MRITYUNJAI-Some Love Stories Never Die MGff cmpltd - Page 67

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

but some people like me love ur stories..
please write for us...

Originally posted by: sanjh89

ARREY YAAR,
all my fav writers get upset whn they dnt gt lkes n cmmnts ...its obvious also...bt b4 reachng ny decision i vl lke u to go thru follwng points, y u all r nt read mch:
in ur writng
1. MAAN s nt insanely arrogant. he considers others existence
2. GEET s nt innocnt to the xtnt of dumbass
3. MAANEET in thr frst meetng do nt fght lke teenagrs they dnt feel electrc shock on smple touch
4. they dnt jump one othr Kissng n continu dong so in evry scnd para tl epilogue
5. they dnt mke luv in a way tht if a 5th grade read it he/she vl also knw hw to do it
6. Concentration s mre on feelngs thn heavy dialogues
7. characters r added fr a purpos nt fr a feplica of daily soaps vamps or mothers
8. u dnt evn leave detail of flyng bird out of scene
9.d mst imp. factor MAANEET frst knw ech othr thn fall fr one anothr
SO, u c , u may nt hv quantity bt u sure hv quality readers...
thus, dear continue writng fr us.they r a ventilator fr us in absence of dear MAANEET...
dnt hv double thoughts...

love

SANJH

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

I just got to read this amazing piece of writting...is so beautiful,like reading an old novel..thank u for these wonderful writting and art infos

Hei friends thanks a lot for ur lovely comments .. I am proud to have such beautiful readers .. love u all .. here is d next part .. consider it as a gift of MSK's B'day😊 .. love u all

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Part 17: The Owl

Maan was kissing Geet as if without it he will die. They broke out from the kiss and before Geet could understand anything Maan swept her feet from the ground and carried her to her room keeping her body on his shoulder. Open window of her room welcomed them. For the first time her bed went ragged bearing ardent love of two man and woman. They were separated for twelve days but they lived hundred years of love in that one day and another hundred years of love at night.

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Devdutt the man who is respected by everyone, who washed away the corruption of Madanmohan temple, the man who gave shelter women like thammi once, the knowledgeable, honest, dignified man can't be seen anymore. The man who was sitting in this murky room was only a ghost of old Devdutt. Everything in his room was scattered here and there. Only one clay lamp was giving faint light. Devdutt observed the dim flame for a long time. He poured oil in the dia and the blaze flare up in a moment, brighten everything but the shadow of the dia became darker instantly. Love is a strong emotion. It works in different way with different person. Geet was like the flame, her love brighten Maan's life where Devdutt's love for her hurled him in endless obscurity. He lost his heart, soul, sense everything.. he lost himself somewhere. A tear drop fell from his eyes. He remembered the first day when Geetasri came here, it was not love at first sight for him, it wasn't possible she was only sixteen and he was twenty four. But he doesn't know when he fell in love with her. He can't remember how many times he used to still glances of her while making her study, how he longed for confessing his love, how many times he fascinated her in his arms. He sacrificed his values, his morals, ethics, everything which was very part of his existence for Geetasri. His conscience whipped him every day, his sins never let him meet his own eyes, still this pain was acceptable to him more than losing her. He forgot the dream of heaven and embraced the burning hell with the hope one day Geetasri will cure all his burns with her love but today's incident destroyed his every hope.

Devdutt cried but shaded little tears. A women can cry a lot and with this wash away their pain, anger and all dark emotions, so even after being much emotional than their opposite sex emotion rarely over power them. They can cry easily, they can smile easily, forgetting and forgiving is easy for them. But men are totally opposite. They suppress their emotion and end up getting suppressed by it. By the end of the night Devdutt's tears dried and blaze of jealousy and anger replaced his pain. His mind has only one thing in it, "I have already buried my conscience with the weight of sins, now if I have to kill it forever I will do it but won't let that sculptor to win, Geetasri is mine and she will be mine only."

