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part 10
with dat...
tears rolled out from both geet n dadi's eyes...
tears of happiness..emotions..sadness...
everything is so messed...
dat tears r also getting confused...
dadi - thnqq beta...
geet - dadi..aap thnq bol rahe ho...??
dadi smiled - i love u bachha...
geet - dats like a good dadi...
dadi - badmash...
dadi(seriously) - geet...kya sab kuchh pehale jaise nahi ho sakta...
geet went silent with dat...
dadi's eyes filled wid painfull tears...
while geet didn't want to b weak...
geet - dadi...aap sach much chahti hai ke sab kuchh pehle jaisa ho...
dat was a very difficult question for dadi as well...
in 1 way..she want everything like it used to b in past...
while in other way...she cnt bear dat weak broken geet wid tears...she didnt want dat old crying geet who once even thought of ending her life...she didn't want dat soft geet who beard so many bitter truths of life..she liked dis strong geet...
geet - boliye na dadi...
dadi - nahi bachha...nahi..kabhi bhi nahi...
geet smiled painfully - jo jaisa chal raha hai..usse waisa hi chalne dijiye dadi...wrna sab kuchh khatam ho jayega...
dadi - apna khayal rakhna bachha...
saying so dadi cut d call immediately ...
releasing her painfull cry finally dat she was holding throughout d call...
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aftr call geet made her way to her most usual place BAND-STAND...
as it was late evening...
it was crowdless...wid her alone wid sea-shore...
she was sitting on a big stone...
d strong waves splashing over sea-shore...hitting strongly making strong voices n spreading dose lonely drops of water...
wen a cold hand rested on a shoulder...
her endless gaze came to an end aburptly...
she stood up in a jerk startled...
she was shocked to see him hear...
geet - wat u doing here...
sameer - i can ask u d same...
geet - r u following me...
sameer laughed at her dare ...
sameer - r u serious.lolll...me mumbai me naya hu..so visits different places as i get time...
geet relaxed a bit - ohh..alright...
sameer - but wat u doing here so late...dat too alone...
geet - me aksar yahan aati hu...
sameer - alone...?
geet - yes...
sameer - umm..okk...
geet didn't want to hav any talk..as it was her private time...
while he didn't know wat to say as it was just d sec time dey were seeing each other on top of dat 1st 1 was business meeting...
sameer raised his hand a litle...
sameer - shall we sit...
geet - okk..
but sat on d rock side by each other...
geet was looking straight litle lost in dose waves..
while he was feeling cold wid dose cold winds passing around...
he felt odd dat being a gal she is not feeling cold...
sameer - its quite cold na...
geet didn't look at him but answered - im used too...
sameer noticed no inch of emotion on her face...
her cold reation was leaving no subject to b disussed...
sameer - tumhe yahan aana achha lagta hai...
geet - haan...
sameer - hmm...
as it was just strt of june...d rain was not started yet...
both remained silent for sum time...
experincing d beautifull changes in d clouds...dat started to happen all of sudden...
sameer - seems like...rain vil strt in sum time...
geet - hmm...
dats all she uttered lost in herself...
sameer - tum hamesha hi etni shant rehti ho...
geet - its just d second time..we r talking...kisiko jane bagaire uske bare me koi raay banana sahi nahi...
sameer - shayad tum sahi ho...so can i consider u cuming in party tom...
geet - wen did i say dat...
sameer - arre u just said na...kisi ko jane bagair raay nahi banate..to tumhe jan ne ke liye mujhe tumhare sath aur waqt bitana padega...
geet - tumhe mujhe jaan ne ki koi jarurat nahi hai..
sameer was litle disturbed wid dat...
sameer - im sorry..i didn't mean..
geet looked at him now...
geet - me ladki hokar etni practical hu..aur tum ladke hokar etne emotional...
sameer smiled...
sameer - ye jaruri nahi ke har insan ko practical hona chahiye...
geet looked back at d end of sea...sun has hidden completely behind it...
last trances too started fading slowly slowly...
geet - agar is duniya me majboot diwar bankar rehna hai to practical banana jaroori hai..warna log tumhe kulchar apne sapno ka mehel kab bana lenge tumhe pata tak nahi chalta...
sameer - experienced...???
...
dat word brought her back to reality...
WAT D HELLL
wats wrong wid her...
why she is sharing herself wid any1...did she need...no wayzzz
how can she get herself so lost...
ohh goshhh
she suddenly got up...
sameer too got up - kya huva...
geet - i shud leave...rain vil strt soon...
sameer - let me drop u home...
geet - im not a weak bechari woman who needs help even for going home...i hhav my car...
sameer - do u alwz behave like zasi ki rani...
geet - do not joke me...
sameer - sorry...
without saying 1 more she started to walk..
she walked 2-3 steps n tunred again...
geet - my frnds cuming 2night...if dey vil want to cum..we vil b dere at party...
sameer smiled - i vil b waiting for u all...
geet - yaah...
saying so she got disappeared in d crowd of mumbai...
while sameer looked back at dose dangerous waves running towrds him...
n smiled...shooking him head at d stubborn lady...
