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Posted: 13 years ago
"Heavenly erotic...
So mundanely romantic..."

"Never knew what is love and how does it feel'..

One day when I felt what is life-

Found my heartbeat is no longer mine,

Every single bit of it beats with your smile,

Every single part of it wants you to be mine.

Every single breath of mine promises to be yours'

Every single footstep of mine want step with yours.

No moment of life want pass without you'

Feel the bless of love whenever I see you.

See the wide sky stares at your beauty,

And the Sun in that sky worship you as its deity,

Raindrops feel thirsty for one touch of your skin,

Restless wind caress you while it does spin,

See the earth's eager await for the touch of your feet'

The powers of the universe also consider you a dream.

Only the Highest power can match your divinity'

Then why do you show me your celestial beauty!

I am nothing but a mere man

And before the Goddess of love-

I am the WORSHIPER."...

Well I am nothing compered to Vidyapathi, but dedicate my little poem for this creation of yours.

Edited by panchaali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

waiting for next update...😍


I am sorry for d late dear... actually I write another ff... n my sis too write ffs n we use same cp for writing n updating so it takes some time... I am starting to write the next part from today... will update tomorrow or on MAANDAY😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta


I am sorry for d late dear... actually I write another ff... n my sis too write ffs n we use same cp for writing n updating so it takes some time... I am starting to write the next part from today... will update tomorrow or on MAANDAY😊

honestly saying m very desperate to read d next part as dis ff is concentrate on historic events nd m really intersted in all d historic moments...

hope to get next update soon😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wooow!!!

I'm speechless...I read all the parts in one go...didn't even skip a line

It's sooo beautiful!!

Pure art.

Amazingly written

I was completely involved in this FF while reading it.

I loved the part where Geet says that you carve perfect dolls just dolls not humans ,not expressions

Oh God!! I had goosebumps while reading the intro.

It's really enchanting and magnetic..I'm in love with your Maan and Geet.

I loved the part where Maan and Geet went to watch a drama...simply amazing

And Part 8...beautifully written and the verses you have used are beautiful.

Everything is so pure and beautiful

I have no idea how many beautiful's I have used in this comment

I'm really finding it difficult to form sentences to praise your work

And the songs you choose are just so perfect and the detailing you give are amazing!!

(believe me...I have downloaded the rasiya song and I'm still listening to it !!)

I enjoyed reading about devdasis and Amropali .

Truly amazing.

Please continue soon.

Got to know about this FF while reading your other FF Saamne wali khidki

I loved it...and that's y started reading this and I read all parts in one go.

I'm sorry for this small comment after enjoying your FF a lot..I'm really finding it difficult to form sentences to explain my feelings!!😳

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey SAYANEE, here's ur comment...
1st of all, sorry for late comment... had been too much busy...
sab jaga comment nahi kar payi hu me...
coming to the update...
it was awesome...
poor Geet got jealous of all,
but usse kya pata Maan to uspe hi fida hai...
Thammi, Maan and Get meet was very sweet...
pagal ladki, apni thammi se bhi jealous ho gayi...
and their MILAN was very much passionate and lovely...
very nice songs have been used...
and the pictures are also well edited...
usually I dont like Maaneet edited pix, but these are very well blended to go with the story and also look very much real, just like the pic behind, u hv put in the 2nd pic, just like the uglies...
continue soon...
waiting for the next part...
love u loads, keep writing...


I dont know if u know or not, but evn i hv written a story,,,,
its a simple SS named Blood Relations... I wud love it if u read it and comment...
her's the link below...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1956711/blood-relations-epilogue-pg-138
acha laga to plzz like, and bohot acha laga to comment... lolzzz



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...

both r drenched in love...☺️

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago


Hei MRITYUNJAI readers I am changing my Rajlaxmi ... as my best friend and sis said the girl I chose before doesn't look good in Indian attire n they didn't like the pic... I felt Srishti looks nice and sweet... though I didn't like her as Manjari but I like her a lot as Sobha in Sobha Somnath Ki... she really looks good in traditional dresses...

N sorry for late.. I had a block for some time but now I am writing and hopefully will update it tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
when r u updating dear... Waiting here
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ursrithika

Your fiction is sooo powerful dear... to the extend, its not leaving my thoughts and mind... I feel connected to it in some other level... I dont know... I love history... I am passionate about it... I believe and is crazy of those times, and read a lot about it... May b 'coz of that i feel so... but, from the day first, i read the prologue of ur FF, it endorsed its name in my heart by itself... the Title... the captions of each part... the banner picture everything and everything, is unique...


ITS ONE SUCH GREAT FICTION, WHICH I WILL KEEP A COPY TO READ AND READ AGAIN...

Thanks a looot dear... everytime, i read the part, I want to comment on your thread... but, after reading the update... i will b gone... Will no more feel like saying or typing anything... Will completely get immersed in its feeling... Yest I read the 8th part and same thing happend again..SO today, i am writing to you, to let you know... How much I love your Fiction and your writing way... Keep it gal...

You have miles to go... and conquer many hearts... A Small gift from me.. A Yellow Rose... For our Friendship... 😊



Thanks a lot for ur comment😊 ... plzzz do comment dear don't forget😛... I crave for them😭... it inspires me a lot⭐️... n a special thanks n big hug for ur friendship🤗 ... loved ds yellow flower❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

i competed reading all parts

cud only say i am speechless
ur ff is exceptionally beautiful
outstanding

i felt like i am reading an epic..a beautiful epic n amazing tale of love

every line in this ff is superb loved it a lot..
cont soon dear cant wait to read more..


awww .. I am obliged for this wonderful comment😃... an epic!!!⭐️... love u for ds❤️... n sorry for the late😭... me humesha late ho jati hu chahe kitni bhi jaldi karne ki kousis karu😔... sorry

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