Devdutt didn't sleep. The last lamp has been blow away long time ago. The thick gloominess was giving Devdutt weird feelings, as if this darkness is a part of him. It is very easy to think in the absence of light, his dark fantasies also spread their wings in darkness. It was almost end of night when a loud knock in Devdutt's door. A worker of temple entered to inform him about the presence of royal messenger. Devdutt's chain of thought broke. "Royal messenger in this hour! It must be important" he thought. The messenger entered the room and vowed.

"Mohantji Sultan (king) Hussain Shah has attacked Orissa and has started destroying many temples and monastery. He has demolished Gobardhan temple. Almost everyone is killed there except the youngest priest. Somehow king left him alive. Here is the message from Maharaj." He handed a rolled parchment to Devdutt.

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2 days ago, incident of Gobardhan Temple

It was early morning; anyone in Gobardhan temple wasn't awake. Priests were still in deep sleep, in the arms of some devdasis in the comfort and extravagance of all luxury. Shrill sound of horse hoof stirred them a little. And within a span the sound pierce their ear and brain. It was not sound of one or two horses but almost fifty armed men riding on horses intrude the temple breaking down all the barrier and defense like grass from the root. Gobardhan temple turned into a mess, dust of horse's hoof clouded the sky of the temple and their united whinny filled the thin air. Old idle priests couldn't comprehend where to go, how to save their own life. Gobardhan temple was a big temple, much bigger than Madanmohan temple. It was almost a mine of precious possession. Gold, diamond and many different expensive jewels were there in the temple. Little was adorning the deity and lots were saved in priests' own places. They peeped out from their respective rooms and tried to reach the store room with hope of obtaining some riches before ran away from the place. Greed is really very funny sometime, it can push a person to his end to fulfill its hunger and the person just blindly follows it till death like a carnivorous tree, silently swallow them inside it. Some priests were killed just like this before they reach the gold. Some of them were a little more intelligent, who just gathered the possession they have in their room and ran away. Gobardhan temple had hundred of Devdasis, some were killed in this mess, some ran away and some of them were captured and taken away by Sultan's soldiers. They have another miserable life to live any way none cares about them, they exist only in the bed of men nowhere else.

Shantanu was in his way to Maharaja's place. Maharaja has invited him specially in a letter. He was away from the temple while he heard about the happening. He returned but till then the jingle of loud moan, cry of dying men and woman and metallic sound of sword has been silenced. The temple was looking like a deceased fort, corpse are lying here and there. Blood is oozing out from every stones .. the soul of the temple was died ages ago, today it was the final extinction of the decayed body. Shantanu entered the temple. Sultan's soldiers were busy in collecting the pile of treasure. Shantanu entered the garvagriha. Some soldiers were removing the ornaments from the body of deity. After they were done with ornaments their hands approached the deity of Bishnu. The deity was made of a precious material indeed. They were about to throw it in their collection box Shantanu stopped them. His voice echoed in the stony room,

"Take everything but leave the deity."

Everyone in the room turn to look at the source of voice. They can't believe their eyes a thin young man, with no arms in his hand can sound so fearless. After a split second soldiers came back in their conscious. A ordinary man daring them, they can cut his audacity with their sword in a go. But before they could move someone entered and sound of his foot step just muted them.

"you are daring your life for a mere statue?" HIS calm baritone rang.

Shantanu turned his eyes from the soldier to the man. Like his voice his majestic presence made everyone dip their head but Shantanu. His beautiful eyes had a glimpse of reverence but not fear.

"It is not a mere statue to us, it is our belief." Shantanu replied.

"is your belief is more important than your life. You know those soldiers can separate your body and head in a while. Don't you have fear of your life young man?"

"I have" Shantanu smiled. "but if today I can't over power my fear I won't be able to see at own eyes. This fear is much bigger than the previous."

"Does religious belief is to be saved at the cost of life?" The Man asked.

"I am not saving my religious belief, I am saving the belief of thousands of people who worship this deity .. if today soldiers insult this deity, their wound will never be cured. Future generation will never forgive us." Shantanu replied calmly.

The man fixed his eyes on Shantanu's face for some time then ordered the soldiers, "keep the deity on its place with due respect."

With that the man turned back and approached towards the gate of garvagriha. Shantanu took the deity from a soldier's hand. "Thank you Sultan." He mumbled. Sultan Hussen Shah* .. the Akbar of Bengal smiled back and went away. Shantanu again started his journey.

