It should have been you(ArSH/AR/DMG3 FF) Updtpg148 - Page 90

loved how you show ARSH's strong feelings for each other.

the love bond they share!!

Ok in the next part I think Armaan deserves a good night kiss...😉...next update needs to be written fast coz i really dont have the patience to wait... lol.. jaldi! 🤪

The very first para felt so blissfully beautiful to read.. SO much selflessness...Even i myself ddnt ponder at these thoughts... All Armaan wanted was to love her...to keep her happy...to fill up her the emptiness in her life...to give her everything she has been deprived of...give her the love...be her friend...her family..her love...it fealt so soothing and beautiful to read...i loved how u described ...

As for shilpa...u know how have written about her confusion and insecurity so meticulously, that at one point my chest felt tight...even i started to have the same doubts as hers...u actually made me sink into her world...i was desperate that when would the morning come...even i wasnt too sure about their relationship...and as morning arrived...i had the same sinking sensation that i used to have back in the days when i sat for my high school finals..as if my fate wd also be decided wth armaan;s arrival that morning...lol...such was a the extent of ur writing that i actually wore the shoes of shilpa...

Oh God!!Armaan is just so cute..i could actually imagine him do the stupid talking to himself thing and grinning...and when shilpa bites her lip..itbwas so cute when arman sees her do that...and i loved how one little gesture erased years of insecurities..

My heart went out to shilpa when she was thinking if she had the right to sit with armaan on his bike the way she wants...i felt so bad for her...poor thing never got anyone in her life...and when she got, she is just sure of how to behave...and as her behavior disturbed armaan...i felt kinda scared that things dont get ruined now...but yay...i loved how armaan made her hold him...

OH MY GOD!!!!!the bike ride!!!! Somebody needs to pinch me...is this like actually happening? I mean the entire ride...from the brakies to the flirting to the hassi toh line and then...pyar se pakarti...pyar se chalate...AND..CHALAKE PYAR KARTA HOON...did they actually all these lines?eeekkksss OH my GOD!!!!i am so in love with them..

Ok...i am really impressed by armaan;s maturity...from the fact that he realised shilpa being disturbed, to the fact that it was disturbing him too...the fact that he wanted to work on it right there right now...and how perfectly he could capture her expressions...left me in nothing but awe...

OMG!!!!The kiss...i swear i could see armaan kiss shilpa and vanish in the hallway...i could imagine that...it was tooo KaShsome.. ;) ...but yes...shilpa;s insecurities about being proper boy friend and girlfriend was troubling me too...cz for the first time she had no idea how to be with armaan..for the first time armaan needs to show her the way...

Okay...the terrace scene...one of ur most beautiful ones...as much i want to write abt it..i dnno what to..there are so myriads of things...each and every line spoke volumes...i mean the way armaan came to her, threw away the garbages from her heart...my own heart melted...i mean i want to say much but i am just in a world of ecstasy now...i dnno what and how to write about how i felt reading the scene...shilpa was so vulnarable...the way they said sorry..the way shilpa voiced out her hears...ur choce of words...armaan;s feeling and reactions to her insecurities...the way he dismissed them...shilpa;s gesture..her realisaton of her rights...its alll so so so so so so so so so so heart warming...i am at a loss of words..when i was reading, i forgot that i was supposed to comment...i juts kept reading and drowning..and wen the scene ended, i was like...this scene is all about feeling...and i dnno how to write how i am feeling?

The last scene...my my my...i love dhanno...i mean she is completely crazy man...i loved her spirit..and the last line...proper girlfriend boyfriend..

Scene of the day: undoubtedly the terrace scene...runner up: bike ride in the morning...

Lines of the day:

agar pyaar se padak ti toh aise kuch karna nahin padta...ab bhugto...

agar tum pyaar se chalaate toh aisa kuch nahin hota...

main pyaar se nahin chalata...mein chala ke pyaar karta hoon...

Oyyee Hoyee!! 😆 I'm so glad you enjoyed the read! There will be lots more proper boyfriend and girlfriend!! 😉 Thanks so much!!!

thank you 😃