It should have been you(ArSH/AR/DMG3 FF) Updtpg148 - Page 97

Originally posted by: janu1610

Supriya i am here again after so many days ,to find out about your updates. You know i ve 500 unread pms nd now a days all i am doing is coming here ,to find out your part ,read it nd finally shut down it...
Now i think this is enough to tell you ,how addicted i am to your ff.
This was a roller coaster ride for me . Every single moment was so precious ,so cute that it ...it gives me goose bumps . i can truly visualize that Armaan who is insane ,who is finally found his strength,his soul mate . Who is too much possessive ,who is mature but still as raw as a school going boy. Who loves some one from all his existence ,with all his might.
Gosh when he utter those words "Main usko din mein..." I was hell shocked ,totally blank, i don't know how many time i read that ...This is totally HIS STYLE.
Shilpa finally knows HIM . she truly deserve this man .She has given all she had nd now its time to get it back . This life is like boomerang ,you get what you had given and she has given herself nd now HE is HERS forever.
finally Ridzi, that was amazingly courageous ,to behave like she did . I appreciate her honesty nd courage ,when she said 'tumhara Armaan ..." That was crucial situation for both but they maintain this moment very well...
GOSH this intensity made me mad . I was not ready to blink my eyes . Mujhe DMG mein ye dekhna tha...
Plz update soon . Now i wanna c her wrist full with chudiyan ,making noise of his name ...ARMAAN,ARMAAN,ARMAAN,ARMAAN ...and that anklet telling him that"Shilpa loves Armaan"
😃
LISTEN this song . i love this no. I think apt for ARSH.
Thanks for pm.
waiting for next.
love n luck.
ritu

Originally posted by: SabzKaShGrAnd

Hahahahahaa GOD we have literally lost it...Seriously man like we are so miles apart and still this is our situation...Wonder what would it be when i get bak😆...and dheere matlab kitna dheere...yaar tu intezaar karwake maarte ho...killer updare deke bhi maarte ho...bohat problem hain yaar😆😆

Originally posted by: SabzKaShGrAnd

Eeeks The first para has my surprise na? OMG i am too excited..>Let me read :D

Hahahahahahahahahhahaaha... I guess u are way to elated at the line chalake pyar karta hoon...u have mentioned about it again...hehehehhe its so cute...And Armaan is such a flirt...I knew it he would do it all deliberately to make her fall on him... heheheh... And I am just loving Shilpa for the lip biting thing...It makes her all so adorable ...

My God...He said it again? *sighing in bliss*

OH MY GOD!!!!!OH EM JEEE>...Like did she actually kiss him?? Like she actuallyy did it? And that too so cutely? My my my...I loved the you showed the scene so slowly..letting me absorb the whole scenerio, the emotions and all...awesome work...

For armaan...well what do I say? My heart swelled with happiness seeing him being showered with so much love..His bruised heart was finally so much love and affection that he deserves...Its such a ecstatic feeling...

U know this is what I love about them..Whatever they want to convey to each other, they manage to...with simple gestures..less words...I love it...They always manage to speak through their eyes which is incredible...

Heheheheheh... I can imagine Armaan pacing all the room and seeing Shilpa everywhere...I so can see it...

I love the line" was so busy being madly in love with Shilpa"...I so love you yaar... :D

I appreciate the conviction with which Armaan makes up his mind to talk to Ridz...I really love wur choice of words...SOmewhere it made me feel that he needs to do it to uplift Shilpa's status..She was his girlfriend..And Ridz needed to know it...Shilpa belonged to Him...and He needed to tell Ridz about it..I liked the subtle seriousness u have created...I love the way the conversation is preceeding...

