It should have been you(ArSH/AR/DMG3 FF) Updtpg148 - Page 91

Originally posted by: unnati_gupta

hey awesome ff.,
Was readin it bt dint comment... so 2dae finally doin it..
Its juz beautiful hw u hav described deir feelings nd emotions fr 1 another...
Nd d bst part was " PROPER BOYFRIEND GIRLFRIEND "...
Do update soon nd pm me...

Originally posted by: shilpafan1

Awesomeee part plzzz cont soon

Originally posted by: rads73937

Wonderful part. M just eager to see riddhima's expression wen she'l come to knw about armaan and shilpa's relation. Plz write that part sooon. Thanx for the pm. Take care.

Originally posted by: KaShAdmirer

😊 this was a cute update, though shilpa was li'l scared, but thanks to Armaan he handled her well.
loved the Proper boyfriend girlfriend thing 😃
it reminds me one of KaSh interview of 2008.
loved the update,
give me more ArSh 😛 i'll comment next time as well 😆

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz

Awww Awww Awww once again Awww...
Awesome part, and FINALLY!! proper boyfriend girlfriend.

Originally posted by: MaNaLoVeKaSh

awesome part :)

Originally posted by: fri42911

extremely well written!!!!!!!

loved how you show ARSH's strong feelings for each other.

the love bond they share!!

Originally posted by: karan-shilpa

d best part :D
it was best: <3
proper boyfrnd girlfrnd , hahahahah :P awesum (y)
thnk you for lonf part :D :D
thnx for d pm too.. :)
conti soon...

Originally posted by: KaSh_luv

ahh! Proper boyfriend girlfriend 😍..haye... totally loved this update... it left this amazing feeling inside me..don't know how to explain it... just ❤️

Ok in the next part I think Armaan deserves a good night kiss...😉...next update needs to be written fast coz i really dont have the patience to wait... lol.. jaldi! 🤪

Originally posted by: SabzKaShGrAnd

Sorry for the late reply...I was ill...

The very first para felt so blissfully beautiful to read.. SO much selflessness...Even i myself ddnt ponder at these thoughts... All Armaan wanted was to love her...to keep her happy...to fill up her the emptiness in her life...to give her everything she has been deprived of...give her the love...be her friend...her family..her love...it fealt so soothing and beautiful to read...i loved how u described ...

aww im so glad you liked that part! I always see Armaan as someone who would feel this way plus I felt like he knows what he owes to her and OMG I love how deep we get into this! It's just amazing! 😃

As for shilpa...u know how have written about her confusion and insecurity so meticulously, that at one point my chest felt tight...even i started to have the same doubts as hers...u actually made me sink into her world...i was desperate that when would the morning come...even i wasnt too sure about their relationship...and as morning arrived...i had the same sinking sensation that i used to have back in the days when i sat for my high school finals..as if my fate wd also be decided wth armaan;s arrival that morning...lol...such was a the extent of ur writing that i actually wore the shoes of shilpa...

😆 you really are amazing yaar! But on a more serious note I am glad you felt that way because honestly from experience that feeling of "OMG is this real?" is just the most frusrating thing in the world so I'm happy you got what I wanted to say 😃

Oh God!!Armaan is just so cute..i could actually imagine him do the stupid talking to himself thing and grinning...and when shilpa bites her lip..itbwas so cute when arman sees her do that...and i loved how one little gesture erased years of insecurities..

My heart went out to shilpa when she was thinking if she had the right to sit with armaan on his bike the way she wants...i felt so bad for her...poor thing never got anyone in her life...and when she got, she is just sure of how to behave...and as her behavior disturbed armaan...i felt kinda scared that things dont get ruined now...but yay...i loved how armaan made her hold him...

OH MY GOD!!!!!the bike ride!!!! Somebody needs to pinch me...is this like actually happening? I mean the entire ride...from the brakies to the flirting to the hassi toh line and then...pyar se pakarti...pyar se chalate...AND..CHALAKE PYAR KARTA HOON...did they actually all these lines?eeekkksss OH my GOD!!!!i am so in love with them..

😆😳 I must admit I was pretty proud of the line when I wrote so this make me REALLY happy! 😃

Ok...i am really impressed by armaan;s maturity...from the fact that he realised shilpa being disturbed, to the fact that it was disturbing him too...the fact that he wanted to work on it right there right now...and how perfectly he could capture her expressions...left me in nothing but awe...

OMG!!!!The kiss...i swear i could see armaan kiss shilpa and vanish in the hallway...i could imagine that...it was tooo KaShsome.. ;) ...but yes...shilpa;s insecurities about being proper boy friend and girlfriend was troubling me too...cz for the first time she had no idea how to be with armaan..for the first time armaan needs to show her the way...

Okay...the terrace scene...one of ur most beautiful ones...as much i want to write abt it..i dnno what to..there are so myriads of things...each and every line spoke volumes...i mean the way armaan came to her, threw away the garbages from her heart...my own heart melted...i mean i want to say much but i am just in a world of ecstasy now...i dnno what and how to write about how i felt reading the scene...shilpa was so vulnarable...the way they said sorry..the way shilpa voiced out her hears...ur choce of words...armaan;s feeling and reactions to her insecurities...the way he dismissed them...shilpa;s gesture..her realisaton of her rights...its alll so so so so so so so so so so heart warming...i am at a loss of words..when i was reading, i forgot that i was supposed to comment...i juts kept reading and drowning..and wen the scene ended, i was like...this scene is all about feeling...and i dnno how to write how i am feeling?

don't worry reading this I understand that you loved it and that's just beyond great! That was the dose of intensity that you like to read!! 😃 So I'm like overjoyed at the fact that it worked! 😃

The last scene...my my my...i love dhanno...i mean she is completely crazy man...i loved her spirit..and the last line...proper girlfriend boyfriend..

😆 ever since we spoke that about that interview and you told me how much you love it maine dhaan lee hai ki I will use every single last line of that interview 😆

Scene of the day: undoubtedly the terrace scene...runner up: bike ride in the morning...

Lines of the day:

agar pyaar se padak ti toh aise kuch karna nahin padta...ab bhugto...

agar tum pyaar se chalaate toh aisa kuch nahin hota...

main pyaar se nahin chalata...mein chala ke pyaar karta hoon...

THANK YOU THANK YOU Ms. Co-Creative! 🤗