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Devdutt read Maharaja's letter. "Hussen Shah has been retreating to Bengal and on his way demolishing and looting many temples and monasteries." Devdutt once thought 'is it true? Sultan Hussain Shah is known for his secularism, then why this contradiction.' He again concentrated in the letter. "Sultan's soldiers has already attacked and looted Gobardhan temple and Madanmohan temple may come on their way. Though Sultan's soldiers are tired and it's possible they over look Madanmohan temple still I will send my soldiers as guard. But it will take time so try to appoint some local men for the security of temple."

Devdutt went through the letter for the second time. A crafty idea took over his mind. He was kind of happy with the news of Gobardhan temple, now at least there won't be any trouble from that side. In the same time it can be an excuse to send Maanendra away from the temple. He thought for a second and asked the messenger to take rest and called Rajlaxmi.

"Yes Mohantji." Rajlaxmi came inside and asked with a straight face.

"you don't have to prepare those girls for Gobardhan Temple and I also have a news that will make you happy." Rajlaxmi didn't reply only frowned. "Gobardhan temple is destroyed by Sultan Hussain Shah and almost everyone including the priests has been killed."

Last news came to Rajlaxmi like a thunder storm. Almost everyone killed! She doesn't care about anyone or anything there but Shantanu. What happened with him? Before Devdutt could ask anything else Rajlaxmi cried, "What happened to Shantanu. Do you know anything about him?"

"Shantanu?" Devdutt knotted his brows.

"Shantanu .. the youngest priest of the Gobardhan temple."

Rajlaxmi's anxiety was written on her face. She was trying to fight with her tears. Devdutt easily could sense the tempest going on inside her. He was thought for a moment. Rajlaxmi can make his work easier.

"I don't know what happened to him."

"Can't you send any man to find what happened there?" Rajlaxmi sounds so helpless.

Devdutt felt sad for her but no way can he be weak now.

"I could but Madanmohan temple is not secure now. We need more men here, I can't lose anyone now."

"Can't you do anything?" Rajlaxmi sounded so helpless. Devdutt couldn't face her and turned his back. 'God, why every time you make me fill guilty in front of this girl. But I have to buy my love at the cost of my remorse.' Devdutt mumbled in his mind. Rajlaxmi leave the place silently. She has only one hope now Maanendra and Devdutt knew her hope is his game too. He knew Maanendra has Kshatriya blood in his blood. He doesn't know him much but he could understand that abducting his lady in his presence is next to impossible.So his exit from here will crave his path to reach Geetasri.

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Geet was sitting at her favorite corner of her room. Once she used to spend hours in front of this mirror admiring her own beauty. But now her ornamentation remains incomplete, she didn't realize her dupatta has fallen down from one shoulder and reaching the floor. Her uncombed wet hair was flowing disobediently in the fresh air of morning. Even sitting in front of it she is lost in a world where beauty isn't substantial, the world of nothing but everything. Her spell broke with a warm touch on her bare shoulder. She didn't realize when Maan wake up from his sleep, get dressed and stood behind her.

"It's morning. I have to leave. Before that I will do your embellishment in my own hand. Do I have the permission?" Maan spoke in a low husky voice in her ear. Geet really didn't understand if he is really seeking permission or the last line was only to tease her. Does he really need any permission? She sighed and nodded in yes.

Maan removed her dress and replaced it with a royal blue lehenga and choli. Gradually Geet's exposed skin was covered by ornaments. Maan adorned her the way a painter put color on his painting and the mirror reflects both the painter and his painting in its canvas. He knotted the choli so firm; like his coarse hands crush her breasts mercilessly the fabric grasped her delicate possessions making her moan. The next moment a long thin chain started dangling from her neck, hovering over her bosom like Maan's lips travel over them. Maan put the waist chain on its place, it touched her waist like Maan block her way from behind. Geet felt Maan kissed her everywhere though his lips didn't touched her.