Ok I can totally feel the turmoil in Shilpa...U know no matter how much we discuss..everytime I cum to read, I forget everything that we talked or planned...Like right now I have no idea what SHilpa would witness hiding behing the glassdoor..I am so anxious...I am having the fear creeping in ki how would Riddhima take it...I can totally understand how SHilpa is feeling...I liked the fact that SHilpa also realised some things are just between AR, and she shouldnt be intervening..If Armaan feels, he would tell her himself...

OH MY GOD...I am dead...Armaan and his possessiveness literally swooped me off my feet...He actually scolded someone for Shilpa? I loved the way you have written this part...I love the choice of words...I love Armaan;s lines...I love it all...

Riddhima...I love the words she said" SHilpa's Armaan"..Somewhere she has also realised that the subconcious thread that might at some point connect them has finally been cut...Armaan now belonged totally to SHilpa...and ONLY SHILPA...And I like the ease with which she has taken it all...

Ok I am actually scrolling up and rerereading the lines Armaan said" mein usse din mein..."...My God..The sheer sense of right, possessiveness is giving me goosebumps...I can feel Shilpa;s eyes turing moist at the depth of the emotions of the man she loves so dearly...He actually reciprocates the same love like no one else...Its just amazing...

My heart skipped a beat at Riddhima;s word..Bohat pyar karte ho na usse...

Oh My God...ARmaan is insane...He is crazy..mad..maniac...I mean no normal person can have so meaningful gestires that words fail to describe them...

Yes..This is Armaan..The same Armaan Shilpa found torn apart..broken..shattered..The one she took care of, healed with nothing but love...gave a new life...and in process, he rightfully became her possession...her everything..Her man...

I Know..*sigh*...somewhere for Riddhima her heart would still flinch..But it is one of those situations when the person in fron of u is so damn happy...so so so happy..that u dont even feel ur heart twisting...Armaan's achievement and his happiness washed away each and every other emotion present in that room...Nothing seemed significant in front of the satisfaction he was harbouring in his eyes...I know ARmaan is one of those people whose happiness actually has that radiance it feels u too...If I was in Riddhima;splace..my eyes would turn moist too...cz this guy has suffered so much..and finally he has gotten what he deserves..what is rightfully is..what is just meant for him...somehow she knows that they both did not fit as perfectly as the jigsaw puzzle pieces, unlike him and shilpa..

SHit shit...I was struggling my best not to be affected..But the mention of basketball broke my damn..One of the moments when tears came in my eyes...Like Once again thanks to you but I can SHilpa Anand -the Riddhima and Armaan parting ways...for good this time..SHIT SHIT SHIT...This is horrible..this feels horrible...

And she said it...MY long wished for line...she said it...True that...She couldnt love and make him happy at this crazy level...Not because she was at fault..But because it wasnt meant to be...Its just destiny which I really appreciate them for pulling through so beautifully...

I loved the word u have chose..BLESSING...i love how beautifully made shilpa realise the diisguised form of blessing she showered on her..Only SHilpa knows what it meant for her..The depth of her words was only understood by the three people present here...

Shit..they spotted her...Crap yaar i forgot what happens in this scene and now I am tensed...

Thw way u have described shilpa and riddhima as riddhima walks to shilpa is incerdible..perfect choice of words...emotions very aptly described...I loved Riddhima;s feelings...

:O :O :O..SHe said it????she said it?TUMARA ARMAAN? She actually officially gave Armaan to SHilpa...SHe did it?? MY GOOD LORD!!!!Tonight, Armaan and Riddhima has matured once more...learnt a lot...explored a whole new set of emotions..and grown up...They both have officially let go of everything...and stepped into worlds that did not connect in any way...

Not Armaan, even I finally have broken into a grin after reading the hath khali line...What a roaler coaster ride it has been reading this part today...Finally some light words...light moments...I loved and would like to give u a thumbs up for pulling them thorugh it...the parting words were just awesome...and as Riddhima has left now..I dnno what Shilpa will do...(i forgot :P) ...But I just feel like running and give him a hug...just to express what is going inside shilpa...

