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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: glamdoll12

Awesome part

Thanks for the PM
I really wanna know the real reason for Geet's cold behavior towards Maan , has anything happen with Geet when Maan had left or when she heard that Maan love Suzeil that's why she makes herself cold
Pls clear all this
I think that Suzeil has come back to India to rub salt in wounds arggg I hate her
Pls update asap


lovely comment dear..thnxx

next few upadtes vil reveal most of d truths...

so all get ready.


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Posted: 13 years ago

thnxx shruti... 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

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thnqq for d LIKES N COMMENTS...


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i need supprt from u all to move further...

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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 22


1 tear rolled out of his eyes..bringing him back to reality...
how much he wnted to meet her once dat day...
wanted to take his geet in his arms..giving her a bear hug..a kiss on her cheek...
just once atleast...

he wiped his tear and about to go back for his work...
wen d door banged open and dere she stood...
maan looked at her shocked...

" tum..."

...

geet was engroced reading a file when her phone rang...
...
geet angrily - tasha i told u not to disturb me for sum time...
tasha scaringly - m sorry mam...but mr.wahi wanted to talk u urgently...
geet calmed a bit - wahi uncle...
tasha - yes mam...
geet - ok connect me...
tasha connected mr.wahi's call to geet...
geet - yes uncle...how r u...
mr.wahi - ohh so finally geet handa got time to talk to her uncle...
geet smiled - its not like dat uncle...i was just too held up dese days...
mr.wahi smiled - i know beta..dnt get panic...
geet - wen did u came back...
mr.wahi - just last week...nwz i called to talk about our project...
geet - ohh project...i had a meeting wid mr.sameer last month...and..
mr.wahi - mr.sameer...sounds good...
geet giggled - uncle..wen was d last time u were serious...
mr.wahi laughed - so tell me...
geet - yaah..we had discussed basic...n my team has already done wid d blue-prints...
mr.wahi - dats great...so lets arranage a meeting soon..so dat u can strt wid d construction soon...
geet - yaah..i vil check my meeting details and vil let u know d earliest date for meeting..
mr.wahi - ok beta..i vil be waitng...
geet - ok uncle...take care..
mr.wahi - yaah..bye...

mr.wahi cut d call...
...
" here u r done..." , exclaimed mr.wahi to sameer who was impatientlylistenning to dere conversation..
sameer smiled n hugged mr.wahi - thnx dad...u r d best...
mr.wahi smiled - but u could hav done dat by urself...
sameer - how dad...geet was not even cuming on phone...
mr.wahi - she must be busy wid sumthing..otherwise she is very professional...
sameer - u telling me dat...she calls me mr.sameer...i mean..wat is d problem in calling sameer...
mr.wahi giggled - sameer..u im getting a weired feeling...
sameer - about wat..
mr.wahi - u n geet...is it like u like geet or sumthing...
sameer cleared his throat n looked away - wat...dad u r funny ...ofcorse no..aur geet ko pata chala to wo mujhe gayab hi kar degi..uski ankhen degi..she is dangerous...
mr.wahi laughed - ohh sameer..stop acting like a small kid...i dnt believe dis..u r my son...let me tell u ur mom n i had a love-marriage...uthake leke jana to humara khandani rivaz hai..aur tum ek ladki se dar rahe ho...( dramatically)...
sameer rolled his eyes - stop acting dad...u know how serious person she is...
mr.wahi - dats mean i was right...
sameer looked at him confused ...
mr.wahi - u hav liking towrds geet right..(he asked winking)...
sameer tried to hide his smile - dad aisa kuchh nahi hai...she is very different..n im willing to know her more...
mr.wahi hugged sameer - dat like my son...
sameer giggled...

...

suzeil entered d cabin..while maan immediately stood up...
he didn't expect her to be here all of a sudden...
yes ofcorse he is happy...isn't he...
he smiled uncomfortably...
suzeil walked in n hugged maan...
maan tried to hug her back and sumhow did it...
its not like he didn't miss her...
but she came without telling him...
wait a min..did he receive her any call in 1 month ..so how cpuld she tell him...
suzeil could feel d uncomfort in his hug...
she broke from d hug...
maan smiled at her...but d smile didn't reach his eyes...
suzeil - r u not happy...
maan - no baby..ofcorse im happy...dat was a surprise...
suzeil - kind of..u were not receiving my call...so i had to cum...
maan - umm yaah...u know how busy i get..hav started KC...so many files needed to be read...introduction wid clinets n blah blah..d whole month went like hell yaah...
suzeil smiled - i can understand...how r u ..
maan - m ok..howz u...wen did u plan to cum...
suzeil - just last week...completed my work dere n came at ur service boss...
maan smiled...
suzeil - r u only gonna smile or take me home..i wanna meet dadi maa and geet...did u manaofy her...
maan's smile again vanished wid d name of geet...
suzeil - she is still not talking to u...
maan - lets go home..dadi vil be happy to meet u...
suzeil knew he is hding sumthing...
but she shrugged of her thoughts n both left for home...