Maan turned Geet. He fixed his deep calm eyes on her. 'A Goddess has descended from heaven wrapping the sky on her body' Maan thought looking at her but didn't utter a word. Geet's hazel eyes wanted to see his reaction but Maan was busy to arrest Geet's image in his heart. Nobody spoke, only their eyes spoke in silence. Maan made her sit on the stool and he went on his knee. The anklet was still longing to go in its place. Maan hold her feet, removed her lehenga a little upward and put one anklet there. Maan has hold on till now but her pink feet again fueled his desire, desire to kiss it. Geet's conservative mind every time gets alarmed whenever he touches her feet. She squirmed a little. At the end broke the silence.

"Don't touch my feet; husbands don't touch wife's feet."

"I am your husband and I can touch you everywhere I want." Maan told bluntly and kissed her feet not noticing what effect his words left on geet's face.

Maan again looked at Geet. Her scarlet shy face, lowered eye lids made him confused. He smiled he really doesn't understand when and why this girl becomes coy. May be it is her nature. He put his index finger under Geet's chin to look at her hazel sea. Geet looked at him but her coyness didn't leave her. She knew she has given every bit of her to Maan but his claim over her was always playful, there was a veil of his teasing mischievous way. Today's straight forward statement suddenly made her realize that she is sitting in front of the man, in front of whom her all secret has been revealed and it's the time she must abandon all her inhibitision forever. At that moment she wasn't feeling shy but only trying to gather courage to face Maan leaving all her bashfulness behind. But again her determination failed under Maan's intense gaze.

Maan put the dupatta on geet's head."You are reminding the moment of the night I made you mine for the first time, the night of our wedding. You are just looking like the new bride. Only one thing .." he didn't complete his words. His fingers went through her parting of hair and the eternal sign of suhag made her face glow. She closed her eyes not knowing how to react. This scarlet sign on her forehead is the sunshine of her whole life. It is said red is the color of love to her this red is the color of whole universe. Maan kissed her forehead. Again a while passed without words filling each other's aroma in their heart, sensing only each other's presence against all worldly existence. But the moment broke. Geet hurried to wear her mangtika to hide her sindoor. Maan put the mangtika on her head, "Geet you don't have to hide your sindoor for long, on this Raspurnima your vermilion will be acle to declare its existence under the open sky. I promise." Maan uttered every word from the heart of his heart. A tear drop fell from Geet's eyes with the dream of their beautiful future. She embraced Maan tightly, trying to hear the footstep of beautiful future in the heartbeat of her beloved.

"Geet" Maan called her. He could feel the havoc that was going in Geet's mind.

"hmm"

Maan freed himself from her, "I thought women adorn their parting with sindoor but you made your nose red with it?" He pinched her nose instead of wiping it leaving a trace of sindoor of his finger on her nose.

"so what you say if sindoor fall on nose that means the husband loves his wife a lot." Maan asked with a mischievous smile. Geet missed it and nodded innocently. "And what they say if sindoor falls on wife's lips. Husband kisses his wife a lot? Hmm." Maan spoke brushing Geet's lips with his finger.

"No it's just the opposite, the wife kisses her husband.." Geet stop abruptly, biting own lips. She cursed herself. Her determination was to shed her inhibition not act so bold.

Maan went speechless for a moment and then broke into laughter. Geet was so embarrassed. She knew it will lead Maan with his never ending banter. She even feared if someone hears his voice. But he was in no mood to stop. Taking a deep breath she cupped his face and kissed Maan making him silent. Geet kissed Maan pouring all the passion and desire of her soul. She left her timidity but her tenderness remained in their kiss. Maan let her kiss not projecting himself on her, only enjoying Geet's lips playing on his. But her touch has a strange effect on him that it could break all his resistance and madden his senses to the limit. Geet was at the verge of revoking when Maan's tongue started its game inside her mouth. Geet's dupatta fell from her head and her body gets caged inside Maan's muscular hold. Maan was going to deepen his kiss when a loud knock made Geet alert.

"Maan stop someone is knocking the door."

"Hmm let him wait." Maan groaned in kiss.

"Geet didi open the door please."

Geet knew the voice. "Rajlaxmi! Maan leave, please and hide in the veranda. Rajlaxmi is at the door." Half heartedly Maan withdraw from Geet. Geet opened the door and Rajlaxmi stromed inside.

