dooriyan...bhi...hai...jaroori !!! pt 22 -pg 128 - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 19
nice part...
idiot fool gadha...
grrr stupid Maan...
according to Dadi this is nothing and this itself has broken Maan whats left for him to know?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update, poor maan going through so much pain what happens when he comes to known what geet felt foe him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderfu8l update...waiting 4 d next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
so, reality will be struck to maan now . waiting for those moment where he will understands he loves geet ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part
Please ellaborate more abt many storms to come yet ----- What truth is there more to be reveal am eager to know it
Pls update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
update nxt part soon. plz plz plz plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
kya suspense hain yaar ab toh bata do
jaan nikal ke rakhi hain
kab bataogi
but anyway this part is awsome nw
he will understand that wht he felt about geet
surely and he should be
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update. It was realy painful update. Desperatly wanting to know their past. Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Updating part 20



Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 20



maan - uska khayal rakhen ke liye me hoon na..
dad smiled - tum uske dost ho maan..par usse yar ki jarurat hai..ek sathi ki..jaise aap ne suzeil ko chuna hai thik usi tarah...
maan was uncomfortable wid dat...
dat means..he vil no more be geet's 1st priority...
he was unsure of his own discomfort...but he drifted his thoughts...
n went to his room...without uttering 1 more word..

...

" usse sach bata de " , said hameer who was standing right behind her wid uttara...

his words brought geet back to her senses...
wat d helll
wat d bloody hell was she is doing...

she has promised herself..she vil nto cry...dat she vil not let her past overcum her present life...
den y again n again...
just den she recalled maan has left...
she suddenly stood up..looking ito hameer's eyes...
hameer knew..wat wa she searching for...

hameer - he went back to delhi...
geet smiled...it was a confusing smile...
it was neither seemed a happy smile..nor a sad smile...
uttara painfuly - tu usse sach kyu nahi bata deti...
geet - kaunsa sach...??
uttara - yahi ke tu usse pyar karta hai...
geet - jo hai hi nahi..use maan ko kya batati...
hameer - natak mat kar geet...ye jo natak ka mask pehna hai na tune...nikal ke fek de usse...ye tuze dard ke alava kuchh nahi dega...
geet - vil u both just shut up...mujhe pata hai me kya kar rahi...aur achha hi huva ke maan chala gaya...hope he vil not cum back...
uttara - n wat if he never cums back...
geet looked at uttara blanked...
for a moment dat ferad her...it her sumwhere very hard..may he in her heart...
but she refused to accpet...
geet - even better..wo uski zindagi me khush aur me apni...
hameer angrily - shut up geet..just shut ur so called drama...na tum khush ho na wo...kyu khel rahi ho sabki zindagi ke sath
geet looking away - for god sake..me kisi ki zindagi ke sath nahi khel..mujhe pata hai mujhe kya chahiye aur kya nahi...
uttara angrily - wo hum dekh hi rahe hai...to 5 min pehle kyu ro rahi thi maan ke naam lekar...
geet looked away yet again..
hameer - muh fer lene se sach badal nahi jayega..batana kyu ro rahi thi..koi jawab nahi hai na ab,...
geet - hai mere paas jwab..i just got carried away wid past..dats it..
...
uttara to hameer - y r we even speakin to her..wo bahot badi ho gayi hai..she needs no1..not even us...n we like fools still longing for our old geet...
geet closed her eyes in frustration..
hameer - kya hum bhi chale jaye...tujhe humari bhi nahi jarurat nahi hai ab...
she smiled bitterly wid pain as she replied , " it was great to spent time wid u both..."
...
hameer n uttara got deir answers n left from deir instantly...

n geet...
geet fell on d floar on her knees..breaking down completely...
every is over...
y u came back maan...
u ruined everything once again n left me to die in dis hell...

...

saanse kho gayi hai...
...kiski aahon me...
me kho gayi hun...
...jane kiski bahon me...


she broke down into tears completely...
her past has ruined everything...
d last 2 yrs has veen d worst nightmare of her life...
she sumtimes think...wat if he wud hav not left for london..everything wud hav been same..nothing wud hav changed...
but life cnt be so simple right...

she can feel dat d darkness has engulfed her in his arms...
she is lost in d warmth of loneliness...
upto d extent dat..now she hav started loving dis darkness n loneliness...
she find dem familiar now...
coz dey never leaves her sight...
she has been captured in d bhul-bhulayya of unknown lobeliness...
she cant fin anybody near her excpet d darkness...

manzilon se rahe...
...dhundati chali...
kho gayi hai manzil ...
...kahin rahon me...

she hav tried...
she hav tried enough to find d manzil of her life...
but she herself has lost in d bhul-bhulayya..dat not just d manzil..but she cnt find d road..d way...d raah as well...

she walked so faar dat everything related to her past seem to hav lost sumwhere in path behind...
she didn't even bothered to look wat has eft behind...
she is gone...
far away...far away from her past...

...

kahin to...
...kahin to...
...hai nasha...
...teri meri hr mulaqat me...

hotho se...
...hothon ko...
...chumati...
...rehte hai hum har baat pe...

he locked himself into d bedroom...
breaking down on d floar...
he lost geet forever...d statement gave him immense pain...
d reality was so painfull to accept...
he has lost his best frnd forever..

n now he cnt get in any way...
d beautifull past of deir life started to haunt his present...
dose beautifull moments dey shared now laughs on his loneliness without her...
he could still feel deir hugs n kisses on every stupid reasons...
he smiled tearfully...

his innocent geet..his best frnd geet is lost in dis mean world...

kehti hai...
...fizah jahan...
...meri zameen asaman...

jahan hai tu...
...meri hasi...
...meri khushi...
...meri jaan...

d open window banged closed wid d hit of wild wind...
dat bought him back out of his beautufll past...
his smiled vanished like thin air...
and d fresh layer of tears started...

how vil he make her understand..he didn't mean dose rude words...
it was just his anger dat made him blabber anything stupid...
he himself ruined dere beautifull relationship sumwhere...
he was at guilt...he knew...
how vil he express her wat her happiness means to him...
his words strts from where her happiness n smiles lies...
he smiled wen she smiled...
he giggled wen she laughed...
he lived wen she enjoyed her life...

jane kaha...
...wo duniya hai...
jane na wo...
...hai bhi ya nahi...

jahan meri...
...zindagi mujhse...
...etni khafa nahi...

he went to window n opened it...
winds were roaming wildly...
he knew d storm is soon to cum...d wild rain is soon to cum...
d surrounding was also fighting like his heart...
dere was a storm playing in his heart...

his heart was bleeding wid guilt to be d reason of tears of his geet...
to be d reason of d break up of deir beautifull relationship...
to be d reason of making her feel alone in dis world...
to bd reason of d distance..dat endless distance between deir heart...
he still wish to get back dat beautifull life where dey were best frnds...
where dey would fight wid each other for every stupid yet sweet eason...
where dey wud hug n kisses each other unlimited times a day...
where dey were 1st priority of each other...
where d distance never existed...
and he knew...
it was en END
...
...END OF DEIR SWEETEST FRNDSHIP !!!!!!!!!!!


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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago

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