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in d FLIGHT...
hameer n uttara siting...
hameer - aaj tune marwa hi diya tha...
uttara twisted her lips - me kya karti..galati se mere muh se...
hameer - galati se..ruk geet ka bataunga...
uttara - no..she vil kill me...
hameer - hmmm...but wat vil i get..
uttara sliped her hand into his arms...
hameer watched her suspiciously...
she kissed his cheek lovingly..making baby face...
uttara - plz baby...
he sighed...
hameer - dis is not fair...he made baby face...
while uttara smirked...
while quite away from dem...
maan sitting in private sit...sipping his drink...
maan (in mind) - kya laga tha geet...ke me tumhe nahi dhund paunga...etni narazagi...puchhna hai mujhe tumse...kis galati ki saza di tumne mujhe...datana hai tumhe..khudko mujse etne din door rakhne ke liiye..is baar tumhe dadi bhi nahi bacha payegi...
he was in pain..remembering all dose nights wen she was not dere to feed his hairs keeping his head on her slap...
he was happy dat finally his geet vil b back to him...
he was angry of geet for doing most stupid thing till yet...n dadi also helping...dis much long narzagi nautanki..not fair...
he was sad pf himself for fighting wid her...n creating dis dangerous situation...
if he would b knowing dat geet vil not talk to him for 2 yrs...he would hav never fight wid her ever...
only he knows how much he hav missed her...
he missed her every single moments...
y did she got away from him...yyy
but not anymore.he has found her n he vil never let her go away anymore...
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n most impo*nt he was shocked like hell wen a detective told him dat uttara n hameer going to mumbai...
MUMBAI..????????????
y did geet go to mumbai...
y is she dere...
y is she not wid dadi...
y is she dere all alone...
who took care of her...
she is basically an idiot..she doesn't know how to take care of herself...
all she knew was how to take care of him...
how did she manage dere...
n impo*ntly..how is she able to stay away from dadi...
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QUESTIONSSS
unlimited questions...
n no answer...
n wid clouded mind...
he reached mumbai along wid hameer n uttaran offcorse d FLIGHT...:P :P
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TING TONG
TING TONG
TING TONG
TING TONG
...lolll
at last hameer hold uttara's hand who was continuously ringing d bell like an impatient child...
geet running towrds door..rolled here eyes...
n finally opened d door...
geet - mujhe ek bell me hi sunayi deta hai...
uttara - to fir 4th ring ke baad kyu khola...
hameer - tu pagal hai kya...
geet - u still doubt of her...
uttara rolled here eyes n got in...
hameer - jaldi se kuchh khane ke liye la..bahot bhuk lagi hai...
geet - pata hai mujhe..nothing new...
uttara rolling on sofa - jaldi la na...mujhe methi ke parathe chahiye...
geet rolled her eyes as she knew how much uttara loves methi ke parathe...
geet shouted - mira tai...
mira tai(kam wali bai) - la rahi hu mam...
mira came out of kitchen wid many dishes...
uttara's n hameer's tongue became wet watching d yuppy dishes...
n both jumped on food like hungry lion...
geet rolled her eyes...
SLOWLY GUYSSS
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NXT MORNING...
all on dining table...
uttara - no office 2day..ok..
geet - right...
hameer - dis is not done geet...hume hAJI ALI jana hai..last time nahi ja paye the...
geet - fine...
uttara - aur sham me party me jayenge...
hameer - par party hai kiski...tumhare kisi mumbai ke frnd ki hai kya...
geet - actually ek client hai..usne invitation crds diye hai...
uttara - kya fark padata hai..importnt ye hai ke party boring na ho...
hameer rolled his eyes...
geet - dnt worry..business party nahi hai...so i dnt think it vil b boring for u..but ofcorse it vil b for me...
uttara - tujhe business parties kaise achhee lag sakti hai...
geet - kyunki waha pe sab apne kaam se kaam rakhte hai...
hameer - enough of it..be fast..we need to leave soon for HAJI ALI...
uttara (seriously) - 1 min hameer..
hameer could make out d seriousnes in her voice...
uttara - i need to tell u sumthing importnt...
geet - wat is it...
uttara - kal maan tere bare me puchh raha tha...
geet closed her eyes in anger..
hameer feared watching her angry face..
uttara - tu gussa mat ho na..humne usse kuch nahi bataya..par wo bahot pareshan lag raha tha...
geet - he is in MUMBAI...
hameer + uttara - WATTT...par tujhe kaise pata...
geet angrily got out of chair...
geet - bcoz i know him...tum dono ne mujhe kal phone par kyu nahi bataya...
she asked angrily...
hameer n uttara's breath chocked in deir throats...
geet - m asking u both sumthing..speak up...
uttara - hume kya pata tha...ke...
geet stared at her angrily...
hameer - tujhe aaj bhi usse etna dar lagta hai...
wid dat both uttara n hameer started laughing like idiots not understanding d seriousness of situation...
geet got more angry n left to take out her car...
hameer n uttara followed making baby faces...
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HAJI ALI ( dose who dnt know dis places...let me tell all frnds..its 1 of very famous spots of mumbai...its a very very beautifull dargah..great place... )
geet did wear 1 green colored top wid white legins n white dupatta...
she did look very beautyfull n seren...
d place was crowded yet silent...pure...
dey bowed deir head in humblesness...
gals had deir head covered wid dupatta's while hameer used his hanky for it...
dey remained silent for sumtime..having deir personal time wid GOD...
d only person..dey could share anything n everything...
every fact of deir life...
aftr sitting in front of god for sum time...
dey got up...
geet n uttara were standing near a pillor tieing d MANNAT KA DHAGA...
while hameer was bowing in front of a babaji walking from dere...
just den
...
geet eye fell on entarnce...
n she saw a walking MAAN entring main hall...
as maan raised his eyes...
his eyes met hers..
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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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