"Where is Maanendra? Please tell." She cried.

Geet was shocked. "Maanendra! Why you are finding him here? How could he be here? Go and search him at his place." She only tried to cover up without knowing what she is blabbering.

"I have been there too. He is not there, he is not in purana mandir where else can he go. I know he is here. Please Geet didi call him, Only he can help me. I beg you.."

"You don't have to beg Rajlaxmi.." Maan's voice came from behind. Geet silently took Rajlaxmi inside and closed the door.

Maanendra waited for Rajlaxmi to start. "Shantanu .." Rajlaxmi spoke in her sob.

Rajlaxmi described the incident as much she is told by Devdutt. Geet didn't know who is Shantanu, what is Raj's relation with him but one thing she understood he matters for Rajlaxmi the way Maan matters for her. Rajlaxmi wanted to know if Shantanu is alive or not, her heart says he is but if her heart lies then at least he should get proper funeral. Maan looked at Geet seeking her permission to let him go. He could feel Geet's pain. After so many days they were together but only for one day, destiny again wrote separation in their life. But Geet didn't say a single word only bring out the deity of Shri Krishna and give it to him. It was the same deity what He has gifted Geet once.

"Keep it with you. He will save you." Geet smiled. She has not a single tear drop in her eyes. She was right in her words; she doesn't fear the separation any more. Maan left the place at the moment. He climbed down the staircase and looked back. Geet was standing there, she didn't move till Maan faints away from her eyesight.

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Geet spend the whole day with Rajlaxmi. A little dizziness was making her weak. For a second she felt her vision went bleary. She was hungry too but felt like puking just after consuming a little food. She has hardly slept last night. She blushed remembering last night and entered her room. And the next moment a strong smell made her feel more drowsy. She knew this smell, it comes from a flower. She just can't bear this smell. But there was no tree of this flower near her room. Geet's head started aching badly. She get irked and tried to find the source but failed. Her feet tottered badly. She felt thirsty. In the state of giddiness she found a glass and drank the whole sap without thinking from where it has come. Her eyelids became heavy and her senseless body dumped itself on her bed.

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The darkness went darker outside. An ominous silence prevailed everywhere. Only an owl was trying hard to broke the menacing stillness sitting in the veranda but every living creature hated it thinking its hoot an omen. Devdutt entered Geet's room. He looked at outside once more. No, nobody in this temple knows where the great mohant ji is. He shrugged looking at Geetasri. Geet was still lying senseless. He halted beside Geet and then moved towards the back door. He opened the door and went back to sit beside her. It is this girl, who will decide if there is heaven in his destiny or the hell. Sinner or lover what she may turn him, tonight he will live his life with Geetasri. He bent down a little closer. His eyes had a lascivious looks in it. It traveled on her face. She looks more beautiful from close, he thought. His mind was pushing him to go so close from where he can feel her warm breath on his own face. But he stopped in his action thinking he is still in Madanmohan temple and it's not safe. He scooped Geet in his arms and lost into the darkness outside.

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no precap this time.. I know ending is scary hehe .. 😉.. keep guessing 😆

[*Sultan Hussein Shah: was the ruler of Bengal of that time. Known as Akbar of Bengal. Akbar means d greatest may be because of that or may be because of his secularism like The great Aakbar. But history also says during Orissa expedition he looted and destroyed many temples .. I can't get it why this contradiction happened .. I don't even know if he was there or it was his commanders who leaded in Orissa .. any way I respect him n just tried to portray his character in my way]

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First sorry sorry for late comments
as u know the reason
ok now coming to the update
awesome , beautiful, mind blowing,out standing, romantic part
loved it
loved maaneet moments
they r lost in their love and passion where only maaneet and their love exist nothing else matters
their separation made them longed, craved for each other and they so much drowning in their love

now come to devdut
don't know what adjective should I use for this spineless creature
the more I read and the more I hate him
I really don't know how can this man stoop so low
really love can take u in paradise and love can take u also in hell
Love can make u Man who can respect and loved his lover and love can make u sinner who only know snatched the happiness
love can make u selfless and love can make u selfish
like here Devdut a sinner , selfish who only thinks about himself
it's not love
it's obsession
his love became his obsession and he is become mad
pyaar pagalpan hain toh jarur
lekin pagalpan jisse tumahre ashiq ko tabha na kare but jab ohi pagalpan pyaar ko tabha kar de tab oh khatarnak ban jata hain

