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ExpectoPatronum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Nice update...
But i want geet to be more sensible in nature...

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

thx 4 beautiful update...

with full of love n passion...

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

seems like maan understood everything n that is y he said you r mine only...

n as for raj...she now knows y she was crowned the head devdasi...n not geet...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#244

oh it was lovely 😊
ofcourse krishna is my fav too 😊

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

awesome

i really love reading this

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panchaali

@panchaali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Oye mere sautan...Krishna is my first love too...😊

"Loved you before knowing love...

Wanted you before recognizing desire...

Knew you are God...

And are to be worshiped...

Did this before knowing any rituals...

Craved for you dream,still I do...

As I grew I know...

You are everything I know..."

This is for my first and akhri love and you wrote awesome, always love stories from purans,so did not find any boring things here rather it was an interesting part for me

Edited by panchaali - 13 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Happy New Year...

part 9
nice part...
looks like Maan is getting to know many truths and past...
so thats the reason Thammi said the season of love is back...
was she mentioning her history and Maan Geet's now love story?
and what happened to Rajalakshmi and why is she blaming Geet for her condition and whats with Dev?
cont soon dear...

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TanuDDian

@TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

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Ana90

@Ana90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

yah so right ... India me sayed hi koi ladki hogi jisse Krishna se pyar nahi hua😛... he is LORD KRISHNA for others but for me he is my DARLING!!😉

ohhh wat a relief diii...thank god ki aapka pahela pyarr krishna hai...😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
iska matlab mera rasta clear...bcz mera to pahela nd aakhri pyarr MAAN hai...❤️❤️❤️❤️
kyunki mujhe yeh KABHI SAUTAN KABHI DII wala khell achcha nei lagg raha tha😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
and nw abt da story-----mujhe bohot pasand aya...bt kuch doubt hai
1.yeh devendra mujhe samajh nei aa raha hai...isne geet ko bachaya ya fir bohot badi jal mein fasane wala hai??
2.maan k guru ji bhag kyun gaye???
3.maaneet k beech itna kuch hua😉😉😉😉😉nd kisine bhi notice nei kia???
4.aapne rajlaksmi ko change karke achcha kia...bt jahan tak mujhe yaad hai rajlakshmi geet se choti thi...lekin yeh same age ya elder laga mujhe...

geet ka age 23 hai nd wo kuch nei samajhti yeh thik hi hai...i'm 22 nw...nd kuch din pahele main bhi kuch bhi nei janti thi...aajke jamane k ladki hote hue bhi...to geet to bohot conservative ki tarah badi hui hai...its ok...uska age reduce na kijie...
nd aap character ko critisize karna chahte ho to kijie...mujhe koi prob nei...mujhe sirf KARNA ka character bohot pasand hai...nd god mein se saraswati nd durga...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: Ana90

yah so right ... India me sayed hi koi ladki hogi jisse Krishna se pyar nahi hua😛... he is LORD KRISHNA for others but for me he is my DARLING!!😉

ohhh wat a relief diii...thank god ki aapka pahela pyarr krishna hai...😉
iska matlab mera rasta clear...bcz mera to pahela nd aakhri pyarr MAAN hai...❤️
kyunki mujhe yeh KABHI SAUTAN KABHI DII wala khell achcha nei lagg raha tha😳
and nw abt da story-----mujhe bohot pasand aya...bt kuch doubt hai
1.yeh devendra mujhe samajh nei aa raha hai...isne geet ko bachaya ya fir bohot badi jal mein fasane wala hai??
2.maan k guru ji bhag kyun gaye???
3.maaneet k beech itna kuch hua😉nd kisine bhi notice nei kia???
4.aapne rajlaksmi ko change karke achcha kia...bt jahan tak mujhe yaad hai rajlakshmi geet se choti thi...lekin yeh same age ya elder laga mujhe...

geet ka age 23 hai nd wo kuch nei samajhti yeh thik hi hai...i'm 22 nw...nd kuch din pahele main bhi kuch bhi nei janti thi...aajke jamane k ladki hote hue bhi...to geet to bohot conservative ki tarah badi hui hai...its ok...uska age reduce na kijie...
nd aap character ko critisize karna chahte ho to kijie...mujhe koi prob nei...mujhe sirf KARNA ka character bohot pasand hai...nd god mein se saraswati nd durga...

Anu thanks for ur comment... itni khus hone ki zaroorat nahi... Krishna is a common love... my ultimate to MAAN hi hai😆

now about the story...

1st answer: Devdutt(not devendra) ... ki intention kya hai kyun hai thats a mystery ... everybody has tried to solve it.. see the comments some are right ... rest u will know in further updates

2nd Answer: I told there the priest of the temple came to know about their affair n he could even kill him... coz in those days priests were very powerful in society ... even stronger than d kings

3rd answer: the veranda where uglies r curved is a lonesome area ... I told it in 3rd update... n Maan's place is also a lonesome one... its out of the temple n nobody goes there... so u can understand... or abhi kisine dekh liya to story hi khatam ho jayegi😉

4th answer: in upcoming updates u will see the incidents of her life has made her matured ... more matured than Geet.., so I wanted her to look like a older than her age

n Anu I also like Karna a lot... undoubtedly the best character in the epics... n me too worship Ma Durga