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danny0072

@danny0072

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Posted: 13 years ago

#821

at last confession thxs for ther pm

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ritu

@janu1610

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Posted: 13 years ago

#822

Supriya amazing part . each word you embedded in this part has wonderful impact of emotions . It really took my heart away . My breathing was rigid with the intensity of this marvel explosion of feeling. every word ,every action ,every move is engraved deep down in my heart.you know i took three days to read this .My office work is taking toll on me nd i wanted it to read peacefully .
Any way i am really obliged that you have written this for us.
thanks for pm.
love n luck
ritu

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#823

Awww! Finally finally finally the confession. Man u portrayed it so beautifully. Hats off. Thank u so much. Thanx for the pm. Update sooon jaldi jaldi.

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KaShAdmirer

@KaShAdmirer

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#824

well, i guess the intensity of the part made me comment on it, this was super suuuper believe me,
from last few updates i was feeling quite suffocating cz of the confusion going inside armaan, but now i can say this part made me feel fresh.
the way he realized and analyzed everything that was amazing, and the last part

" A: ab jab baarish ho gi toh bhagwan bhi tumhare saath jhoome gein...kyonki woh bhi samajh gaye ki jitne tumhare armaan ab tak pure nahin hue...woh sab yeh Armaan pure kare ga... I love you! "

that point made me cry, and i felt like something loosened from inside me. i felt so relax after that confession. really an appreciable update, hats off supriya no doubts you portrayed pain, love, & care in a best possible way.
waiting for the next update now, its gonna be so much fun now.

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Afrin

@_Afrin_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#825

Supriya my dear u made me speechless...I dont have any words to describe my feelings after reading these last 2 parts...
Arman's realization...what can I say abt this...this is the most natural/realistic realization I ve ever read of...I just loved the way u made me involved in his thinking...hats offf...
and then the real confession part...one of the best confession I ve ever read/seen of...how did u do this yaaarrr...u made me cry again...u finally gave ArSh a closure...actually I should say this is the best confession ever as this is our most desired confession...and the way u put ir this is simply amazing...loved how Arman supported her by simply being there...no intrusion no pressure nothing...just simply holding her hands...Goshhh...
Arman is sooo r8..." There was no perfect moment. There was no grand gesture. There was no perfect setting. Every single thing in his world was perfect because she was there, every gesture was grand if it was something done for her, every single setting was perfect as long she was with him."...this is all what Shilpa needed...she only needs her Arman...and he just gave her that...
and this line was the end of me.."ab jab baarish ho gi toh bhagwan bhi tumhare saath jhoome gein...kyonki woh bhi samajh gaye ki jitne tumhare armaan ab tak pure nahin hue...woh sab yeh Armaan pure kare ga... I love you! "...couldnt stop my tears from flowing and flowing...
man u r amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!u r one of the best writer over here u kno that r8...and if u dont then I m telling u...😛😆
cant wait for the next part...btw u ve pretty much improved ur speed...lol...and I dont have any complain abt the length either...😉...but i kno I m getting worse at commenting......sorry for that yaar...😳😳
love u...muahhh...cont soon...🤗

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harshadislove

@harshadislove

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#826

omg :O amazing :D
yaay yaay armaan loves shilpa :D <3
conti soon... dyin to read next part
n thnx for d pm... :)

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theresa

@tintinu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#827

where is the update darling waiting for the majunu armaan

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#828

I have so much going on in me after reading the update, am rendered speechless.
Incredible!

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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#829

Beautifully written and an amusing confession.".please continue soon and thanks for the pm

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supriya91

@supriya91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#830

Originally posted by: janu1610
Supriya amazing part . each word you embedded in this part has wonderful impact of emotions . It really took my heart away . My breathing was rigid with the intensity of this marvel explosion of feeling. every word ,every action ,every move is engraved deep down in my heart.you know i took three days to read this .My office work is taking toll on me nd i wanted it to read peacefully .
Any way i am really obliged that you have written this for us.
thanks for pm.
love n luck
ritu

Ritu!

thank you so much! You are such a sweetheart! I am so glad that despite all your office work this could make you smile!!! <3