...

as geet hanged call of mr.wahi...
she closed her eyes again...
she wanted loneliness and peace...
she wanted more loneliness dat she already hav...
she wanted to be alone till her brain again overpowers her heart...
she wanted to bcum d same geet who can scare d hell out of anybody wid her single look...
she cnt be weak..she cnt be...
she cnt be dat stupid geet again who ran aftr d maan who left her 2 two yrs or sau forever..without meeting her once...
was he dat angry dat he didn't meet her once...
he had hurt her...
he had said she is cuming between his dreams...
and...
he left her without meeting her once...
how could he...

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FLASHBACKS...

aftr saying dose painfull words..he left her...
and she...she broke down in tears...
she cried and cried and cried...
how could say sumthing like dat...
how can he think i would stop him from his success...
he was so rude...
he never talked to me like dat...
stupid idiot duffer...
and dusht danav too..i call him right...
but he might hav said it in anger...
i know him he can never think of me like dat...
his stupid anger...
y he said like dat...
i hate him..i so hate him...
duffer..cnt he understand..i cnt live without him bcoz...bcoz..i...bcoz...he..he is my best frnd..and...i just cnt live without him...dat too 2 yrs...
babaji...y is he doing dis to me...
...
geet cried n cried...
but she didn't go to meet him coz she had got fever...
dadi had cum to meet her worried of her fever...
geet couldn't go to maan as his words were still ringing in her ears...
she was scared wat if he had uttered dose words wid sum meaning...
she could not handle it...
aftr crying n crying n crying...wen geet finnaly drfited to sleep...
...
geet didn't heft her maan's warm touch on her...
how much she missed her maan..close to her...
she felt like he kissed her forehead..carrased her cheek dat was still having layer of tears...
she felt like he had apolosized to her for being so angry...
can she be ever angry wid her maan...
she alwz knew he didn't meant dat...
but...
she felt like his warmth is now leaving...
she wanted him back..close to her..hugging her...
getting scared..she opened her eyes in a jerk...
and
dere was no1...
a fresh layer of tears again rolled out of her eyes thinking it was a dream...
he didn't cum to say her sorry...
its been 4 days he said dat..and still didn't cum to meet her again...
is dat mean..he meant dose words...
no no..dat cnt be...
she didn't even know...wen he was leaving for london...
wat if he left without meeting her..no no...
she was sure..he vil cum to meet her...
he cnt see her cry...
dadi had cum to meet her often..
but showing her fake anger for him..she didn't ask dadi about him..
she knew he needed her for packing...
so she thought of throwing her fake her out of her mind and go to meet him..
...
and she was about to go...
uttara came to her and started dragging her for shopping...
geet - uttara me nahi aa sakti...
uttara - mujhe kuchh nah sunna...2 hafte ho gaye tu ghar se bahar nahi gayi..ab chal..
geet - uttara plz..mujhe maan ki madat karni hai packing me...
uttara - me abhi maan ke ghar se aa rahi hun...uski packing puri ho chuki hai...
geet shocked - kyaaa
...
dat hurt her more...
he only said na cum for packing..n now he dnt need her for packing too...
she was so hurt wid his indifferent behaviour...
dat she decided to go wid uttara...
dey did shopping...actually uttara did but geet was all d time lost in her own world..

...
geet's heart broke more n more wid each passing second...
she cnt believe he still hav not cum to meet her..neither did say sorry yet...
duffer...
godd y cnt he understand she is missing him...
she just wanted to run to him and hide in his arms..crying..hit him and ask to say sorry...
to show d fake anger till he kisses her cheek millions times...
give her teddy-bear to chocolates...
den she vil think of forgiving him...
she smiled but again tears came out thinking he havn't cum yet...
hav he left...
no no...i should ask dadi...
enough of my stupid ego...
thinking so she picked phone...n called on home number...
nakul - hello...
geet - nakul bhaiyya...me geet bol rahi hun...jara dadi maa ko phone dijiyena...
nakul - arre geet baby..aap ko pata nahi aaj maan baba london ja rahe hai..sab air-port par gaye hai..unhe vida karne...
dat was it...
phone just sliped from geet hands and earth sliped out of her feet...
she was shcoked like hell...
but it took her a sec to regain herself...
and...
she ran...
.
.
.
she ran and ran and ran...
...
panting heavily like just came from maretho race...
she sumhow reached air-port...
but d sight made her heart broke into millions of peices...
...
coz she saw dadi maa cuming out alone...
geet just fell on her knees...
dadi maa shocked to see geet like dat...
and her condition made dadi maa more worried...
dadi just ran to her and took her in her arms...
geet started crying...
it was her heart dat was tearing apart...like millions of niddles just passed ripping her heart appart...
geet chocked in breath - dadi maa..maan...mujhe chhodkar...
dadi maa in tear - geet beta...aap...
but..geet lost her senses and broke out of hug...
dadi maa looked at her worried...
geet more to herself - maan..mujhse bina mile..mujhe chhodkar...mujhe..mujhe chhodkar...
...
she couldn't complete her sentense...
and just ran from dere...
...

FLASHBACK ENDS...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh man...how long do u plan to torture us "poor souls"...pls kuch positive lao na...I LOVED D UPDATE...but m so so sad after reading...both r suffering...v readers too...so much pain...hurt...wht to say...

i knew it was maan's GF...i some how hate her...its nt her fault bt i dont like her...mr. wahi control ur mind and heart...

sab thik kab hoga??????????? very depressing...

story is amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ff nice update
loved it
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
relii nyc update cnt w8 2 read more
plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved da update
it was amzing

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