dev is evil now
dev's obsession will destroy only
Loved the way u compared geet's love make maan rise where dev's love or so called obsession make him fall
loved the way u compare the situation with lamp and the shadow beneath the lamp
it's perfect totally
loved another thing about man and women ,
yes generally man didn't cry and suppressed everything
like devdut didn't cry but make this thing as revenge of his
for devdut it's not love
GEETASARI is a trophy for him
it's his obsession make him things like he has to win geet , and mainly after know and or realize maaneet r together
he is blurring his vission that how can maan get geetasari
but maan didn't have it as trophy but maan win geet's heart and now ruled there
there is the difference between maan and devdut's love
about attack in Gobardhan Temple
I really felt bad but it's common those days, but
what I felt happy or to say in peace when those priest killed by soldiers of sultan
those cunning evil priest r like vulture who takes advantages of religion , who takes advantages of innocents and trust of common people and play with emotions
chi those priests r like vulture
I really felt bad for those devdasi
I still remembered how I cried after read what was happening on Gobardhan Temple
it's so sad those priests used GOD for their own game
those evil priests will rot in hell

I really loved shantanu here
loved his determination
loved the way he saved the deity
loved what he said about Deity
so simple but so firm and powerful

Now again devdutt don't know whenever I felt he will not stoop low but he proved me wrong and commit another sin or mistake

Now he is taking advantages of the sultan's attack to send maanvendra away

How could he

Chi ghin aati hain aise creature se spineless cowerd

Rajlaxmi tensed ro shantanu and devdutt here also took advantage of it

Devdutt want to buy the love

Pyaar, love is not thing to buy It can be only win by ur love, ur affection, ur work, ur care, ur good will but for devdutt it's just a thing where he has buy it

He is committing mistake sin and blaming GOD that y he put him there

Wah what a logic devdutt

So devdutt know he can't raised his filthy eye on geet in front maan so he is sending maan away by trick

Devdutt will definitely rot in hell

Here our maaneet , geet is so lost in her land well no one can say anything as after so many days she got her husband's love and more the things and incidents happen last few days, emotional turmoil, maan's love all r taking over now when maan is near to her she was so much lost in there

Maan's teasing to geet make her crimson.

Loved the description how maan adorned his lady love by jwellery and dress but it's like maan's love adoring her

Well and beautiful described geet's condition there

So romantic yet so beautiful

'A Goddess has descended from heaven wrapping the sky on her body'

Loved this line sply so perfect for geet

Don't know y with the feeling when maan is looking at geet like taking her image in his heart make me thing something will happen

His touch in her feet and geet's reaction and maan's reaction make geet blushed

It's romantically beautiful

Geet's shyness well understand and it's common after loved or claimed by her man or husband still there is shyness and when husband is playfully teaser and this shyness coyness some times it's loved by husband

Still geet try to come out from this shyness

Maan's teasing is going on

Loved the way u desrcibed and compare vermillion and it's color red

Geet's face glowing more as it's natural when her man, husband filling her mang again

So true and agree with this line

red is the color of love to her this red is the color of whole universe

loved how maan promised about the declaration of their marriage in front of whole world on an auspicious day of "RASPURNIMA"

geet's dream will be fulfilled and the beautiful future of together ness of maaneet she has seen in her dream will fulfill

maan know it and the condition of geet's mind is well aware by maan

so he try to ease the situation by his teasing

The fall of vermillion on nose make the story say again

Man or husband loves his wife or woman more if vermillion fall on nose

But along with maan's teasing about vermillion fall on wife's lips

Naughty maan but he make geet able loose her shyness and blurted out the one of the hidden desire

Maan laughed and teased geet more by his laugh but geet feard if some one heard this then what will happen and it lead to shed all coyness and kissed maan and make him stunned

But can guess he loved, enjoyed it throughly ,

Though he stunned and surprised at first but enjoyed it lots also

They lost in their love and passion when there is knock on the door or say knock or the paradise