Eeekkksss Shilpa did it...OMG...COngratulations to u..u made me feel exactly what Shilpa felt...u r a gem writer supz...:D

As Armaan kissed her hands..I am seeing the AR first date in basketball court scene..when he kisses her hand..i mean karan kisses shilpa's hands...

I am loving the lil convo they r having...If I was in shilpa;s place..I would give this man anything he asks for...for what he has done today..anything and everything...

Eeekkksss

UTHAKE LE JAOONGA? *faints*

Okay honestly I was hell anxious at how this part wd cum up..obviously for the reason u are aware of ...But Congratulations for putting it up so beautifully that i have no words to praise ur work...

Line of the day:

1)main usse din me nahin akele aane deta...aur tumne usse raat ke ek baje akele aane ko kaha hai?

2)jaldi kaho...warna utha kar le jaoonga.

Originally posted by: kaash-kash

OMG OMG OMG OMG abh mein ky khaoon

seriously year this last part ne ton meri jaan hi le li...AMAZING. I just loved how the ARSH love was portrayed through AR...by seeing the way AR are and what they were saying ARSH love was just spewing out! UNBELIEVABLE!!!!!

bahut dinon ke baad mile ho...

WHAT A LINE YAAR WHAT A LINE...it just shows the pain of Riddhima I mean wonderful year like she hadn't seen him around...you had tears in my eyes at this part seriously 👏

A: main usse din me nahin akele aane deta...aur tumne usse raat ke ek baje akele aane ko kaha hai?

this was the MASTER stroke here...like I said you managed to show ARSH through AR what an accomplishment...the possessiveness in his words just to die for!!!

R: bahut pyaar karte ho na uss se?

and then Ridz could just sense what he wanted to say so she just asked him what a moment that was!!!!

R: tumhe pata hai...itna khush toh main bhi tumhe nahin kar payi

AHHH I DIED AT THIS LINE! KYA LIKHA HAI! man the courage and the guts that it would take to say that mind = blown!!!

R: tumhara Armaan tumse bahut pyaar karta hai...

OH MAN!! even this one! you NAILED it...hats off to Ridz for that one AMAZING!!!

And of course the last line it was just like 😲 OMG OMG OMG 😍 Sahi cliffhanger hai year now PLEASE PLEASE hurry

this is my fav FF and I don't want have to wait SO long 😉

lots of love and seriously 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: m4manju

finally I m here to comment on the last 3 superb updates...had reserved earlier but now not able to find it... anyway
its no news that as much as kash are rocking, your write ups as in updates rock too 😎 there are so many things i want to mention about 3 previous updates...will try to mention as many as i can now coz currently m in the kash dream-land 😳
first things first, i found it so cute when shilpa called him and said "thank you, mujhe paglon ki tarah ghoomne par majbur karne k liye"...it was really oye-hoye-ish statement 😳
and then next update "proper girlfriend-boyfriend" 😆 can I love them more and could you have made them sound more lovable? ten on ten to you for writing it ⭐️ her tying the dupatta n surprising him was too cute ...her confusions and him clearing it so easily yet clearly :)
and OMG she kissed him on his cheeks? 😲 i m shocked too, along with armaan 😆
ridhima thought armaan as shilpa's armaan... i have to say i luvd ridhima here for thinking this :P
ridhima's feelings are so realistic man... i did feel a lil bad for her there... but its good for her that she accepted the truth :)
and yet again the last romance... "utha kar le jaonga" i was so imagining karan say this to shilpa u knw ...too good...cant wait for the kangan part now 😳
you are really a gem of a writer Supriya...keep it up :)

Originally posted by: supriya91

thank you so much! this was so so very kind of you! I am so happy to hear that you think this way, it really is amazing! That is really exactly what I wanted and I am so glad that in an ArSh FF you connected so well with Riddhima! this means a lot!! Aww you are so sweet, I promise not to disappoint! thanks again!!