat f******* animal ...

Geet rolled her eyes ...

GEET : not again ...
ABHAY : no ... i m serious ... stay away from him ...
PIYA : stop it abhay ... he seems nice...
ABHAY : no piya everyone seems nice to u ...
GEET : i m not a kid ... i know to protect myself ...
ABHAY : i know ... but be extra careful abt him ...

Geet was pondering abhay's words ...she wondered why abhay never trust maan ...she saw maan standin leaning on their car's bonnet ... thankfully neil and jay were not around him ... she went to him and hugged him ... maan was sure she was upset or something he slowly caressed her back ...

MAAN : wat happened?
GEET : nothing ... i was just thinking abt something ...
MAAN : abt wat ?
GEET : umm... i tell u later ... now just allow me to relax ...

After a while they continued their journey ...

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NOTE :. DEAR FRDS MY EXAM STARTS NEXT WEEK AND SO I WILL NOT BE ABLE TO UPDATE FOR NEXT TWO WEEKS ... U ALL KNOW ITS SEPTEMBER AND UNFORTUNATELY TIME FOR EXAMS ... IF I TYPE ANY UPDATE WITHIN TWO DAYS THEN I LL POST IT NEXT WEEK IF I M NOT ABLE TO DO THAT THEN MY NEXT UPDATE WILL BE ONLY ON 29.09.11 ... TATS WHEN MY EXAMS GET OVER ...EVEN IF I UPDATE NEXT WEEK I LL NOT SEND PMs SO PLZZ CHECK BY URSELF ... I KNOW U ALL ARE LOVING AND WILL UNDERSTAND MY SITUATION ...BUT AFTER EXAMS I LL UPDATE IN REGULAR BASIS LIKE ONCE IN TWO DAYS ...

SINCE I LL NOT UPDATE FOR NEXT TWO WEEKS I VE A LONG PRECAP OF WAT WILL HAPPEN IN NEXT 5 TO 6 CHAPTERS

# MAAN AND GEET STAYING TOGETHER
# ABHAY'S CONFESSION
# PERILS IN FOREST
# GEET'S PAST

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Posted: 13 years ago


THE UPDATE WAS




the conversation between manneet is really good.. i enjoyed reading...



FOR THE UPDATE & PM

and ALL THE BEST for your exams... do well. dont worry about the pms. i will check your ff often..
Edited by harshdb - 13 years ago

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