Geet make maan hide as she fear for maan as still their marriage is hiding from the society and this cruel society make some illogical and useless norms

Rajlakshmi came and search for maan, when geet try hide the fact that maan is there

Rajlakshmi begged and maan came out and both maaneet came to know about

Gobardhan Temple

Though geet don't know about shantanu but can guess what shantanu means for Rajlakshmi

Though maan know geet is sad and the pain geet felt now as again they will be separated but not only for destiny but for some one cruel and cunning trick which make fall maaneet and rajlashmi

But geet also know maan is inside her,he is her soul now so y fear and she gave her Krishna to maan as Shri Krishna will save and protect maan from all evil

This is also selfless love some time this small thing means so big

Geet spend her whole day with rajlakshmi

Geet felt dizziness and nosiatic and vomiting after eating food

Guess it's indicates she is pregnant maan's pyaar ka nishani is there

Let's see

But y m feeling the evil,monster start his work first the flower then that glass

And guessed right there is monster sinner .

How conviently he is trying to put blame as what will Geetasari will make him

Well he already make him self a sinner and find way for hell

His sins ,mistakes r big and it's going on

There is no come back for Devdutt

He lost in his obsession

awesm updt

I really admire your writing my best friend..especially these paras...I don't know from where did you bring so much passion!!! I am just speechless...

Maan removed her dress and replaced it with a royal blue lehenga and choli. Gradually Geet's exposed skin was covered by ornaments. Maan adorned her the way a painter put color on his painting and the mirror reflects both the painter and his painting in its canvas. He knotted the choli so firm; like his coarse hands crush her breasts mercilessly the fabric grasped her delicate possessions making her moan. The next moment a long thin chain started dangling from her neck, hovering over her bosom like Maan's lips travel over them. Maan put the waist chain on its place, it touched her waist like Maan block her way from behind. Geet felt Maan kissed her everywhere though his lips didn't touched her.

Maan again looked at Geet. Her scarlet shy face, lowered eye lids made him confused. He smiled he really doesn't understand when and why this girl becomes coy. May be it is her nature. He put his index finger under Geet's chin to look at her hazel sea. Geet looked at him but her coyness didn't leave her. She knew she has given every bit of her to Maan but his claim over her was always playful, there was a veil of his teasing mischievous way. Today's straight forward statement suddenly made her realize that she is sitting in front of the man, in front of whom her all secret has been revealed and it's the time she must abandon all her inhibitision forever. At that moment she wasn't feeling shy but only trying to gather courage to face Maan leaving all her bashfulness behind. But again her determination failed under Maan's intense gaze.

Maan put the dupatta on geet's head."You are reminding the moment of the night I made you mine for the first time, the night of our wedding. You are just looking like the new bride. Only one thing .." he didn't complete his words. His fingers went through her parting of hair and the eternal sign of suhag made her face glow. She closed her eyes not knowing how to react. This scarlet sign on her forehead is the sunshine of her whole life. It is said red is the color of love to her this red is the color of whole universe. Maan kissed her forehead. Again a while passed without words filling each other's aroma in their heart, sensing only each other's presence against all worldly existence. But the moment broke. Geet hurried to wear her mangtika to hide her sindoor. Maan put the mangtika on her head, "Geet you don't have to hide your sindoor for long, on this Raspurnima your vermilion will be acle to declare its existence under the open sky. I promise." Maan uttered every word from the heart of his heart. A tear drop fell from Geet's eyes with the dream of their beautiful future. She embraced Maan tightly, trying to hear the footstep of beautiful future in the heartbeat of her beloved.

It has been ages Sayanee since u updated,but thank God that u did.,...u know i've been really anxious to know what devdutt be planning & now wen i know i'm really scared for my maaneet.Maan's deep love & geet's submission & trust is so devine, & my heart was restless wen maan was leaving & then turned around to look at geet...it felt that dey might never meet again but then geet's words rang in my mind-"now she's not scared of separation" as deir souls r attached ,i jst hope geet's soul not get tattered.

Wow,u write so beautifully, like the twist,knt wait to c whats next